The Dao Begins at Penglai

Have you considered that if timelines can be traversed at will, wouldn't Hongjun be invincible? He was the first to attain the Great Luo Dao. Did he not prepare for the future? Would it be so easy for people from the future to travel to the past? Since Hongjun is the supreme being of the future, and he is the victor, what right do these losers have to change the past?

It starts off amazing, then gradually becomes more and more cliché, and in the end it either flops or fails miserably.

Regarding the plot development, characters, magical artifacts, plot progression, and various events in the book, it can be said that a book is not only the blossoming of the author's personal thoughts, but also the result of the collective efforts of many people. May the final gamble ignite a spark and create even a ripple.

The fight with Rahu was so damn awkward. Rahu wanted to devour the primordial world, but instead of doing it secretly, he openly announced it to the world, practically saying, "I'm the big villain, everyone come and beat me!" And then the entire primordial world united to attack Rahu. Whose intelligence is the author underestimating? Rahu who has cultivated to the Taiyi level? The protagonist? Or the readers? Is it fun to rub our intelligence into the ground?

Although the writing style is flashy and elaborate, it somehow gives me a sense of déjà vu, like something out of a martial arts novel where you punch me and I punch you back.

This is my personal speculation about the author's setting, and due to my limited writing skills, I'll use a competition analogy. First, this primordial world is the final, with Pangu as the grand champion. The innate deities, who are supreme deities born from the past chaotic world, are like the winners of the group stage, while the innate spiritual treasures and innate spiritual roots are…

The writing is good, but the plot is awkward.

Give a review I feel like the plot I wrote is similar to "The Primordial God and the Founding Ancestor," the plot is a bit awkward, it's about establishing humanity and slaying ferocious beasts...

Here's a suggestion for the author: stop writing about people from the past coming to the present to kill the protagonist. The beginning was fine, but after you started writing the time-reversal plot, it felt like you were addicted. I initially thought it would be a cultivation path different from the primordial world, but you keep bringing people from the past to the present to kill the…

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