This Uchiha Is Too Cautious

The previous writing is okay, there are some flaws, but it is not satisfactory. Since catching Isamu Uchiha, there have been various outbursts: 1. You catch a person with the same strength as you in the village (not counting the kaleidoscope), and you actually have a vigorous head-on confrontation with him. You can obviously use the kaleidoscope to solve the battle in an instant. You have to show off, but the reason is actually to hone your own foundation. 2. You fought with Isamu Uchiha for a long time without panicking, and even used the Chidori series of ninjutsu. Do you think the fight between the two was not impressive enough? 3. When you sense that the Uchiha Guards are approaching, you use a kaleidoscope to resolve the battle. Do you still have time to deal with the battlefield at this time? It turned out that the battlefield was really not dealt with. After being caught by Fugaku, Fugaku said, "Although you handled it very cleanly." Yes, it was quite clean. The kunai on the ground were still there, not to mention other traces. 4. Uchiha and Konoha ninjas are also waste. There is a battlefield that has not been dealt with, and there is no way to trace any useful information based on clues. Moreover, the protagonist still did not take Uchiha Isamu out of Konoha, so he found a hidden underground detention within Konoha. Inuzuka's dog, Aburame's bug, and Hinata's white eyes are all decorations? Uchiha's Sharingan should also be able to find something useful with insight, right? In the end, it was Uchiha Fugaku who guessed that it was an Uchiha with his kunai, and finally followed the protagonist and discovered the truth? Can traces of Lei Dun be discovered just by looking at the scene? 5. Not to mention the scene, the entire Uchiha knew that the protagonist had a conflict with Uchiha Isamu. Then they first asked the teacher of Isamu's teammate for news about Isamu, and then asked an Uchiha tribesman for news about Isamu. They also said to him, "Are you worried that I will do something to him?" Then the next day, Uchiha Isamu was attacked and disappeared in the village, and no one could find the protagonist. After Shisui disappeared in the original work, the Uchiha clan directly blamed Itachi and identified him as the murderer without any evidence, but when it came to the protagonist, nothing happened. 6. The character of the protagonist in this book is old-fashioned and overly stable, but I really don't see how stable he is. If I were the protagonist and wanted to catch Uchiha Isamu in a sneak attack, I would launch a kaleidoscope attack at the beginning, causing the other party to disappear without any reaction, and then arrange some means to divert attention, and then find a way to come up with an alibi. Otherwise, just because I have a conflict with Uchiha Isamu, I might be trapped and exposed!

I really vomited, endured all kinds of minor mistakes and large typos, and after seeing more than 500 photos, I was really persuaded to give up. It is said to be a fanfic, and the contents of dozens of chapters are plagiarized from the original plot. It has laid the foundation for hundreds of chapters and tells the story of the protagonist trying to prevent Obito from releasing the Nine-Tails to avoid the death of the Fourth Hokage and restore the hatred of the Uchiha clan in the village. As a result, three chapters of the original plot were copied. The Kyuubi was released, and a large number of Konoha villagers died. At this time, the protagonist actually attacked the Hyuga clan leader to take blood for a small agreement. . One moment, he talks about how patient and stubborn the protagonist is, and then he shows off his trump card in various ways, just for fear that others won't know; The other moment, he talks about how decisive the protagonist is in killing, using his ultimate move to kill passers-by, and when it's time to kill key figures, he talks all kinds of nonsense, just not killing, and never using the ultimate move. One moment, the protagonist goes through a war, even if he gives up his humanity in order to survive. The next moment, he refuses to hurt innocent people, just to maintain his humanity, and another time, he wants to frame the blame. He would rather the people in the village be killed by the Kyuubi. The protagonist's humanity is so damn flexible, truly Schrödinger's humanity. Not even the villains have such double standards! Excuse me, does the protagonist have a split personality? I originally admired the entry point of this work and hoped to see a different Naruto. However, the countless typos, the number of water characters, and the double standards of the protagonist completely shattered my perspective. . . Dissuaded. Goodbye readers, the author will never see you again.

A very good fanfic, with some thoughts and suggestions 1. The protagonist is from the Uchiha clan, but the author is a little too exaggerated about the abilities of Uchiha and Sharingan. It was also mentioned in the original comics that the Sharingan is essentially a tool. A large part of the reason why Madara is so powerful is that he is strong, just like Dai and Kai's eight gates. Some descriptions of abilities are exaggerated, such as Amaterasu, which uses chakra as a combustion accelerant, but it is not stronger than an ordinary fire shield. It has never appeared in the comics to directly burn people to ashes 2. Regarding cell culture and the like, Bai Zetsu is more reasonable (genderless), but Aya's use of Toneri's cells is not very scientific, and the sex chromosomes do not match. 3. There is a bit of OOC about the Third Generation and Orochimaru in the book, and the Third Generation's strength has been significantly weakened. Referring to the timeline before the original work, the abilities of the third generation should be far above those of the Book of Masters. Referring to the battle between Danzo and Sasuke, the third generation should have the ability to fight against second-level or even third-level Susaku Nōhu at the end of middle age (Suzaku is very strong, but not everyone is Madara). The description of the strength of Orochimaru, Jiraiya and others is also unreasonable 4. Regarding the curse seal, this is very different from Xianjutsu. It is just the use of natural energy erosion, while Xianjutsu is the precise control of chakra and natural energy. The curse seal only mixes natural energy into chakra, while senjutsu chakra is a new chakra created based on ordinary chakra and natural chakra. To sum up, this book is a rare masterpiece in fan fiction. The writing is qualified but not a noob, the character settings are reasonable and not brainless. The author is confident in controlling the plot and dares to change the main plot (the Fourth Generation Kyuubi Rebellion, etc.). The disadvantage is that some details and secondary settings can be improved (the better ones in this regard are Naruto: The Savior, Konoha: The Ninja Life, etc.).

To be honest, I was a little disappointed when I saw the free end. In fact, the writing and logic at the beginning were pretty good, but the more I wrote, the more problems it became. The author's writing control was really poor, and good characters and ideas were wasted. It can be seen from the free chapter that the protagonist is a cold-blooded person. Judging from the setting, he should be a cautious person, but caution should not only be expressed in guarding against others. It should be more cautious and careful in dealing with things. But I don't know what the author thinks. All the caution is only used to guard against teammates. The rest is simply difficult to describe. When he was seeking the Sharingan, he went ahead without a thorough plan. He said he should be careful, but in the end he left the dagger as a clue. When he couldn't completely determine the opponent's camp, he revealed the whole plan regardless of the consequences. There are also many logically problematic wits. Fugaku only heard the protagonist say that he didn't care about the Uchiha clan and wanted to stay in Konoha, and he could come to the conclusion that the Uchiha wanted to exterminate the clan. Although the author gave an explanation, I said that the protagonist is a selfish lunatic. Feeling that Uchiha is a burden can make the protagonist say the same thing. The conclusion that is not unique cannot form a logical closed loop at all, and the reason will become very far-fetched. The description of the relationship between the three protagonists is even more uncomfortable. It is understandable that the author now wants to form a relatively antagonistic relationship between the teammates, so why not depict this conflict between the three people in a more reasonable and profound way? Just because they are both deserters, do you start thinking about killing each other? What kind of inhuman brain circuit is this? Lin's incident is a forced plot. Many people want to see Lin rescued. I think the fundamental problem is that the author makes Lin's plot too rigid. It is obviously for Bai Jue and he knows the plot. Is it difficult to put Lin under the radar? This plot makes people walk as if they have stepped on a piece of shit... There are also many details. The eternal sneer and mysterious smile make people unable to complain. You might as well use some adjectives to describe it... The character is established through repeated inner confessions, but the behavior pattern is completely different. I don't quite understand whether the author has established a complete character when setting up the character? Until the end of the free chapter, I felt that the protagonist's goal and behavioral purpose were never very clear. The protagonist was always in a state of taking one step at a time. It seemed that the author had not considered the direction of the plot at all. He said that he wanted to hug Minato's thigh to build a good relationship, but during the showdown, Minato felt that he was thinking like a poisonous snake, please! Please think about it with your head. One day you suddenly find out that a person you always thought was a very kind person is a very sinister and thoughtful person. Will you still have a heart-to-heart relationship with him? Will you not take precautions? Minato is not a fool! The previous chapters describing the establishment of a friendly persona have become like a joke! With such foreshadowing in the front, there are too many slap-in-the-face plots later. I am not just complaining when I write so much. I really feel it is a pity. I like all aspects of the setting. However, the more I write about it, the worse the logic becomes and the more far-fetched the plot becomes. I just finished reading the free part today, and I am going to prepare the db test next. If I improve it later, I will complete the subscription part. If it is still the same, I can only regret it and say goodbye...

Reading summary, Chapter 86, Purely subjective. The reading progress is still the public version, no loss or debt. The beginning of the novel is quite interesting. I opened an early Uchiha account, developed secretly, and didn't want to be famous. Lead two teammates with ulterior motives to survive secretly on the battlefield, complete the mission as much as possible, and prioritize life-saving. Originally, the two teammates were very outstanding characters, but it was a pity that they were not portrayed in depth. After turning on the kaleidoscope, the plot began to change. It was as if a plug-in was online. The minions could be seconds, and the bosses were all 50-50. There was no longer the sense of crisis that a dog's life would be on the battlefield. Moreover, after returning to the village, there was even more palace fighting, but Gong Dou also looked confused. It is said that he does not trust the third generation government and plans to invest in the fourth generation. However, all investment behavior is just hanging around Kakashi without actual action. It is said that he looked down on the simple minds of various political factions in the clan. Apart from showing off, he did not express his political views at all. While he despised Itachi for killing the whole family, he did not do anything to save the future of the clan and allowed the family to run towards destruction. If you say you have no feelings for the family at all, you might as well just marginalize your parents and survive on the night of the genocide. However, you keep making your presence felt in front of the clan leader, and you can't see your purpose at all, and you look confused. In short, after turning on the kaleidoscope, the combat power system collapsed. After returning to the village, I had no idea what you were doing. He said that he couldn't trust the political system, but he kept jumping around in it. He said that he prioritized survival, but he didn't mean to keep a low profile. He said that he despised others for killing his whole family, and he was researching how to eat other people's brothers alive. He said that the way to kill his family was arrogance, and he felt happy by kicking others down in the street. It was not a secret feeling. Many behaviors seem to be somewhat contradictory. At best, this is the author's foreshadowing! Okay, I saw Chapter 86, the public version, and said some very subjective things. I also hope that the author will not be too angry after reading it. If there is any problem, he will correct it, if there is no problem, he will encourage him to think more, polish it diligently, and write more exciting words. If you are not so angry, I hope this reader's words can be helpful to you. If you're particularly angry, sorry 😰. Come on, we have a long way to go. See you soon!

I gave up decisively, there was too much nonsense (눈_눈)

I have read more than 100 chapters and want to continue reading. The overall plot is okay, but there are a few issues that I really want to complain about. 1. It's understandable that there are typos, but you have too many typos, it's like watching a pirated version. 2. The protagonist's name is repeated too many times, which greatly affects the reading experience. The chapter itself is not long, and Uchiha Kai appears forty or fifty times... 3. The protagonist participates in the plot of the Uchiha clan meeting. I feel that the author wants to show off the protagonist's political literacy, but it is a bit reluctant. The protagonist publishes a rather general analysis of the situation, and then a group of clan elders are shocked...

I would like to apologize to the author first. Because there is a chapter in the middle of this book that is really too lengthy, and there were a lot of books on Yu and Jiuzi at that time, I have been waiting for a while. But it is undeniable that this book ranks among the top three Naruto fanfics I have read. Both the shaping of the world view and the analysis of character reversal are very appropriate. It makes me feel that each character has put a lot of thought into it and is a real person with thoughts. I think the two most successful supporting characters are: 1. Hinata Aya: As the heroine, from being in the same team to fighting each other, to awakening the reincarnation eye and falling in love with each other. It reflects the collision of souls between He and Qi after they understand each other deeply. She played a decisive role in Kai's growth process (advanced experiments, including finally assisting Kai to understand his true self) 2. Uchiha Obito (Uchiha Lin): As the second villain of Naruto's comics, this reversal is the most successful and meaningful. Obito's original sin began with Rin's death. In this book, Kai allows Obito to recognize the reality and discover the conspiracy. In order to redeem himself, he chooses to go undercover under Black Zetsu and fully cooperate with Kai's various plans. Compared to Obito dying for Kakashi in the anime, I appreciate the way the author completely redeemed Obito with Lin's resurrection and the recognition of his former partners. At least it can tell everyone from the perspective of human nature that everyone is basically good. Thanks to the author for his hard work and for telling us readers a wonderful story. I hope the author will continue his efforts in the next book and look forward to it~

I can't stand the many typos. Is this your attitude? Some book friends have pointed it out and haven't revised it, and the frequency of typos has not been reduced. It's really... This book title is also here to gain popularity! Not much of a connection.

After reading the free chapter, there are a lot of mistakes. The author really likes to give the protagonist some meaningless b-sides. There is no sense of a battle of wits at all in the battle of wits, and I feel that I have played a big game of chess. Especially the part where the protagonist talks to Minato, where there are fish and fish, it is a bit funny.

In the early stage, this article felt ordinary. After all, there were a lot of typos and wrong words, which gave people the feeling of a foreigner learning Chinese. After reading it in the middle, I felt that it could be ranked in the top five best Naruto fanfics. The author slowly wrote some of his own things in it. In the later period, the writing and plot both fell apart and fell out of the top ten. The author's writing skills are still limited. There are ideas but nothing in the plot. The protagonist is as constipated and his stomach is about to explode but he can't get out. His strength is astonishing, but his opponent is always one step ahead and then inexplicably wins one hand, leaving hidden dangers. It's obvious that he feels better in the mid-term, so why do he have to do it in the later stage? Poison points, it feels like they are using poison points to force time. The author obviously has no control over the plot. He is relying on water and poison to wait for the plot to be pushed forward instead of leading the plot. The ending is also a mess. The supporting characters have completely turned into tool men. The battle scenes are severely cut and hammered, and there are no surprises and excitement anymore.

Only after reading this book did I realize that I don't hate novels with female protagonists. In the past, I was so embarrassed when I read novels with female protagonists, but this one is actually pretty good.

To be honest, it's very interesting and the plot is very full, especially the setting of the three protagonists, from strangers in the early stage to trusting each other in the later stage, and the strength of the three is also gradually improved. The kind of protagonist who works alone and completely wins against his friends feels much lessened. It can be seen that the author is very careful.

After reading a few chapters, the protagonist was sneering from beginning to end. The conspiracy from beginning to end was completely devoid of passion and immersion. I didn't want to read it after reading a few chapters.

I have read Chapter 70 so far. The plot concept is good. In addition to the protagonist, the other two characters of Hinata and Senju are well created, but there are too many flaws. 1. Poor grammar, wordless writing, endless typos, there are always a bunch of typos, and even occasional typos in character names or ordinary vocabulary, and the use of sentence descriptions is not as good as that of junior high school students. 2. Excessive description of the protagonist's psychological activities. More than half of a chapter is devoted to describing irrelevant psychological states, which have little relevance to the advancement of the plot. 3. The protagonist is created as a high school student who thinks that the sky is high because of the prophet. He thinks he can see far even though he is not high up, which always creates an inexplicable sense of superiority. 4. The number of words for water. Many sentences have to be written as "Uchiha Kei" when they can clearly be replaced by "Kai" or "He", which affects the perception.

I will start school tomorrow, you should update it well...

The content is rich, not procrastinating, the pace is fast, cold, cold-blooded, relatively to the appetite, and there are many typos. I didn't pay attention to it originally, I am in listening mode! ! ! Some book friends pointed it out, so I'll mention it here. ~👍I quite agree with the author's view of Naruto. If it doesn't collapse later, I will subscribe to all of them. After all, the chapters in the series are a bit expensive at 36 points per chapter! ~ By the way, light novels are really not suitable for me. I like darkness and passion. Now the definition of light novels is that they are relaxed and nonsensical. When I see the light novel label, I basically avoid it. I don't know, but there are no book friends who feel the same as me.

The beginning of the game has the feel of Naruto Battlegrounds. I enjoyed watching it, but unfortunately there were a lot of typos. The dark style of Naruto feels a bit cliché, and I hope that the future story direction will have more anti-cliché content.

The best Naruto fanfic that fights Danzo

I can't stand it anymore. . . The main reason is that the more I read it, the more it feels like a political novel. . . It's not impossible, it just feels like it's putting the cart before the horse. . .

It took me a day to read this book, it felt very good^ω^, but the author had a lot of typos, looking forward to the next one, come on😊!

I have to say that the author's portrayal of Hinata Aya was very successful. After reading the novel for so long, this is probably the heroine who gives me the most sense of conquest. Her sense of presence in this book is comparable to that of the protagonist. I have already begun to brainstorm a series of follow-up operations, which are cruel in the early stage and sweet in the later stage. Unfortunately, I can't do porn now. After all, this is the world of Naruto, and many things can be flashy (ﾉ)`ω´(ヾ) ​​​ There is another point that is more prominent, and that is the political struggle. The author has dug into this aspect himself, and it has the same flavor as in the original work. I don't know if it is a mixed system. Regarding Imai Kenta, I made a blind guess that it is the Senju clan currently hidden among the common people. It is not mentioned in the original work. As for a real world, it depends on how the author digs it. Although they are fans, it is a happy thing to see such a group drama. Everyone has their own logical content, instead of just remembering the name of the protagonist after reading a million-word novel, and then deleting it in vain.

It feels like the protagonist has no feelings for his parents. If he doesn't approve, he doesn't recognize their current status, right? After all, judging from the expression, Uchiha Kei still felt grateful. Of course, this is pure speculation. The most important thing is that the old silver coin of Uchiha Kei doesn't regard these two as eye-opening tools. He is already considered a person, right? So... It shouldn't be that you don't recognize your identity, but you don't have feelings?

The Uchiha clan is a tragedy. He started a company with Senju and never became the president. Instead, he got worse and worse and became a security captain. In the end, he was about to be kicked out of the company. He wanted to make a business comeback. Who knew that a second or fifth child in the family was betrayed and the whole family was in despair. I sympathize with Uchiha but I don't like the starting point Uchiha. In the novels, because most of them are Itachi either followed the path of the Third Generation of Konoha or Itachi's path of rebelling against the ninja. Anyway, they have never understood their own situation. To be honest, there are almost no Uchiha who are Hokages. I am convinced that the two families founded the Ninja Village and the other family has never been able to be a leader and is being ostracized. Can I not rebel? If Shisui wanted peace and allowed his family to endure the cold shoulder, then Itachi really had a brain problem. Uchiha could always be said to be the victim. For the Will of Fire, it was better to say that it was for the Senju clan. Suppressing the Uchiha clan to resist and massacre the clan members was awesome enough. Obito did it because of hatred and Madara Itachi? For what? In my opinion, he is just mentally retarded.

The protagonist's ability feels very contradictory. Will something as high as time become consumed due to the strength of the enemy? Is there any difference between the time of a genin and the time of a chuunin? Will Obito's kaleidoscope change depending on the enemy's strength? The protagonist's ability might as well be a forced control.

Why do I only pay attention to the drama of "Fatang" recently?

This book gave me the feeling that the protagonist said two sentences: Hello. Have you eaten? . The author will focus on these two sentences to write about the protagonist's mood at the time, the background when he said this sentence, and the next plan and conjecture.

Vomiting, the protagonist kills Loess. If he wants to kill, why not kill him directly? Just like a villain, Luo Li is too lazy, and then waits for Minato to come and can't kill him. Wouldn't it be better to just kill him? We still have to chat with Loess and wait for Minato to come over. Since you, the author, don't want Loess to die, why did you include the part where the protagonist Luo Liba chatted? Isn't this an insult to the reader's intelligence? Forced to retreat!

After reading chapter 60, I ran away. I wanted to write about intrigues, but I ended up writing a bunch of sneers. If you don't have the skills, don't write about adult political games. I can't stand it when I see little children playing house, you are the bad guy and I am the good guy.

Our company plans to conduct a pirate and Naruto tour, and now we need 100 salted fish who can shout "666". The golden fingers are powerful, so there is no need to worry about safety.