Naruto: The Thief’s Hand

That means Goku in a certain time and space is dead... How would the plot unfold without Dragon Balls...

Like others said, it's more mediocre than mediocre. It's not a pity to throw it away if it's tasteless 🤫. It's really boring and not exciting to watch. Love, and a little bit poisonous The author actually let the protagonist join the root, and also let Danzo plant the curse seal. I really don't know if the author made a mistake, and actually let the protagonist join the root. If you want the Otsutsuki bloodline to make friends with Orochimaru, why not do more missions with Orochimaru (actually one or two times is enough), and talk to Orochimaru more about technology and biology during the mission. Even if you don't know everything, you still don't know how to brag! After gaining his trust (or appreciation), you can become a disciple, or ask to follow him, okay? Why go to Gen 😤 And now that you know about the Dragon Vein, and Danzo wants to be the protagonist, why not just find a mission to leave the village and defect, why would you leave your life to others? Do you still think that Danzo is a good person and will not kill the protagonist, are you 🐷, or do you think of us readers as 🐷? I jumped to read it. The content was so bland that I almost fell asleep

After reading ten chapters, ten chapters were boring and boring, and I couldn't see any bright spots.

I wrote dozens of pictures about an encounter. It doesn't matter if you are crazy about it. In the past three days of fishing and two days of posting on the Internet, I have forgotten what I wrote before.

It's well written, but I can't stand it. I'd say it's not watery. The description, plot, and details are all quite interesting, and the creativity is pretty good, but it just gives people a dragging feeling, but it's quite reasonable. It's a different kind of water, not water in the traditional sense, so it's very contradictory and uncomfortable.

Author, please don't read this Long Kunlun's comments. What he suggested is poisonous and his writing is totally deceptive. Write it as you should and don't add martial arts stuff.

The rest is easy to say: I decided to give up after joining Gengen. As long as you are a normal person, you will agree to others putting a curse mark on you. . . .

There is a problem with the timeline. Chiyo should still be a girl during the Second Ninja War. Hiruzen Sarutobi and Danzo followed the Second Hokage at that time. They were all young men. Chiyo even had a grandson by this time? Could it be that she was a character from the same time period as the first and second generations? Then who is her master? It can't be older than the first generation. If not, then it is the son of Chiyo and her master. Then Chiyo is the longest-lived human being in Naruto, the anime. Different logical explanations and confusing timeline. The book has been withdrawn. It is not bad for fake Naruto fans.

A good idea makes you write badly, but a good hand of cards makes you play poorly, and you deserve to be thrown into the street.

Cough... Well... I've only read a few dozen chapters now, so I won't talk about it later. It's mainly because you're being too messy, right? It's really funny that Substitution Jutsu is written as Space Ninjutsu...