The Everything Shop I Created

Xingyuezi has always been against the protagonist. The protagonist is the first human immortal, Xingyuezi is the second human immortal; the protagonist is the first ghost immortal; Xingyuezi is the second ghost immortal. The protagonist breaks through to the earth immortal.

I feel that every book written by the author is well written and at the level of a master, but the results are not satisfactory. I don't know why.

I was confused, you have written so many books, why are they not popular? I think it's better than those little white novels, I don't know how many times, but it's not even popular. Not to mention it's the work of a great master, but it's not much worse than him?

I can't understand this novel. I loved the previous novels so much. The beginning of the endless journey is simply invincible

[Red Lotus Realm Immortal Way Side Level] [Mortal Way] Swallowing Qi, Penetrating the Body, Climbing to the Top [Human Immortal Way] First Level: Spirit Pond, Liquid Transformation, Refining Liquid Second Level: Light Transformation, Light Refining, Life Ring Third Level: Fusion of God, Resonance, Alchemy [Ghost Immortal Way] Seven Soul Realm: Swallowing thieves, corpse dogs, removing filth, lung odor, sparrow yin, non-poison, hidden arrows Three Soul Realm: Ghost Essence, Shuangling, Fetal Light Soul Realm: Tao Palace, Three Tribulations, Yuan Fei Soul [Earth Immortal Way] Earth Immortal Yuan Shen, Earth Immortal True Body, Spiritual Condensation [Heavenly Immortal Way] Vital Tribulation, All Things Tribulation, Void Tribulation, Zhouguang Tribulation, True Spirit Tribulation

The protagonist has grown up so much, and is easily caught up by the supporting cast... After working hard, I turned around and found that everyone had upgraded.

Recommended by no heroine. . As long as there is no female protagonist in this article, no double standards, and no ambiguity, the recommendation votes will start flowing every day

I still like Dark Martial Arts and Infinite Journey

Your Excellency Tianji, to be honest, your writing is quite good. I have always read your books, but I find that basically every book of yours has some redundancies (the following are some of my opinions on some of your novels. Of course, I do not mean that you must write according to my requirements. I just give you some readers' comments for reference. If you feel that it is useless, you can ignore it). Not to mention the dark martial arts, this is your first book. I won't comment on it until I've finished reading it; Infernal Journey, I feel, is the pinnacle of the work so far. The biggest shortcoming is that it's unfinished and the ending feels too hasty; then there is San Hai, the future pioneer. The way of transcendence is very well written, and the world view is progressive, and it is linked to Infernal Journey, so it can be said that the latter part is very high-powered. The disadvantage is that every description of the skills in the early stage is a big pile, and it feels too boring; Superdimensional Invasion, It can be said to be a system flow. The first half can be said to be quite satisfactory, and the second half takes off. It is very exciting. There are no obvious shortcomings. Every time I travel to other worlds, the writing is wonderful; and then there is the Master of Everything. The subject matter is still very good, and the plot is not big. But there are some places that I feel are really not handled well. First of all, I feel that other people in the Master of Everything are a complete burden. It's useless. Brandy can be an old employee. There's no problem with it. What's the role of the others? In the front, you can say that they help the protagonist with tasks. But once the tasks are opened, others can also do the task, and the role is immediately useless. It feels like they have followed the protagonist to level up without doing anything. It feels like dawdling. The look and feel is poor, as if the protagonist is working for them 😰. The previous book also had this problem. Also, it feels like there is some deliberate suppression of the protagonist's upgrades, but that's understandable. If you write too fast, there will be fewer chapters, so this isn't a big problem. Finally, there is a common problem that almost every book has. Sometimes the protagonist will suddenly say something that breaks the character, and it feels like a strong person has become a loser (or the feeling of an ordinary person); I am a semi-subscribed reader, and I have the audacity to give you some shallow opinions. Please forgive me if I offend you. I look forward to communicating with you, and I wish your books will get better and better.

Find someone to cooperate and put the author in a dark room. If he doesn't update ten chapters a day, he won't give him food. My dark room and computer are ready. I'll send someone to kidnap the author. Please leave a message below if you have any cooperation.