Naruto: The Thief’s Hand

That means Goku in some timeline is definitely dead... How can the Dragon Ball storyline unfold without him...?

As others have said, it's even more bland than bland, tasteless but not a big loss to throw away 🤫. It's really boring and unexciting to watch, and a little bit toxic. The author actually made the protagonist join Root and even had Danzo plant a cursed seal on him. I really don't know what got into the author. Why did the author have to make the protagonist join Root?

I read ten chapters, and each one was dull and boring; I couldn't see any highlights.

I wrote dozens of pages for one skirmish. If you were working like crazy, that would be one thing, but with my inconsistent writing, I've completely forgotten what I wrote before.

It's well-written, but I can't get through it. You could call it filler, but the descriptions, plot, and details are all quite thoughtful, and the concept is good too. It just feels dragged out, yet it's also quite logical. It's a kind of unconventional filler, not filler in the traditional sense, which is contradictory and frustrating.

Author, please, please don't read Long Kunlun's comments. His suggestions are all toxic and will ruin the entire story. Just stick to the current writing and absolutely do not add any more martial arts elements.

Others might be willing to give up after seeing the decision to join the Root. Any normal person would agree to someone placing a curse mark on them...

There's a timeline issue. During the Second Shinobi World War, Chiyo should still be a young girl. At that time, Hiruzen Sarutobi was with Danzo and serving under the Second Hokage. They're all young men, yet Chiyo already has grandchildren? Could she be from the same era as the First and Second Hokage? Then who was her master? He couldn't possibly be older than the First Hokage and the others.

You wrote a terrible idea, played a winning hand terribly, and deserved to fail.

*Ahem... Um... I've only read a few dozen chapters so far, so I won't comment on the later chapters yet. The main thing is, this is just too much! You actually wrote the Substitution Jutsu as a space-time ninjutsu, it's hilarious...*