Naruto: Duanmu Baiyun

I really like this book. First of all, although the character transmigrated into a niche role, the original anime design of this character is excellent. He is an elite Jonin who uses a sword as his main weapon, has a ponytail, a wound on the corner of his mouth, and his moves are very cool.

How can an ordinary, useless person rise to power? A commoner with no resources, no special abilities, relying solely on his transmigrator identity? The Naruto world isn't about resources; it's all about talent and bloodline. I can't imagine how a commoner with no advantages could rise to prominence. What would the ending of this book be?

This book was a revelation to me, and I would like to recommend it to all readers. Many people say the opening passage about housing prices is toxic, but upon reflection, it does have some basis (after all, Konoha is surrounded by walls and a protective barrier, preventing the village from expanding, so housing prices naturally rise with population growth and fall during wars when the population…

Is this the person? In the original anime, he's called "Shirakumo Hayama," a Jonin. His other strengths are unknown, but his Vacuum Sword technique is truly formidable.

If you're going to write fanfiction, then just write fanfiction properly. Authors often like to use a large section to express their own opinions.

After reading over 80 chapters, I couldn't take it anymore and dropped the book. There are three main problems up to this point. First, the author adds too much personal bias, often including long passages describing his own understanding of various social issues and depicting the frustrations he experiences in life, sometimes even taking up half a chapter's length. It's very irritating.

The author's cultivation of immortality through the "I Ching" can be said to have created a new system in Naruto fan fiction, and the cultivation system is undoubtedly perfect. However, the author's experience was insufficient to change the fate of the commoner ninjas; at best, the regime could only end with the death of the man.

Well, this is my first time reading an official copy. Since I'm a student, I've always read pirated copies. I think this book is really good, so I wanted to support it. This is really good. It should be in the top three of the Naruto fanfictions I've read (the other two are "The Calamity" and "Tensegan"). Let's start with the advantages:

The author has included too much of their own bias. They insist on nitpicking unreasonable settings and writing endlessly as if they are the only ones who are sober in a world of fools. It doesn't feel like reading a novel; it feels like watching a real person endlessly complaining about society. Goodbye if you get poisoned

Update soon, it's really good!