
This Man Is Not Very Calm
这个男人不太冷静
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.3M Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- English
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568Chapters
27.8kRecommendations
4.8kFans
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Every night around midnight, I start rereading books I've finished reading to see what the authors are up to now. Today, I came across "The Savior" and saw that the author is practically dead now, which made me a little sentimental. To be honest, I'm getting tired of the Naruto fandom's constant simplistic plots and conspiracy theories. I wish I could see the author write another Naruto story that's as good as, or even better than, "The Savior." 🙂
Disappointment
The first Naruto story was so well-written, with so many characters to explore. The second, the Sand Village story, lacked depth. And what is this story now? If it were about a rich kid who doesn't care about fame or fortune, then so be it. He'll just continue living like this, never reaching Platinum rank in his lifetime.
I still prefer the author's Red Sands.
So if you're going to write a novel, just write it. If you don't have the skill, don't try to cram in your own personal opinions. Don't make it sound like you're some pretentious intellectual; it's not worth reading at all. Just be simple, straightforward, and enjoyable.
Go write Naruto; there are only a handful of fans now. Go write something about not killing indiscriminately.
Honestly write Naruto. Remove your excessive understanding of the Naruto world, increase the storytelling and slice-of-life elements. Even 1 million words would be better than your millions. Your books, *Red Sands* and *Savior*, showcase your writing skills. The main problem is that 80% of your book is just brainstorming and adding various settings, which is unnecessary. Without a compelling story, who can read it? You could easily create a completely new world and story yourself.
Naruto, the ninja world's ice-breaking family, has been discontinued; discontinuing a character can easily ruin one's reputation.
Hey Fan, Naruto needs updating too! We can't favor one over the other!
It's a really good book, but not many people read it.
I felt the story was really well-written by the end. The romance was okay, and there weren't any major flaws in the career aspect. The protagonist's special abilities were practically nonexistent, otherwise I would have been quite upset. It's a pity it's not popular.
Wow, this looks pretty good so far! What's the title all about? I've seen it a few times before but never clicked on it. I was really looking for something to read, but after clicking in, I realized it's quite interesting!