Conquering Mountains and Rivers for Ninety Thousand Miles

It seems to have a lot of content, but it is too empty. The whole book is about setting and no specific content. The early stage is okay, at least there is content to speak of. Looking at your several books, it is basically the same. When the early stage is small, there is still some content. In the middle and late stages, the whole book is about setting, what is this realm like, what is the next step, and maybe a fight. Just two moves, the protagonist takes one move and the other side responds with one move. However, just these two or three moves can write dozens of chapters. However, these dozens of chapters are all descriptions of skills. How does the protagonist's move work and how does the opponent's move work? It's all this kind of content. It's too spacey. Not only this book is like this, but the previous books are like this too. There is no innovation at all.

"Wang Yang, I was defeated by you that day! I won't lose again." When Shi Kingang saw Wang Yang, he was so poor that he could not maintain his Zen mind "It's useless to talk more!" Wang Yang said lightly Wang Yang's height of 1.8 Meters is slightly smaller than Shi King Kong's 2.2 Meters tall devil muscleman Ding dong ding dong! With the ringing of the bell, the fighting finally begins! ! Shi Kingang raised his hands with a dangerous aura Wang Yang slid into Shi King Kong's safe area Shi King Kong roared, stepped forward with his left leg, pulled his right hand back, leaned forward on his shoulders, and stood up Hit Wang Yang with a slap The force of this blow was extremely strong. Even if Wang Yang took a defensive posture, he was still perverted by Shi King Kong. The power pushed back several meters "With innate divine power, if you don't have a master, you can't compete with strength." Wang Yang smiled There is no hope in comparing strength, the strength gap between Wang Yang and Shi Kingang is a bit big Wang Yang stabilized his body and walked towards Shi King Kong again Shi King Kong also did not show weakness, stepped forward with his left leg, and took the initiative to attack Wang Yang had already gathered his momentum, hold on to Shi King Kong in the gap Go forward, lower your waist, rotate your right leg 180 degrees, kick upwards, and hit Shi Jin in the face Shi Jin was knocked unconscious for a moment Wang Yang did not stop and turned around His right hand was like a whip, hitting Shi Jin in the eye Shi Jin lost his eyesight briefly Taking advantage of him, Wang Yang sent his foot forward and hit Shi Jin. Gang's calf Shi King Kong's center of gravity was unstable and he sat upside down on the ground Wang Yang touched the ground with his right foot, twisted his waist and turned around, turned his left foot 360 degrees, struck King Kong King Kong with all his strength, and hit King Kong King Kong's face again Wang Yang's set of moves was smooth and smooth The audience outside the venue exclaimed, Wang Yang moved so fast I couldn't believe that it was King Kong King Shi who was lying on the ground, this devilish muscular man! Just when everyone thought the winner was decided Shi Jingang stood up slowly... "I'm not defeated yet!" Blood flowed from the corner of Shi Jingang's mouth, he showed his bright red teeth and roared ferociously! Shi Kingang spreads his arms, trying to use his own strength to lock Wang Yang Wang Yang moves forward again, lifting Shi Kingang's stretched out hands Steps up, steps on the ground, and kicks the other foot up quickly Wang Yang's legs are connected in a line, and he is hitting Shi King Vajra's chin Following this, he punched Shi Vajra in the abdomen Shi Vajra was beaten so hard that his abdomen shrunk and his head lowered Wang Yang twisted his waist again and struck Shi Vajra on the neck with a blow with his hand knife Shi Vajra's whole body fell backward But it was not over yet! Wang Yang jumped up high Hit his left leg once, hit him once with his right leg, hit him again with his left leg, and hit him again with his right leg All of them hit King Kong's chin In an instant, Wang Yang completed four consecutive blows to King Kong's chin His brain was instantly inside King Kong's head Collised hundreds of times A normal person would have died long ago after being attacked like this King Kong rolled on the ground several times and gradually stabilized his body Lying on the ground like a tiger, with his legs bent and his hands gripping the ground This is a precursor to the hunting of ferocious beasts. Wang Yang looked at Shi King Kong and took a defensive posture Crack, the sound of cracks in the floor exploded Shi King Kong kicked the ground with all his strength, rushing towards Wang Yang like a rocket "So fast!!" Wang Yang couldn't help but sigh in his heart Shi King Kong Not as flexible as Wang Yang, but that doesn't mean he can't achieve straight-line speed The bulging muscles in Shikong's legs are enough to show how powerful his explosive power is His mind moved, but his body couldn't keep up Shikong hit Wang Yang like an angry ox Right The fist hit Wang Yang's chest A large mouthful of blood spattered from Wang Yang's mouth, and his body flew several meters away Wang Yang stabilized his body and sat on the ground, the splashing blood dyed his shirt red "You lose!" Shi Jin slowly walked up to Wang Yang, standing tall He said to Wang Yang A weird smile appeared on the corner of Wang Yang's mouth Hit King Kong's calf with his right foot Shi King Kong was hit in the head several times, and his brain was a little weak Being kicked by Wang Yang, the brain was unable to regulate the balance center in time The body fell forward Wang Yang kicked up with his left foot on the ground and held Shi Kingang's head with both hands The right leg and knee came out with force, and he pulled Shi King Kong's head down with both hands Wang Yang's knee hit Shi King Kong's face Blood flowed from it again The corners of Shi Kingang's mouth flowed out, and several teeth were knocked out at the same time Just when Shi King Kong lost consciousness Wang Yang stood up in a detour, grabbed his neck with his hands, wrapped his feet around Shi Kingang's chest from behind, and firmly fixed himself on Shi Kingang's body Naked twist! ! It takes 3 seconds to make a person faint, and 10 seconds to cause damage to the brain For a normal person, once this move is formed, it can declare the end of the game Shi King Kong's face is red, veins are bulging Wang Yang is tightly wrapped around Shi King Kong Shi King Kong gets up from the ground, with a strong heart, kicks his feet on the ground Leaps several meters high with Wang Yang Come here! Compare who can follow me! ! The two fell to the ground at the same time But in an instant, the two steadied their steps and stood in the ring Time passed bit by bit Shikjang's body collapsed on the ground and passed out Is this the end of the crossbow? ! "You lost again!" Wang Yang left the scene gracefully, revealing his invincible back In fact, Wang Yang's internal organs were severely damaged and he was no longer able to fight for a short time But! So what? In the end, Wang Yang won!

In the early stage, I was confused. I looked down on nuclear bombs that could carry hundreds of tons of nuclear explosions. The output of a few hundred tons is enough to break the viaduct and take time to blow up the high-rise building. The power of naval guns is much stronger than this.

I still feel that it is a bit deliberately suppressing the myth of martial arts. An ordinary person can live for more than 100 years, and the myth of martial arts only has a few more decades. The myth is not to say that the golden elixir has been in the belly for 500 years, which is so outrageous, it must be at least 300 years.

Behind every book is a lot of self-pleasure. Others read novels to enjoy them, not to watch you write your explanatory essay.

This book should be called The Invincible King of Four in the Dormitory, Yang Yang. The author has written a series

Author, you have started again. I remember what I said at the end of the last book. If you had written more solidly, you would not have achieved such results. The first half of this book is okay, there is a plot, and it is a bit exciting. Later it goes back to the same old road. It is called misty at best, and it is fake and empty at worst. What do you think these latest pictures are about? Causal network? Qing Emperor? According to my understanding of you, there is basically no possibility that these two things will appear later. Why is it necessary to spend two pages to introduce them? This is really water for water's sake. Really, the recent updates make my balls ache. Can't you conceive of a world and write it in a down-to-earth manner? I obviously had an idea, but why did it go by so fast? As long as you come up with an idea and seriously write an original world without traveling through the heavens, wouldn't it be good? I feel tired and uncomfortable, so I won't subscribe now. Just write.

"Pushing across mountains and rivers ninety thousand miles", "I am invincible in the world".

The author has suppressed the protagonist to death, and almost no plug-ins have been used. The boy who holds the Tianyuan Legacy has developed for 358 chapters and has not yet reached the second level. But from another perspective, the development speed of urban literature is relatively normal.

The novel is okay and the theory is perfect. The early plot of the novel is very interesting, and the logical and invincible writing makes people feel the charm of martial arts. In the middle, it felt a bit stretched and exaggerated, but it was very imaginative and had good martial arts theory. In the later stage, it felt a bit ugly. There were too many theories about martial arts realm, which made people feel drowsy. The novel should be almost finished, but I feel like the author misses the eunuch a bit. Maybe after the New Year, the pigeon spirit evolves and misses the eunuch! I hope the author can turn around in time! At least end the novel first, otherwise the eunuch will really harm the character! ! ! !

Hahaha, I didn't expect that I would be the first to pursue investment. The wait is finally here. I waited all day yesterday and thought that I had to postpone the release of the new book due to irresistible factors. Today I casually clicked on the author and took a look. Unexpectedly, it was finally posted. However, after looking at the time when the chapter was posted, it felt a bit strange. Did it take such a long time to be displayed? 🤔 After reading the two updated updates and the introduction, I found that it still has the beginning of Martial Arts Unlimited Stream, Tianlong, Yitian and so on (the first and second copies). I hope Muzi can create new tricks that others have not written before. Finally, Muzi's book is a hit🔥. Say important things three times, don't enter the palace.

This kind of mentality is that the protagonist is the strong one. He grows up step by step, from weak to strong (this refers to the mentality). Unlike many novel authors who write so well, the mentality is still the same. I pray for other novels with similar protagonists

It's a bit fake, think about it carefully and don't make the same old mistake again.

The protagonists in the author's works are all the same, there is no difference. Does the so-called state of mind mean that they will be exactly the same until the end of cultivation? Do they not truly love all sentient beings and realize the existence of Tao, Fruit and Tao?

The author wrote about side pushing, but after developing dozens of chapters, he lost the mini-boss. Is it still side pushing? It's a bit uncomfortable.

Recommend a few books for the author to find inspiration: "Assistant God of Life in Another World", "I am Dugu Feng in the Tang Dynasty", "Endless Broken", "Practitioner of the Great Way", "The Eternal Sovereign that Covers the Sky", "Fantasy World Travel", "Xuanmen of Another World" and "Wise Eyes Asked"

Should I give him some sperm?

Recommend a novel "Mysterious Journey"

I plan to write a book "Looking at the Invincible Hands of Ancient and Modern Times". Written from primitive tribes to the galaxy universe of modern martial arts. Is it supported?

Yi Ziqi's writing is one of the few that I feel comfortable reading, and I don't know why so many people talk about it. Moreover, Ziqi's writing is just like Hua Sansheng's writing next door. I can remember what the protagonist has done and experienced after reading it once. This is a rare point.

For me, it's the book Xiancao. Why do so many people criticize it? It's very good.

Um, from Chapters 6 to 9, there was a loud bang at the door of a martial arts club for four chapters.

It's just a bit bullshit, just learn to get out of here

It's so cool that skipping ten chapters doesn't affect the plot at all.

One chapter of plot requires nine chapters of analysis. There is too little plot and too many explanatory notes. Reading and writing require nine points of plot and one point of annotations.

This is a masterpiece in the early part of the book. It's okay in the middle part, but it's a bit annoying in the later part. I'm jumping through it afterward.

What about the new book? When will the author publish a new book?

The front feels like the dog food master of Squid. They all started practicing martial arts in college, and there are also female protagonists

Is Xie Qingqing dead? A few chapters.

Isn't it the third round between Wang Yang and Shi Jingang? How do you feel about writing the second round?