After the Rebellion Succeeded, I Learned This Was the Story of the Red Chamber

It feels like you are forcibly involved with the Jia family. What is it that is not yours?

I came from Daily Guide, and the writing is okay. The protagonist's status is raised too high at the beginning of this book, and there is nothing to write about. It also raises the status of Jin Chai and others too high. To be honest, they are just slaves and maidservants, and they regard themselves as princesses. I feel that this is also in the same vein as Red Mansions. However, there are still few chapters. I look forward to writing better.

I don't understand why the author kept a large group of concubines from the previous dynasty in the palace? They are still nameless and have too much bad taste.

Don't talk about worrying about the gods, and then treat Jia's family well. You have become the emperor, and you have killed so many people, and you are still afraid of the gods.

This means that if a Red Mansions fan were writing a historical novel, I would have to criticize him! ! ! ! The biggest contradiction or poisonous point of this book is that the tone is too high! ! At first, I thought that the arrival of Liu Bang and Zhu Yuanzhang was a blessing. After all, they conquered the world from a young boy, and the protagonist was only twenty-four years old. The ranking of historical emperors was already in the top ten in history from the moment they captured Beijing! After that, as soon as I entered Beijing, I went crazy to visit the concubines of the former dynasty. It was okay once or twice, but I felt it was inappropriate to hold it for a long time. The princess was okay, and the queen was like this. I saw this, wasn't she a king? Suddenly, I felt that the emperor's power dropped wildly, and his historical ranking dropped to around twenty in my mind! Let's go back to the plot with Jin Chai in the Red Mansion, and being with Li Wan, Wang Xifeng, Yuanchun, and Qin Keqing also looks like Prime Minister Cao! This ranks thirty again! [In my mind, Prime Minister Cao is not as good as King Gao in terms of charisma and power as an emperor. Of course, he is just ranking the emperor. Prime Minister Cao is still better than King Gao in terms of ability! ] Then he had ambiguities and flirtations with Bao Dai, Xiang Yun, and San Chun. After all, this is a good thing for fellow Red Mansions. That emperor didn't just wake up to hold the power of the world and lie drunk in the lap of a beautiful woman. This is just like Zhu Jianshen and Shunzhi! ! ! In the end, even the maid was wildly flirting with him, and the palace maid and eunuch made a mistake and taught the maid with a pleasant look, haha, this is Jia Baoyu! ! ! Your emperor has no character at all. He conquered the world in his twenties at the beginning. He is not crazy at all. He is a good gentleman to everyone. He is not decisive at all towards his subordinates. This kind of character is really not worthy of being the founding emperor. It is difficult to be a general! ! ! Of course, after all, everyone in the Red Mansion community admires and dislikes Jia Baoyu. This idea of ​​becoming the founding emperor at the beginning is unbeatable from the perspective of gathering all the gold hairpins. Those who started the Jia family should really not mess with it. The author's writing style is also good. The monthly pass is given to you, but it's a little watery, and the update is too slow! ! !

Oh, please don't do those things that abolish modern ideas or something. I'm really convinced.

Confess Lin Daiyu, castrate Jia Baoyu, and serve the concubine 😜

5 Days of siege, 30 chapters captured

After reading a few chapters, the author's writing is indeed good, but to be honest, the topic selection is really poor. At first glance, I don't know how to proceed. How to write a rebellion in the Red Mansion and become the emperor? How to write the heroine? How to write the garden as a harem? Which emperor's harem is full of women who have been confiscated from their homes... And more than half of them are second-hand, how can they be concubines? How to become a queen? The girls in the Jia family are all wives and daughters of officials from the previous dynasty. Lin Daiyu and Xue Baochai have no fathers. Even if Lin Ruhai is not dead and surrenders to the protagonist, can the daughter of a surrendered minister be made queen? There is a complete mismatch in status. And if the Twelve Beauties really become a harem, the layout is too small and illogical at all. Will we be able to write about the governance of the country in the future? But if you add other girls, wouldn't the theme of Red Mansion be in vain? In the future, all the twelve hairpins will become strangers Is it possible that you want to ascend to the fairy world? Write the Twelve Hairpins as immortals? That's even weirder, a second-hand fairy who refines her heart in the world of mortals? Even more uncomfortable. So I really don't know what the author will write in the future, and it feels contradictory no matter how I write.

There is no need for the author to write about any golden hairpin. Any maid is more beautiful than the maids in the entire palace, which is a bit inconsistent. You can use the mentality of collecting stamps, possessiveness, and having a taste after learning the identity to handle the plot.