The Mountains and Seas Become a Dragon

In the early stage, I was too idiotic, like a native who had a strange encounter. Why did I write about time travel? If you don't have the strength to expose your new skills, you are seeking death. Killing the Cursed Scorpion King was even more fake, and killing the tribe that went out to roam was even more fake. All such reckless tribes would have died long ago. For example, if other tribes wanted to attack the Dali Bear tribe, just because the Dali Bear tribe was weak, didn't a few elders consider it beforehand? Last but not least, I was going to attend some wedding ceremony afterwards. Forget it if I missed it for a year, I didn't want to think about the two elders being injured. Let's talk about the Yellow Snake Tribe and the Tiger Tribe. The tribes that survived in the wilderness are not as smart as ghosts. It would be so easy to beat him to death. It is such a simple thing to put the blame on someone, especially if you go to other tribes like this, it must be a few good tribes acting together. How will the blind date conference be held after Yellow Snake breaks the rules like this? Anyone who breaks the rules will be attacked by a group (not to mention that everyone wants to eat the weak first). When survival is difficult, the rules are the basis of the existence of the human race, so the tribe will take the initiative to abide by them. Besides, the four elders are still alive, how can they launch an annexation war? Wouldn't it be useless if a few elders died? Besides, at that time, what resources did the various tribes have that were worth grabbing? Land, there were so many things to do, it all depended on whether you could defeat the ferocious beasts, and the unique resources, how could you defend two cities with so little strength? At that time, only those who were powerful would annex them, not to mention the skills. What was the use of the bear totem skills and the snake totem? Besides, you are powerful. Weak tribes will come over directly. Survival in the wilderness is not easy. Why does it feel like the ferocious beasts have been exterminated in this wilderness, and the human race is only left with internal fighting.

There are two other points. According to the description in the book, the status of women is completely unreasonable. A daughter who gets married and a son who stays behind must be treated differently. It is a complete joke that the pig's feet should be bullied by the younger sister. It is even more important for the younger sister to learn the skills of the bear totem. There shouldn't be three elders either. At that time, in order to pass on the inheritance, I went on a blind date and got married at the age of 15. Even if a woman has talent, she can't express it. Besides, family ties are very weak in this environment. It's about the tribe, and even status is not passed down from father to son. Talking about love is even more false. The man trains to fight and hunt every day, so it is difficult to write about this topic.

I just read more than 20 chapters, and I was surprised. The elder was so excited when he found out that there were people who were born with spiritual enlightenment, and asked the fourth elder to find them secretly. The first thing they found out was to throw the Qiling Academy to attract hatred, and even penetrated the Qiling Academy. What do you think, are you afraid that people who are born with spiritual enlightenment will live too well, and hope to die soon? Shouldn't the people who know the Qi Ling Yuan realize that as soon as they look at the protagonist, he became spiritually enlightened before he was twelve years old? Why is no one aware of this? How can I put it this way? The idea of ​​this book is very good and it should be a good book. However, the writing is not strong enough and I cannot express the feeling of writing. I am interested in reading this subject matter, but the writing method is really not attractive at all.

It's a pity that there are too many traces of modernization, and there are more than pig's feet in talking and doing! So do others! And all too polite! The wilderness! Isn't it careless?

Let me talk about it: 1. Many people have mentioned: The protagonist is born with spiritual enlightenment. This kind of genius has never appeared in this tribe. The tribe does not pay attention to it. It is just like it does not exist. The tribe does not have any resources. Moreover, the protagonist knows the enhanced version of Kung Fu, but the people in the tribe do not learn... 2. Are the IQs of the supporting characters too low? Especially for the people of the Yellow Snake Tribe, aren't their conspiracy and conspiracy too low-level? Just like a child playing house, it is really petty

Everyone, please withdraw. What kind of coquettish orthopedics are there in Shanhai World? 🤭. Shanhai is really great. It is more leisurely than modern people. Overall, the younger sister is coquettish and the older brother is orthopedic. Just looking at it makes me want to vomit.

The protagonist was born with a spirit, but the tribe didn't pay attention to it.

No wonder I have achieved this result after writing so many words. There are still very few truly good books that are not popular. In fact, it is because some places forcefully persuade people to quit. No matter how good I write later, I can't retain people.

There is a girl named Qingdu. When she is born, she is often covered with yellow clouds, and when she becomes an adult, she is often followed by a dragon... Then the winds gather around her, and the red dragon senses that she is pregnant, and she gives birth to a son in Danling in the fourteenth month. This son's name is 'Yao', one of the five ancient emperors. Even Shennong, one of the three emperors, is related to the dragon. I remember that Shen Nong was born after his mother saw a red dragon. And the earliest Pangu should have a human head and a dragon body or a human body and a dragon head.

It felt like a monk in the early stage of Qi training could do something that a monk in the golden elixir stage couldn't do, and then I gave up.