Naruto the Savior

I had to read the last 300 chapters. The pace in the later stages was too slow. Overall, it was good. The more I read the 80 extra chapters, the more I wanted to read them. Please update them more. I like reading them daily.

Disadvantages: There are often long paragraphs of psychological descriptions, and the long paragraphs of text are not divided into paragraphs, which affects the reading experience. There are typos in almost every chapter, and I almost never check it myself. The protagonist is always doing useless work inexplicably, feeling sad about this and worrying about that. The real plot is basically the same as the original story of saving the mother, with no real achievements. The protagonist's intentions are a bit false.

The following is purely a personal opinion: The story told in this book is very new. Putting aside the self-doubts of the protagonist and complicated explanations, this book takes the will of the ninja world as the core and tells a story of recruitment of professional managers. The Ninja World is like a big company. There is only one shareholder on the board of directors behind it, and that is The Will of the Ninja World, which can control the invisible [destiny]. Strong men of all races can apply for the general manager position of this company as long as they are strong enough (close to the Sixth Level). There is only one requirement for recruitment in the ninja world: ensuring a stable cycle of energy. This request first rejects those outside Otsutsuki-The ninja world earns "money" and the ninja world "spends", but they are not allowed to take home a single cent. It sounds a bit mean, but that's probably what happened. Otsutsuki who ran away after absorbing the energy would never be recognized by the ninja world. Thousands of years ago, all races (including the creatures of the three holy places) lived on the earth. The ninja world did not say who it favored. Whoever had more numbers and had a greater "desire" to control would be more obedient to whose words the ninja world would listen. As a result, the uninvited guest Otsutsuki came, killed a large number of native residents, planted trees to convert into chakra, and stole natural energy. Naturally, the ninja world was disliked, so the ninja world used its influence on [Destiny] to help the Six Paths Sage brothers rebel against Kaguya Otsutsuki and seal them. Of course, "maybe" it also helped Kaguya with the back stab style before. (After all, the will of the ninja world only depends on the results. It can choose the latter between Kaguya and the two good sons. So it is normal to choose the dumber Kaguya compared to the more powerful one. It can also explain why Kaguya can successfully backstab the one) Then six paths Relying on the merits of sealing Kaguya, Sennin successfully became the first general manager of the Ninja world after Otsutsuki's invasion. However, humans were disliked by the Ninja world because of their misbehavior during Kaguya's rule. Later humans were no longer able to freely use natural energy. But the Six Paths Sage still prefers humans. Faced with two questions raised by the ninja world: ① How to maintain the balance of natural energy, spiritual energy and chakra; ② How to deal with the coming Otsutsuki. The plan he gave was to use humans as the main body, establish a pure land, pass down the Five Elements Ninja Sect, and use the pure land to maintain the energy balance of the ninja world. Every soul that enters the pure land will be trapped in the pure land, so that the ninja world can use the pure land to fight them when facing the follow-up Otsutsuki who does not know when. But this leads to an imbalance of yin and yang energy. The yin energy of the Pure Land is too strong, and the yang energy of the human world is too strong. The conflict between the two makes the barrier between the Pure Land and the Ninja World thinner, and subsequently causes the problem of "reincarnation in the dirty land". For this reason, the Immortal of the Six Paths sealed the Yin-Yang Escape with higher "authority" to limit the emergence of the strong and make the barriers of the Pure Land less easily broken, which made him call himself "the founder of the eternal peaceful order." At this point, the Six Paths Sage did not have enough power to make any major changes. The remaining power was partly transformed into the nine tailed beasts, in order to bypass the will of the ninja world against humans and allow humans to use the chakra of the tailed beasts to regain control of natural energy; part of it was the thousand-year reincarnation of Indra and Asura in an attempt to teach humans the balance of "power and love". After a thousand years of development, big problems arose in the order of the Six Paths. The first is that the thousand-year reincarnation of Asura and Indra has caused the Ninja world to be in chaos, and the balance between power and love cannot be discussed; secondly, the development of sealing technology has given humans the ability to obtain the power of tailed beasts, but humans in the war will only choose to drink poison to quench their thirst, seal the power of tailed beasts into jinchūriki, and dismiss the Sage model that is truly beneficial in the long run. At this time, the three holy places were ordered to take advantage of the crisis or take advantage of it. Fire Robbery provides humans with the power of Sage Mode while taking the opportunity to receive the benefits provided by the [Destiny] of the Ninja World; the third one is the inherently evil Senju Old Ghost and Uzumaki Old Ghost. One develops the reincarnation of the Ninja World and breaks the balance between the Ninja World and the Pure Land. But a thousand years of waiting is still too long. The Sage of Six Paths originally expected that the follow-up Otsutsuki would arrive soon, so he adopted the incomplete plan of "first deal with Otsutsuki's pursuers, and then deal with Kaguya after a long period of repairs." But who would have thought The reflex arcs of the Otsutsuki are so long They haven't sent anyone for a thousand years. On the contrary, Kaguya's seal has begun to loosen. The Sage of Six Paths had no choice but to go with the flow and consider letting Kaguya break the seal first and seal it again. At this point, Kaguya's Will Black Zetsu also took the opportunity to bewitch Madara Uchiha, and a few idiots formed matryoshka dolls to prepare for the implementation of the Eye of the Moon plan. Then the despicable Jellyfish Sage traveled through Konoha, and the desperate ninja hurriedly sought medical treatment. He felt that "soul penetration is also penetration" and did not treat him as an outsider. But Mizuki had doubts about the ninja world. Even if he married and had children, he could not regard the people of the ninja world as his own. While he was conducting research to dig out the foundation of the order of the ninja world, he was worried that he would be rejected by the ninja world. In fact, the Heavenly Punishments in the research are all legal and compliant (in line with the regulations of the General Manager of the Six Paths Sage). People in the ninja world have to be shocked for research, but the Jellyfish Sage is a little frightened and has created many back-ups to protect himself. At the end of the fourth battle, the Infinite Tsukuyomi was launched. When Naruso Six Paths faced Kaguya, one of Mizuki's backhands exploded. An entity clone named "Hope" took advantage of the time when the saviors had no time to care about and the will of the ninja world hesitated to move forward. It merged with the will of the evil god and relied on the pain and obsession of the mortals in the war to sit on the throne of the evil god that slaughtered all humans (immortal). Essentially, it exploded the biggest thunderbolt in the previous general manager's plan - the boundary between the Pure Land and the Ninja world is too thin, the gap between human life and death is not obvious, and all humans are essentially undead - this leads to the "soul", the carrier of spiritual energy, in an unbalanced state. The last general manager made a mistake, and the will of the ninja world was somewhat dissatisfied with Liu Dao's plan. At this time, the Jellyfish Immortal who "accidentally" exposed the Six Paths Immortal's mistake came to apply for the job. On the one hand, he had the merit of preventing the evil god from slaughtering and Kaguya's resurrection. On the other hand, he put forward his own plan: to use a fantasy dream similar to the "aggregation of human consciousness" to reconstruct the Pure Land of Reincarnation and establish a "Land of Underworld" where good and evil are rewarded. This can not only rebuild social conscience, slow down wars, and avoid the pressure of excessive human death on the Pure Land; it can also ensure the normal circulation of spiritual energy; after being formed, it can also be used to fight against foreign Otsutsuki. So this plan was recognized by the will of the ninja world. Although the Six Paths Sage did not trust Mizuki, the prospect of "love" in Mizuki's plan was still very attractive to him, and Mizuki did not pursue immortality or becoming an "eternal god", so he pinched his nose and handed over the soul in the Pure Land to Mizuki. [The second general manager, Jellyfish Sennin, a time traveler with low self-esteem and despicableness, and the most beloved cub of the will of the Ninja world] Mizuki, successfully took over as the general manager of the Ninja world and became the "second Six Paths, the only existence" (Kiri).

This fan novel is okay, I will give it 4 stars for free. The main character does not have all kinds of invincibility and has a detailed explanation of the Hokage system, but if I have to pay, I will give up. It is too licking Konoha, and the character is too mediocre. In order for Koharu to protect Konoha, Sasuke is taught like a saint, and BB has a lot of things. I am Mizuki and I don't have much description of the early stage battles of wits. I recommend reading the Book of the Dead to teach people how to do it. I will give this book 3 stars. It is better than many Naruto fan works. It has an in-depth analysis of the Naruto world and the changes in the thoughts of the time traveler.

It cannot be called an invincible style at all. The protagonist is always running to save his life and has no strength to crush the enemy. The portable style is even more nonsense and does not have this element at all.

After reading Chapter 5, I really felt that the protagonist was forcing the drama, doing useless work and causing trouble for himself. What was the purpose of it? There are so many things to do and so many psychological achievements to make, but no one forces you to do anything, so what are you doing? Wouldn't it be enough to commit suicide if you are impatient with life? I have to go out of my way to make this happen

Salvation! Haha, another leftover mother novel. Regardless of whether your content is about Shengmu, anyway, your introduction is about Shengmu who persuaded me to quit.

After watching so many Naruto fanfics, this is one of my favorites.

Speaking of which, this is a masterpiece that is difficult to copy among Naruto novels. It doesn't talk about system or bloodline, it talks about science, and it feels the same as a wizard novel. It really makes sense when you think about it. After all, Orochimaru, Yakushi Kabuto, and Beiruhu are all scientific, but they don't have enough vision. For example, Orochimaru studied Hashirama cells at first, and later studied the Sharingan. If he knew that the fusion of the two would be ridiculously powerful, he might have been a savior. Orochimaru Salvation Style🤭

This book is the end of Naruto fan fiction. Its technical and philosophical discussions are unparalleled in this genre. I would like to call this book the strongest Naruto fan fiction👍

The reason why this book became boring later on. Largely because the protagonist learned to fly the Thunder God. The Flying Thunder God itself is a deus ex machina-level bug, so Kishimoto asked the owner to retire early. Increase the difficulty crazily in subsequent uses. As a flash-level teleporter, Flying Thunder God is inherently a scammer. After the protagonist learns it, he completely loses the possibility of failure. This is fatal to a novel. Since there is no danger, it is the author's imagination that drives the development of the story. Therefore, in the later period, we can only become more and more imaginative, leading to high prices and low prices. The author hopes to pay attention to one thing in the next book. Ninjutsu such as immortality, space, and time will not appear if they are not used.

This is the most beautiful moment I feel about myself

It's too long-winded. The irrelevant explanations and psychological activities are stinky and long. They are repeated over and over again. The amazing thing is that those long paragraphs of explanations are skipped directly. The viewing experience is actually better. Because I have the patience to read Chapter 184, I really can't stand it, so I abandoned it and deleted it.

This book has a huge flaw. It's not divided into sections. It's very uncomfortable to read.

I have nothing to say, so I'll give you a vote.

Mizuki... Is still the same Mizuki, Konoha... Is not necessarily the same Konoha (yes, just push up)

The setting is rigorous and the thinking is reasonable. But from the perspective of the novel, the story is a bit lacking, and there are also some other minor flaws. There are too many analysis paragraphs, too many theories, too many ideas, and it will become very tiring after reading for a long time. In fact, the text can be more condensed and the analysis part can be laid out more reasonably. This makes people feel more immersed and more comfortable to watch, rather than just piling up your own ideas without processing. Although very logical, it is too redundant. The above are just some personal opinions and suggestions.

After eating a few mouthfuls of something indescribable, I came here to read Ershua's book. All I can say is that if you don't have that kind of strength, don't stand too high. The contrast makes it feel even more disgusting. Now a bunch of people are starting to write about revolution, people's line, and emotional climaxes to trick fools. You can write it as you like, but the greasy plot and wretched protagonist that come with it stand in stark contrast to this garbage. Who would be disgusting? To be honest, looking back, this book at least achieves the unity of the protagonist's worldview and methodology, and there are no inconsistent plots due to ignorance and the author's wretchedness. It's really rare.

If this book were to be animated, one scene would be forbidden and there would be a lot of dialogue and psychological activities. Maybe there would only be one or two scenes in one episode, and the rest would be psychological activities.

This book is a fairy grass. Be convinced. I highly recommend it to new book friends who read book reviews, it will definitely not disappoint.

There are a lot of submissions now. How about you, Lao Fan, become a eunuch and start a new book?

By the way, after the physical clone of Mizuki died, the soul fell into the hands of the Six Paths Immortal who was in charge of the Pure Land. The Six Paths are so insidious, there is no reason why they wouldn't look through the memories of the physical clone's soul and squeeze out the remaining value, right? In other words, the information Mizuki possessed about his previous life is likely to be possessed by Sage of the Six Paths now, including the secrets of Mizuki's time travel, the trio of the Otsutsuki clan, and information related to Boruto...

To be honest, it was written too deeply. There can be most of the private goods in one chapter, but the real plot is only one or two sentences, which is so procrastinating.

After Chapter 700, the protagonist's journey of depression begins. He is suppressed in various ways and has no brains. It can only be said that the toxicity has begun to take effect.

Jiraiya died in the end. The plot had ups and downs at the end, but it didn't feel attractive at all. It became more and more verbose (water?) From the later stages. . . So much so that I skipped faster and faster, and when I saw the final chapter, I still felt like I had completed the task... The overall evaluation is Liancao I also recommend [Let the World Feel the Pain from Now on], which I just finished reading not long ago (Immortal Grass level, but the word count is a bit short of 700,000 words) [Ninja Realm Correction Zone] (above Liangcao is close to Immortal Grass) Finally, I would like to thank the author. Above

Lao Fan, please post a single chapter of the new book on The Savior. I feel like very few people will read it.

Can I see Miyuki becoming Hokage in the extra chapter? The kind with hundreds of chapters.

Author, did you ban the wrong thing? I just didn't go to the starting point for five days, isn't that serious?

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