The Dao Begins at Penglai

Have you ever considered that the timeline can be traveled at will? Isn't Hongjun invincible? He was the first to realize Daluo. Isn't he prepared for the future? Is it so easy for people from the future to travel to the past timeline? , Since Hongjun is the supreme leader of the future, how can these losers change the past?

It starts out amazing, then slowly becomes more and more vulgar, and in the end it's either a street fight or a fetal monitor.

Regarding the plot direction, characters, magic weapons, plot deductions and various plots in the book, it can be mentioned that a book is not only the bloom of the author's personal thoughts, but also the result of the joint efforts of everyone. I hope that in the last fight, a little fire will rise and a ripple will be made.

The fight with Luo Hu was really embarrassing to watch. Luo Hu wanted to engulf the Great Desolation. Instead of doing it secretly, he openly announced it to the world. All he had to do was say on his face, "I am the villain. Let's fight me together." Or the protagonist? Or readers? Is it fun to rub our IQs on the ground?

Although the realm of writing is gaudy, why does it feel like a déjà vu in a martial arts novel where you punch me and I slap you?

My personal guess about the author's setting, the writing is limited and I use a competition metaphor. First of all, in this ancient world, it is the finals, and Pangu is the champion of the finals. The innate holiness is the world of chaos in the past. The supreme holiness is just like the winner of the group stage and the innate spiritual treasures and innate spiritual roots are the losers in the group stage. The winner is Pangu, and one competition is a Pangu era.

The writing is good, but the plot is awkward.

Comment Why do I feel that the plot is like the founder of the ancient god stick? The plot is a bit awkward, building humanity and slaying ferocious beasts...

I would like to give some advice to the author. Don't write about people from the past who come to kill the protagonist in the present. It started well. However, as soon as you wrote the plot of going back in time, you felt like you were addicted. You originally thought you would write about a spiritual path that is different from the prehistoric times, but you kept dragging people from the past to kill the protagonist in the present. Your method of forcibly creating conflict is too obvious. The writing style is really good, and it feels like a fairy tale. As I mentioned before, the poison is usually just a mention to bring suspense. Also, I think it's the most embarrassing thing for you to bring memories to kill the protagonist. I don't believe that the river of time is so slow that even saints don't dare to do it. It's outrageous that a big Luo can change time. I can shoulder such a big cause and effect. The general layout is on the original timeline. Adding variables already has a big cause and effect, and even directly killing an innate saint made me drunk.

Congratulations on the launch🤭🤭