The Ice-Harvesting Clan of the Ninja World

The author should not be a full-time author, right? Otherwise, what's the point of living without making money? It's weird to write more and more stream-of-consciousness if you don't have enough resources. . . The previous style of Red Sand Dust is pretty good, a normal hot-blooded manga and light novel. . . I don't know why it feels so long-winded as I write. . .

The writing is too complicated, wonderful but very tiring to read. If it were a physical book, I would be happy to make tea and enjoy it slowly on a weekend afternoon. However, on my mobile phone, I still want to read some relaxing words in one piece.

After reading about 200 chapters, I have some things I want to share with the author. First of all, make sure that you, the author, have a very good understanding of Naruto's worldview. I also have my own ideas. Having ideas is not a bad thing. Only authors with ideas can write different things, but... I want to remind you that you are writing a Naruto story! Traditional fan fiction is already a niche at the beginning. It has been so long since Naruto has been completed, and there are only so many people watching Naruto fan fiction here. And what do we want to see? It's ninjutsu! It's a fight! It's the protagonist's heroic spirit that dominates the battlefield! To put it bluntly, it's still the same as Shuangwen, but didn't I come to Qidian just to see this? The so-called Xiao Bai's writing is just that the way to have fun is too low-level. What Lao Bai still likes is the way to have fun, but the taste is just too good! There are a lot of Naruto fans, all kinds of cheating, all kinds of outrageous shows, but in my opinion, the one who can write the original ninja world and all the original characters, the most like Naruto, is you! But the question is, is the theme of this book too biased? The main plot of Mizuki and Daimaru is basically the research and practice of ninjutsu. By this book, the main plot has become to control the ninja world as a great noble. Although training and fighting are still going on, the proportion is the lowest since the three books. In addition, how much do you think readers will feel immersed in this kind of feudal aristocracy? It's okay to have your own ideas, but this book is the most biased idea you'll ever get! What we want to see is Naruto, not Naruto Noblesse! You can write something different if you want, but if you write specifically about something that readers are not interested in, is your idea too biased? Ask a normal Naruto fan, what is the mainstream of the ninja world? Of course it is ninjas! The nobles in Naruto? What are those things? It's 2023. These days, time-travel dramas no longer go to the Qing Dynasty, they died early in the morning! Writing about nobles controlling the world, is this what the Naruto audience wants to see? ? I hope that if the next book is about Naruto, it will mainly be about ninjas. As for this book, it's not to the point where I can't stand it anymore, but it's definitely not as good as the first two books. I just wanted to say something after watching it. As the author of Qidian, you have to know what the readers are here for!

It's been a long time since I picked it up. The author has his own understanding of Naruto's system and can barely explain it. But this thing is also mixed with private goods and some of the author's worldview. . . Furthermore, not to mention the background of this pig's trotters, it really puts one's butt in the position of ruler. It makes me, a bastard, very uncomfortable when I read it. . . . So that's it

After reading it, I haven't read it until around chapter 200. It's not that there is a problem with the writing, but there is a plot that is not acceptable, that is, the cousin pursues Uchiha Mikoto, and Mikoto is ready to agree for the sake of the family. The protagonist supports and expresses encouragement. From a realistic perspective, the behavior of the three people is certainly understandable, but what is the point of writing this kind of plot? It would not take up much space to write, but dismantling the CP itself is a very unpopular act. Another couple has a deep relationship. On the one hand, for the continuation of the family, on the other hand, they can't let go of their wife, so they let her escape and continue to lead the continuation of the family. Not to mention how awkward it is from the reader's point of view. Even from the perspective of the reality of the ninja world, apart from Tsunade, Kishimoto has never written about anyone who is attracted to others after losing their spouse? Jiraiya has been waiting all his life for an opportunity. Not only is it thankless to write this, but also there is a pure land after death in the ninja world. People also have souls after death. If you wait a hundred years later, how will you let Mikoto, who was not called Uchiha Mikoto at that time, behave?

I especially like the author's novel Red Sand Dust. It's not like I opened Goldfinger without thinking. I also have my own thoughts and interpretations on the plot and the background and core of the Naruto world. Kishimoto knows a lot about Hammer Naruto, and today I found out that he has opened a new book. Come on

Nowadays, Naruto fandoms are really full of shit. They use the same cheating and prophets and copy the bullshit conspiracy theories written by poop. Those Naruto fans who have given in are really thoughtful and insightful. Do you have any recommendations from Naruto fans?

The incarnation of obsession in the last book, the Nine Phoenix incarnation is so amazing. In the chapter where Daimaru and Uchiha Itachi fight, Susanoo fights the nine-headed phoenix, which is so amazing. Would you like to finish this book?

If you go this route, why write about Naruto fandom? It's so thankless.

The biggest problem with this book is that the protagonist gets involved with Kaguya at the beginning, which is equivalent to taking all the blame for Kaguya. If it is just the conflict between Kaguya and Hagoromo Hamura, that's it. The question is how to deal with the trouble caused by Black Zetsu? Do you expect it to bury all the truth? If it does, the protagonist will really be a complete villain. No matter how much Mizuki is the savior, at least his understanding of this aspect is with the ninja world. Or the author has greatly added the content of Boruto to establish new enemies and whitewash Kaguya.