Spring in the Red Chamber

Among the Red Mansions novels I have read, there are roughly two types of Red Mansions novels. One is the gentleman line, which does not have many harems. The overall style is relatively fresh and refined, such as struggling in the Red Mansions and being a concubine. The second one is based on Jinling Thirty-Six Hairpins (the main volume, the supplementary volume, and the second volume), which is a stallion style with a large collection and a special collection. The main character is set to be a scumbag and a rogue, which is a bit similar to "The Spring of Red Mansions" such as "Ban Tian Qing". I personally feel that the latter is actually good to watch once in a while. After all, it is also a classic cool novel type, but the former is more enjoyable to watch, because the emotional drama and power plot drama of the latter are generally relatively superficial. There are too many girls to write, and it will become confusing later on. Watching it once is enough, and you will not know what to watch the second time. But the former is different. The quality is quite high. Although the performance of Shuozi Fengliu is not as good as Red Mansion, I actually feel that I can watch it many times. Each female protagonist has more and deeper emotional scenes, and many of the male protagonist's experiences are actually quite profound. But I couldn't watch Red Mansion after watching it for the third time. For example, Queen Yin, the third time I saw Queen Yin, I felt very awkward. I didn't hate this character, but she was very awkward. What was Queen Yin's treatment in the later period? 1. A very smart and capable person was locked in the harem with nothing to do. 2. Her relationship with the male protagonist was exposed by her son and she lost her dignity. 3. Daiyu was still angry. She had no choice but to watch her niece go to the harem, and she had no place in the male protagonist's harem group. 4. He was poisoned by the emperor and could not bear children for the male protagonist 5. He was forced to serve others with sex, but he entered middle age earlier than the male protagonist, and her time was not waiting for her. Queen Yin is probably the second most popular female character in this book, and then she ends up like this. She has no place to put her talents and can only live in a secluded palace as a canary. Then she cannot integrate into the male protagonist's harem and cannot have children, which makes the male protagonist unable to move forward emotionally. She is getting older and has a kind of menopausal anxiety. I can't accept it. It's too bad for Queen Yin. To be honest, these plots. For example, the first point, some people talk about objective history. Are you reading a novel or an online novel? Popular literature is about entertaining the public. Objectivity has never been the first criterion for online articles, but whether people like it or not. Of course, it does not mean that the author should lose himself to please the readers. There must be a balance here. However, I think the treatment of Queen Yin has lost the balance, that is, the author has mixed too many personal things into Queen Yin's plot. Let's get back to the first point Given how powerful the male protagonist was at that time, and this is an Internet world, is the hidden danger of Queen Yin's idea really a thing? Why keep locked in the harem? Look at "The King", in which Song Jia is the wife of the big boss. As a result, the male protagonist is very angry after taking her over and makes her the female Zhuge, the behind-the-scenes strategist. She completely conquers the body and mind, and will not let anyone lock her up and act like a canary. How wonderful. You can just write it like this and everyone will be satisfied. Do you have to be locked in the harem to make people suffer from menopause? The second point is that the relationship being exposed is actually not a big deal. Instead, it can be written as a pleasant thing, as a romantic affair of the protagonist. As long as the male protagonist can take responsibility, the relationship is exposed. In fact, both the male protagonist and Queen Yin are mentally prepared, as long as the male protagonist will do their best to deal with the aftermath. What was the result? Later on, I really felt that the male protagonist had become Baoyu. He no longer took responsibility and did nothing to make up for this matter. Then it was written that Daiyu could not tolerate Empress Yin, and she got angry and attacked Yin Ziyu, which made it impossible for Empress Yin to integrate into the harem group. The male protagonist here has no responsibility in the first place. In the relationship between the male protagonist and Queen Yin, the male protagonist is definitely the active one. The male protagonist is responsible for 50% of the relationship between the two of them. Then when Daiyu has a conflict with Queen Yin, he just sees that Queen Yin has no place in the harem. What is the difference between the person around Baoyu who is insulted by his wife Jia Mu and he dare not speak out? Then why did Daiyu get angry at Queen Yin? I think Li Wan could accept it, let alone Queen Yin. Li Wan and Jia Lan were both very pure in the original work. They both had relatively high moral sentiments. As a result, Jia Qiang and Li Wan messed around. Daiyu didn't say a word and then she got angry at Queen Yin. Queen Yin was quite nice to Daiyu and the male protagonist in the early stage, just as a background, but then she didn't look good at all. I think it's not objective to write like this here. Some people think that Daiyu may feel that her position is threatened or that Queen Yin's identity is more troublesome. What is this? You can refer to the handling methods of Yang Yuhuan and Bubu Shenglian Xiao Zhouhou. They first became a monk for a few years to clear their identity before marrying. In this way, the threat to Daiyu is not that big if the identity is washed. Secondly, it can also give Queen Yin a guarantee of commitment, so why bother to make it look like such a bitter and grudge. The fourth point is that this is purely a problem between the male protagonist and the author. The emperor has not yet had sex, can his relationship with the queen be discovered? How desperate must the male protagonist and the empress be to expose the emperor? Their IQ ceilings are set to accommodate this. Is this considered responsible for their own women? It is also a precious act. The emperor was forced to take medicine. Some people say that the protagonist's setting is too romantic, and the emperor will always be suspicious. Let me say that this is a world of online literature. Secondly, the male protagonist has been in contact with Queen Yin since more than two hundred chapters, and it was not until eight or nine hundred that the two of them made substantial progress. In these hundreds of chapters, the emperor has no doubt at all, and Queen Yin is set up to be a perfect wife. Even if the emperor is disabled, she will be meticulous. Can this kind of trust collapse easily and quickly to the point of poisoning. Fifth, Queen Yin finally wanted to go out and play when she saw that she had accomplished nothing, had no face, no heirs, and no future. She was so desperate that she wanted to go out and play. If the male protagonist did the above things, would Queen Yin run away from home? As for the Yin family, they went to Africa to covet Nao Shizi's kingdom? According to the setting, Queen Yin was already in her fifties or sixties at that time. How could such an old man trust her to run so far? She was really not afraid of not being able to interact with each other until she grew old and died. The truth is that Queen Yin is a good character, but she is a dirty character. Shengsheng wrote about Queen Yin to this point. Also, this book praises Daiyu so highly that the male protagonist basically doesn't dare to say anything for them when he collects harems. He says I love you, and you have what others have, but in fact, he has to let the harem group please Daiyu. Although the harem troupes in Concubine Feng Liu have different statuses, they are all the same in terms of scenes and character quality. In Honglouchun, everything is inferior, but Daiyu is superior. The consequence was that Xiangling fell in love within a few days, and Qingwen fell in love with her in a few days. Such a fierce maid almost turned into a coward. Yin Ziyu basically has no plot. Every time the two of them meet, they are the best friends who cherish words like gold. I almost vomited. Baochai is a passer-by from the beginning to the end, and she is also a godly friend. She pushes him away as soon as he stretches out. Wang Xifeng, who gives benefits to the male protagonist in the early stage, my God, Jia Lian immediately disconnected him when he came back from Yangzhou. Except for Daiyu, it is rare to see any reserve, depth or quality in the entire Jinling harem.

The Spring of Red Mansions is now officially over. Let's not talk about the writing of the follow-up extras. Let's evaluate it from the main text alone. I will talk about my overall impression of the book from the perspective of a reader. When I first started reading this book, I had a really good impression of it. The writing was smooth, and the refreshing writing was also exciting. Especially when I scolded Jia Mu, the writing was really good, but as the plot progressed, there were hundreds of millions of problems with this book... I have been following this book from beginning to end, and I have occasionally given rewards after it has been published. I have also participated in various activities and won a title. But it is precisely because of this that I want to talk about this book. Because I spent money, I have the right to express my opinions as a reader and a consumer. My opinion is: The Dirty Mother was not written well! After finishing this conclusion, I will analyze it bit by bit. First, it is the creation of the protagonist. Online novels have stricter requirements for the protagonist. Even due to updates, the protagonist basically appears in every chapter. Creating a good protagonist is particularly important for online literature, but Dirty Mother did not do it. It can even be said that the dirty mother destroyed Jia Qiang with her own hands. Why? Because he was successful in shaping the role of Jia Qiang in the early stage, with flesh and blood, courage to be angry and hateful, a little scheming and passionate. But the further I write about the protagonist, he is no longer the protagonist, he becomes more like the main god! The good guy knew everything about the enemy's plan first. One danger he encountered was that Jia Qiang had already expected to catch fish, and he could hide it from the readers from God's perspective. The readers didn't know how he could tell when he was ready... There is also the trick that the dirty mother played on Jia Qiang... It can be seen that the protagonist is indeed the son of a dirty mother. All the awesome things are added to him. He has infinite strength, wears heavy armor and kills enemies for a long time and kills countless enemies. He has an endless appetite. Two roasted whole sheep for a meal, two! Even if one sheep produces thirty kilograms of meat and sixty kilograms of meat, can you stuff it into your body? Anatomy, biology, and medicine can't explain it. Jia Qiang is not Godzilla or Sandra, but he is not so edible! In your fictional world view of history, such behavior is logically impossible! If you build a world view of silicon-based life, you can write about him drinking sulfuric acid and pulling bricks, but such a person cannot exist in your world view. Chekhov has a famous saying: "If a gun is described in a novel, then the gun will definitely go off." But what is the meaning of the dirty girl writing this? In addition to seriously tearing apart the worldview, is it indispensable for plot advancement? Even if it is to make money, if you put it another way, would you make more money by writing more words? This is the second argument for Jia Qiang to become the main god. Let's look at the third point. The third point is psychology. The further you write about Jia Qiang, the closer she is to the Holy Spirit. There is no question about self-realization, and there is no pavement for the growth and transformation of her mental journey. Her feelings are abandoned. Faced with Xiaowu's reaction, Jia Qiang immediately took precautions and then ambush... Then you wrote so much about brotherhood, but in the final confrontation, no one said anything about the mental journey of the two of them. Is this because they have the ability to read each other's minds or something? Is it always an act when facing a close friend who you play with, get punished with, and fight with? So what's the point of your acting? Tell readers that there is no real friendship in this world, but only interests? Even if you write like this, you still have to foreshadow it! Only God knows that everything is false and He alone knows the truth. From these three points, Dirty Mother's portrayal of Jia Qiang as the protagonist is a failure. From the perspective of plot advancement, if you replace Jia Qiang with Lin Ruhai or Zhang San, it will be the same. As long as he can anticipate the enemy's attack, as long as he can advance to open the sea, anyone can be this character, (of course not for sex scenes), then Jia Qiang is not indispensable... The character is not realistic and cannot stand up. Let's talk about the plot and supporting characters. Many book friends have complained here, and they haven't stopped from the beginning to the end... The dirty lady's explanation for this is: "I copied the documentary, and copied the real historical figures." This is the fatal part, dirty mother! The act of copying homework will lead to many things being ignored! For example, if you copy the mathematical derivative question, and you just copy the result, can you complete the correct process yourself? It's difficult because other people's ideas may not be the same as yours. What is it like for a dirty mother to copy this? Eisenhower put it in the documentary about the Normandy landing, which is indeed awesome and very real, but when you move it over and see: Jia Qiang gave birth to another son, what is his name? Eisenhower! Isn't this nonsense! Can you copy the overall environment of the time when you copy the documentary? Can the characters, methods and plot you brought over adapt to the worldview and environment of the book you wrote? Obviously not! The specific situation is analyzed on a case-by-case basis. A good method that is suitable here does not mean that it is suitable in another environment. For example, what the dirty mother said about uniting the majority... Shit! You have offended everyone in the world! Moreover, you have no foundation, and the grassroots officials are not your people. You still have to buy grain in disaster years. This is to allow the feudal landlord class to implement land annexation in disaster years in an attempt to completely scrap it... If no one can reduce wages by one yuan, how can they directly cut off their financial resources? How many people are there in the landlord class in feudal society? Don't forget the land complex. Every level of scholars, farmers, industrialists and merchants who have money buys houses and land. Who can you unite with? Do you want to open the sea policy? I'll use your next month's salary to buy a fund, and I'll make sure you make a profit! I'll give you your year-end bonus to buy you a small shop. As long as you run it well, you will definitely earn a lot! Opening a sea requires a huge initial investment for them, and even their generation of elders will not see the day of abundant output, but the annexation of easily accessible land has broken this leg... You said Jia Qiang cares about the people? The good guy sailed away by himself, leaving behind the unarmed people and the feudal landlords who had just been cheated out of a large sum of money... This is really loving the people like a son. 233. At that time, uniting the majority also went through a complicated and difficult process, and the most important thing is to have faith and spirit. Can Jia Qiang tell the people this? Jia Qiang's own Delin is a product of capital! Let's talk about whether Jia Qiang can join hands with the Empress Dowager and the Empress Dowager to become a ruler in a substantial sense? Can justice be preserved with the endorsement of the Empress Dowager and the Queen Mother? The answer is of course no. The status of women in feudalism is not enough to support the orthodox status. Some book friends said, what about Xiaozhuang, Wu Zetian, and Cixi? Please note that I said orthodox. Are they considered orthodox? Are they ordered by heaven and destined to do so? Is it the country that he conquered by raising his own troops? How have they been evaluated in history? Do the literati class recognize them? If approved, would history write this way? Obviously not, the literati did not recognize them, and their submission at that time was a backhand stabbing after they stepped down, leaving such an image in the history books... Of course, what some people did, the literati just wrote the truth, and the evaluation was negative, right Cixi? Moreover, Xiao Wu had already told the story about Empress Yin and Jia Qiang at that time, and a natural banner for the resistance forces was Jia Qiang. Kinky. The palace was disrupted, the Queen Mother and the Queen Mother were deceived, and we waited for the Qing Emperor to side. Some people say how could there be a rebellion during the Taiping years? Not to mention the feudal empire period, there were many rebels. Basically, there were rebels in every dynasty and every emperor. Just say that Jia Qiang touched everyone's cakes, and Baji threw the cakes on the ground and said to them: "No, why don't we order takeout? You just pay the delivery fee." How confident does he have that he can actually hold power? Eight hundred years later, no one wants an official, no official, and only benefits. Why? Who listens to your imperial edict? You are the false emperor as soon as the manifesto comes out! The open sea fields do not say whether they are divided enough or not, but they say that after they are divided, the Delin will basically monopolize transportation, and the Delin will acquire... The first year of high price acquisition, the second year of evaluation, the third year of low price, the fourth year of your wish to sell or not, etc. The bad routine has long been played by the landlords. Why should I believe you? The characters in the documentary mentioned by Dirty Mother may really say and do this, but you don't know what the deal is behind them! If ordinary people do things that seem stupid but they still do it, it goes without saying that there must be a deal! But if you only write about the stupidity but not the deal, you are really stupid... Other book friends have already complained enough about Xiao Wu, other supporting characters, and the military merit system. I am saying that I am just picking on others. That's all for the complaints about the plot.  Finally, let's take a look at the text: It gives me the feeling that the face of a beauty is like a fish falling into the wild goose, the moon is shy of the flower, the eyebrows are lowered and the head is powdered on the temples. Then looking down, the fish is falling into the wild goose, the moon is shying of the flowers, the eyebrows are lowered and the head is powdered... And further down, it is still the fish falling into the wild goose, the moon is shy, the flower is shy, the eyebrows are lowered and the head is powdered on the temples... Why does this beauty only have a face! The face is the head, the neck is the head, the body is the head... They are all heads! This is so terrifying! The overall writing will make readers more familiar and tired of it in the end. This is my intuitive feeling as a reader. Encountering danger at the end of the chapter Chapter 2 finds out that it was already anticipated and arranged, and everyone is happy with the pretense and slap in the face. Finally, it ends with Jia Qiang's verbal abuse... It's too much to write it like this. Look, I pointed it out from the time Daiyu burned the car until the attack on Xiaoliuqiu at the end. This routine is still the same. Good guy, this is really powerful. Another fatal point is that the plot directly controls the characters. The characters are like puppets on strings. When they should jump and react, they can pretend to be stupid and obedient when the plot needs to advance, and they can sacrifice their own interests to fully support Jia Qiang. The characters written in this way are very flat and thin. How thin can they be? The filthy bitches have to use Xiaobaiwen themselves, the methods commonly used by cute newcomers: Baba's explanations, piles of adjectives, to describe, but with little effect. Does it look familiar? Did you remember the confrontation between Xiao Wu and Jia Qiang? Oops, the hatred written about Xiao Wu cannot be washed away by the water of the seven seas... Is there any essential difference between this and squinting one's eyes, this person is so terrifying! No. Because the characters are not standing still, the contrast in their personalities is huge, just like marionettes. So it seems that the readers just can't accept it. It's fine if the whole article is unsustainable. The dirty lady clearly wrote all the people in the Grand View Garden very well. She even wrote a few small words about each other's thoughts clearly. Readers will see this comparison. When it comes to writing, I have to say that it is refreshing. After all, this is a refreshing article. The cool points of this book are obvious. One of the most written about beauties and the other is talkative. Every time, Jia Qiang's lengthy talk kills everyone. But later on, the readers became tired of aesthetics and continued to write like this. In addition to the description of beauties, there are also extra descriptions in the book. These are the main cool points. As for the later talk, why were you upset? A large part of the reason is also the context. For example, when writing about Jia Qiang's negotiations with envoys from various countries, Jia Qiang said sternly: We will not cede territory! No compensation! No marriage! The emperor dies and the king of the country guards the country! If you put this in the Ming Dynasty, enemies coming from the north every year would combine with the Han and Tang Dynasties and pro-Song Dynasty to pay indemnity to see if it was upright and iron-clad, but what about this? I just won a battle here, so I punched you down, and then said: Oh, you scared me to death, I am not afraid of you, you can't bully me! I won't give in! Isn't that ridiculous? To say this on this occasion is to admit weakness and consider yourself inferior. Even if you win, you will be extremely afraid of taking advantage of the interests of the Redwood Country. In terms of military strength comparison, trying to make the other party give up the attack... How can this be exciting? As I said before, this kind of rigid expression without looking at the surrounding environment cannot be written well.        ，， It is difficult to tell that many plots are the result of serious thinking by the author. They just talk about a lot of problems casually. They just think of a result and then forcefully give him a way to complete it. Even if it is unreasonable, at least it is written out. This is how it feels to me. I understand the update speed of online articles, and I also know that the plot is difficult to perfect, but even if you lay down the foreshadowing three chapters in advance, it will be much more reasonable to write it later. What did Jia Qiang do, how did he arrange what news he received, Xiao Wu's mental journey, and the inadvertent hint of darkness when his father called him a waste. These plus the twist can come back. The author didn't write it and then laughed and said to the readers, hahahaha. Didn't you guess it? Nonsense, you have lied to God! The O. Henry ending is unexpected and reasonable! It's not an accident. It's an accident! What you wrote is even unreasonable. How could readers not criticize it? If you just talk about subscriptions, does it mean that your writing is good? Didn't your own king, spare your life, also subscribe in the later period? Aren't you still at the end? How come this book subscription has become an excuse for you to hide your shame? Readers can tell if they don't write well or conceive well. The author constructs the world and the readers are the ones who experience it! It is precisely because I like this world that I don't want it to collapse due to all kinds of unreasonableness. This is a reader's expectation for the author. I don't write novels, and I have no interests involved with you. I don't make any money by scolding you, but it's because I spent money that I want to read a better book. I give my opinion because I want to make my own insignificant contribution to the development of online literature. With the continuous development of online literature, readers' aesthetics are also improving. I hope we can make progress together!

I really can't stand the hairtail fish! ! ! Every day, I smile and sneer everywhere, like needles and thorns. Being the heroine with this kind of character is a sin! ! ! Xiao Jiaoer and Xiao Jixiang are much better than her. I skipped her appearance when I saw her. Then look at Jia Qiang's licking. I was so disgusted that I vomited! ! ! A book with a score of 100 can only give you 80, and the 20 will be deducted from the hairtail fish.

Don't be ambiguous, be direct, kill if you want to kill, rebel if you need to, and defend if you need to, and don't be so naive as to tolerate each other for the sake of the country. Sometimes it's good, sometimes it's bad. Is it cheap or not?

I read half of the book and then read the extra. Maybe it doesn't make sense to evaluate a book that was written a few years ago today. But after reading the extra, I feel that it is completely different from the previous one. The protagonist portrayed by the previous author always emphasizes his heart for the common people, but the extra is a feudal intrigue. The protagonist completely integrates into the feudal society in three years. It is not that he is like the ancients, but he no longer has the qualities of a modern youth, let alone always. While improving the country's laws and immersed himself in feudal ideas but never tried to change, his so-called great ambition to conquer all countries, in the end, left nothing but a simpler feudal society. Looking at the last part, I really don't know what he is writing. How can we talk about true liberation without leaving the fire of thought? Is it because he has experienced the compromise of the old society after the thought of the new era has passed? At first glance, it seems that it is Li Yan's feudal reincarnation? Generally speaking, the extra chapter has a petty atmosphere. If the author wants to let go and write more openly, don't go around in the palace and feudal society. People are really angry about it, so I am complaining. The book has been written, and how to write it is not what I, a half-hearted reader who spent dozens of dollars, can say. If you don't like it, don't complain.

When will the author publish a map? Cultural geography is not good in the first place. Please publish it and let us take a look!

Monthly Pass Chapter 3, author, come on!

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First of all, there is no doubt that the author is definitely one of the best writers of Red Mansions fan fiction. There is no need to doubt the author's writing style and strength. Moreover, the author has a guarantee that the book will be completed. Newbies, please feel free to enter. The following is a brief explanation of my personal opinion: there are some thunderous points or some poisonous points that should not appear in the Red Mansion novel. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. 1. Harem, I don't have to worry about this, the author's book guarantees it, so I won't elaborate too much. 2. Regarding the question of which heroines will be accepted in the end, there is no doubt that Bao Dai must have it. There is no reason. Next, it depends on how the author arranges the identity of the protagonist. This setting arrangement directly determines the ownership of Miharu in the book. Thanks to the previous book, another identity problem is solved. Others in Twelve Hairpins such as Shi Xiangyun are also necessary. Miaoyu, Qiaojie, and Li Zhi are relatively few and difficult to write. I think Miaoyu's arrangement can indeed be a main line and write some plots if the author can. The other two are unrealistic and I don't recommend it. The character of Sister Feng is very contradictory. It may be very unreasonable to rush into it without a very reasonable plot, so I have reservations. Qin Keqing needs no further explanation. As for the process, it is basically the same. There are some minor points that are easy to deal with. Just let the matter be resolved as soon as possible (forgive me for not being too clear. I am afraid of being cheated). Xiangling and Qingwen must have it. Like Ping'er, Shang Shangben left a deep impression on me. This one is a must, and it would be best to add Xing Xiuyan and Yuanyang. Xiren Xiaohong depends on the author's mood. In short, don't miss out on the basics of women. You can expand and extend it appropriately. The more the better. If the emotional drama is well written, no one will criticize it. The characters in the original work cannot be moved. If you want a supporting role, tell the author not to involve the characters in the book. 3. The sacred sculpture is not allowed. Either don't write it, or accept it otherwise it will be difficult for readers to accept it. 4. Some of the character setting issues of the heroines cannot deviate from the original work. This should not be done because the author is the old Red Mansion writer. Except for Qin, the heroine must be c 5. Regarding the overall framework of the whole book, it is obviously unrealistic to write all about the events in the Red Mansion. It will definitely involve the imperial examination, gc, and battlefield. These are good derivative points, but they can also easily become the failure of a book. How to deal with it is an important factor in whether the Red Mansion novel can achieve good results, because these derivative points will collapse if they are not well written, and they will be long and smelly, which will bore the readers. However, if there is a plot like Crescent Moon in JD, it will be the finishing touch. Of course, this also requires the author to think carefully. The image creation of the emperor in The Red Mansion is also very important. It cannot be brainless or there should be no huge contrast between the front and back. In short, it must be in line with the normal character. 6 The shaping of the protagonist's image is undoubtedly the most critical. The character of a protagonist immediately determines whether the book can be read. To be honest, the last book was not very good. The Virgin and the like did not work. On the contrary, it would discourage many people. Sometimes the protagonist is better to be selfish. He has intelligence but is good to his relatives and lovers. This is the character that attracts everyone. 7. Writing problem, don't worry about this. The author's writing style can be trusted. If possible, write more emotional dramas. Old men who watch Red Mansions all like to watch emotional dramas. You can slightly abuse the protagonist because the plot requires something, but the main tone should be a refreshing novel. 8. Routineization of models is a problem that many authors currently have. Transformation is not easy. I have read many books, but I won't list their names here. Because one book is a hit, the next few books will follow the same pattern. People who have read one book will know all the plots that follow, and then the next few books will slowly lose many readers. A reasonable setting of mystery will make readers more interested in reading. Phew, this is the first time I have written so many words in a comment. Seeing that I have worked so hard, can you please give me some credit? It would be better if the author could reply to me. Finally, I want to say that harem is not easy, you have to do it and cherish it. You don't have to love it, but please don't hurt it, and don't come to the comment area to criticize the book. If you have any opinions, please mention them well, and let's help the author improve together, okay? I just want to say that when the author is in a bad mood, don't forget that there is a group of readers like me behind you. We will always support you.

It is better to write a different version of Red Mansion, with the protagonist's character, such as the protagonist in The Ultimate Butler, who is talented and talented (modern advanced knowledge and talents) and flirts with girls (modern advanced methods of flirting with girls), and the Wei Xiaobao-type shameless flirt in The Deer and the Cauldron. A character that combines both wit and loyalty to heroes and friends. In many novels, the protagonists are sentimental about the world, or they are just and awe-inspiring, or they are kind to others, or they are always humble and modest, or they do not strive for anything, and they do not care about fame, wealth, power, or women. I feel tired and numb when I see them The background world is like one where multiple big countries coexist and compete for hegemony. The world will be better if I think it will be better, so I can write about the bloody war that many people love The struggle for power in the court, and the protagonist using some superior modern knowledge to start a business and make money in business, improve some social technological conditions, and change some political systems and governance efficiency methods, it is also best to write about it In terms of women , it would be better if the protagonist could play around with the two houses of Rongning and Ning, and pursue and accommodate many beautiful ladies and maids in the Red Mansion, such as Xue Baochai, Xue Baoqin, Lin Meizi, Shi Meizi, Li Wan, Qin Keqing (secret love), Wang Xifeng (it's best if the child she gives birth to is the protagonist's, not Jia Lian's, the stolen love is also very interesting) the three sisters of the You family, the Xing family's sister, and the Wang family's sister Wait for the twelve beauties in Jinling, and many beautiful maids, Xiren, Qingwen, Sheyue, etc. (All the beautiful maids in Jia Baoyu's Yihong Courtyard, including all the girls), Ping'er, Zicuckoo, Jinchai, Yinchao, Yuanyang, Xiang Yun, wait The best, in addition to the beauties in the Jia family being accommodated, arrange some distinctive beauties from outside for the protagonist to flirt with, contact and entangle, and accept them, for example, the royal family The princess of the emperor (a capable woman), the princess of the prince (the eccentric and tricky woman), the daughter of a powerful official (a woman with political wisdom), the princess or the daughter of a minister of another country (to facilitate the preparation of internal affairs for the unification of many countries in the future), the daughter of a giant businessman (a beautiful woman with business ability, who helps the protagonist to collect money and develop business in front of the screen. After all, the protagonist is following the path of a scholar and official, and is not good at doing business behind the scenes, so he can only manipulate, guide and provide points behind the scenes. The daughter of a general (the literary protagonist has the support of the army), the daughter of a martial arts sect or a mountain king (the ability to organize espionage and collect intelligence), the daughter of a well-off family (the tenderness of a pair of sons, who can adjust the taste, eat more big dishes, eat the small dishes), and many other beauties outside the Red Mansion It is best to arrange for the powerful emperor of the dynasty where the protagonist is to have no prince or male successor, or The sick and weak prince might not be able to inherit the throne, which caused other members of the clan to compete fiercely for the throne, each with their own agendas, fighting each other for power and secretly, and fighting with the current emperor (the current emperor also came to power through cruel and ruthless means, killing many of the emperor's brothers before he came to the throne, offending many people, and the remaining emperor's brothers), and fighting with the protagonist. In the end, the two-horse protagonist, who is the consort and the princess's horse, because he is the husband of the princess and the princess. The emperor who was vicious and cruel and hated those who opposed him. He also killed his princes and made him extinct. He simply passed the throne to the son of the protagonist and the princess who changed his surname to the royal surname. Before his death, he also killed all other members of the royal family who were in the way. The son successfully ascends to the throne, paving the way for the protagonist to assist the government After that, the protagonist can be arranged to assist the government, a series of reforms to the government, and some political systems (such as the establishment of directly elected local councils elected by civilians, and local council members, and then elected An indirect court-level parliament; establish an administrative cabinet system composed of multiple people elected by the parliament and supervised by the emperor and parliament; establish independent vertical management of the Judicial Yuan, the Prosecution Yuan, the Police Yuan (police function), the Intelligence Department, and the Secret Service Department at all levels; establish the Royal Academy of Sciences, Ordnance Technology Department, Military Academy, Hospital, Medical College, Business Management Department, Navy Department, etc.), Struggle with all forces, descriptions of wrangling, and the plot of reforming a strong country and strengthening the army. As it develops, how will the protagonist develop a series of plots to fight for hegemony and unify multiple countries? I feel that this is a different Red Mansion.

Xue Baochai in my heart

Record the appearance of the second sister-in-law, and give a reward of 1,000

Sister Feng

To be honest, I feel like this author likes to write cuckold stories. If you decide to let the protagonist accept this woman, don't always imply that this woman wants to sleep with another man. Otherwise, don't accept it. The writing is too offensive.

Congratulations on the completion, the end of one dream represents the beginning of another dream, see you in Dream of Red Mansions

I went to listen to the book, and all I can say is that Queen Mother Yin and Heping'er's voice actors are great. Every time I talk to Jia Qiang, I feel like the Queen Mother and Jia Qiang are having sex.

I have read all of your Red Mansions trilogy. They are really good. I like them very much. This is the first time I have spent hundreds of dollars on a novel. I am looking forward to your fourth book Red Mansions. I will definitely order them all.

The author doesn't understand what an emperor is, and he hasn't read the history of our country himself. The whole book is like an old farmer who feels that the emperor plows the land with gold hoes all day long. It's better not to write political articles in the future. You don't have the ability to write.

The protagonist uses his pen to pretend to be patriotic, and this kind of person is often the first to surrender during a war. The front is fine, but the back sounds uncomfortable. Discard it

The author is suffering from literary youth disease, right? The middle part of the game is a bit boring. I wanted to see the ending first before continuing, but I just gave up on the remaining 1/3😭😭😭

It's a rubbish book. The main character lectures everyone. It's disgusting. 🤢

The author's writing style is very good, the characters and details are very good

First of all, when it comes to harem stories, I personally hate doting on one female protagonist. Unless the female protagonist has a life-saving grace for the male protagonist or betrays the whole world, you still stand by my side. But Daiyu obviously does not meet one of these two conditions, she is just a normal long-lasting love, and all the male protagonist's subsequent preferences for her are a bit licking the dog, and Li Jing has become a tool. I can only say that I am a little disappointed.

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In the last book, the author used Jia Lian to disgust the readers. This book also disgusts the readers. What a turtle.

Meager support, chatting to express love, and ending with flowers and a lot of reluctance.

He won't abuse his master like a concubine. Isn't it frustrating to watch?

Hahahaha

Those who are cool by the wind are on the list

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