The Great Shun

Finally, I would like to say a few words. In ancient times, the protagonist of time-travel novels had only two choices: to be a dog or to be a human, and neither of them was considered a good person, so don't act like a good person and do what the protagonist thinks is good. Let's be realistic. Readers just like to see the kind of darkness. Readers don't care whether the protagonist is a good person. What they care about is how the protagonist kills his enemies, even if the means are dirty and dirty.

A pig is still a pig after crossing over, and will never become a dragon. What's the point of this book? Persuade to quit

The biggest problem with this book is that it is a mess. The author assumes that the protagonist is a person who does not read novels and does not care about history. He only has a little knowledge in history textbooks in his mind. He is like an idiot who knows nothing about the Ming Dynasty, and has a lot of unnecessary plots. Moreover, the protagonist also knows nothing about money-making products such as soaps and mirrors. He relies entirely on the local industry of the Ming Dynasty to make money by selling salt, and the development speed is very slow. Overall, it's pretty good, but the protagonist's settings are not good, resulting in too much water...

Turn all of your own people into farm slaves, without freedom, and their descendants will also be slaves. There may be no descendants, because they can only eat half full when they work and die, and they will probably starve to death even if they give birth to children. What logic? When the protagonist's thugs are weak, they will definitely rebel. Could it be that the author lives in such a society and thinks it is better to be a slave???

The author is really speechless when writing this time traveler protagonist. I can understand why he can't light up the technology tree. After all, not everyone is an expert. But you must at least write that he understands history and is a historical figure, but he doesn't understand anything! We also know the Tatar Wu Sangui and the like. As for the use of modern people's thinking, I have not seen it at all after reading so many chapters. It is simply that the people around the protagonist suddenly burst out with their imaginations to give the protagonist advice. There is nothing that the protagonist came up with. For example, farming, the assembly line operations written in this chapter, and the fire gun soldiers' exhaust fire were all thought up by foreigners. Doesn't it make sense to write like this? The protagonist has no charm at all, and relies entirely on the protagonist's halo to attract help from experts. So it's not a big problem to write that he doesn't travel through time, right?

I was almost thrown into trouble by the comments, couldn't the author delete those negative comments? Bi

As a modern person who has served in the military, no matter how poor his academic qualifications are, he still doesn't understand the basic principles of steel and iron. He doesn't understand the steam engine, but he always knows about water power, right?

To summarize: 1: The protagonist has served in the People's Liberation Army in modern times, and knows military body boxing. The guy's strength is incredible, so he is in the wrong era, otherwise Lu Bu would have been able to get in first; 2: The protagonist has served in the People's Liberation Army in modern times, and can stand in a military posture and run in circles. If you use this set to train troops, he will be a strong army in the world. God can block and kill God, four hundred steps. The soldiers can withstand the existence of eight hundred cavalry; 3: The protagonist has served in the People's Liberation Army in modern times. The military posture of the People's Liberation Army naturally produces a kind of coercion of Gu Changzixiong, which can only be seen in people above the general of the army (original text in the book), so everyone respects them unconsciously... In this way, there are still many people coming to vote.

Modern soldiers must at least have some understanding of firearms. The craftsmen of Liaodong are making fire systems. Can't the protagonist give some inspiration or advice? Flintlock gun, fixed gunpowder, granular gunpowder, don't know anything about it?

In the end, he became the emperor, divided the land with all the landlords and bureaucrats, and made the people become serfs. It was fucking worse than the Manchus! He also said that he was a soldier and his life was in vain.

Assassination on a shoulder pole, I don't want to see it for a moment. A hungry man, armed with a pole, can stab an official with a knife. This man stands there and lets you stab him for a long time. Can you show me how to kill him?

😅 A few casualties kill hundreds of enemies, a dozen casualties kill a thousand enemies, and they use cold weapons. It's really embarrassing!

It's too long-winded, and it's too confusing to talk about things. It's too tiring to read.

A bunch of people came to criticize the author more than ten years after he published the book, and I was also drunk. More than ten years ago, I borrowed pirated books from a bookstore when I was a student. Today, I suddenly remembered this author and searched for it.

This is Lao Bai's second book. I read it straight away when I was in college. It is an old book that is more than ten years old. There was no messy manipulation at that time. The biggest feature of this book is that it is actually more realistic. It is not as thick as the past and not as modern as the general historical hegemony books. The corruption of the last empire is more vividly written.

What does Z say? It's too far-fetched. He still stared at the last girl. There are no beautiful women in modern times? It's like he's never seen a woman before. It's already in ancient times. You don't understand three wives and four concubines? No matter what happens, I just think about my parents and express my sympathy. It's too forced, and I force the relationship.

Dude, I just started reading it. There are only more than 500 chapters. Isn't it unfinished...

It's too watery. One war can be written in 150,000 words. The most watery book I have ever read is Water King.

When I saw a woman suddenly come out of Kaifeng Mansion, I didn't want to look at it anymore, and the painting style changed suddenly.

Don't be fooled by the bad reviews, it's still pretty good, I've read it 3 times

No one under thirty years old can read this book!

There is no firepower, protection, or mobility. If you train so many spearmen, is this training for urban management?

There is no logic at all, and the writing is mindless.

After reading it all, I felt it was quite ordinary. The protagonist said he had joined the army, but when he returned, he didn't even know the progress of the development of firearms. And then hydraulic forging still has to rely on foreigners' guidance? This doesn't require any advanced knowledge, you can get some idea of ​​it as long as you watch movies. You don't have to know the specifics, but you should have an idea. If so many subordinates follow your idea, can the Football Association not lag behind ancient Europe? I feel like the combat part can still be explained, but if you don't say that you traveled through time and have a military background, it would be better. If you have been in the army, can you not understand the party's command of the gun? Can your team be scattered by the enemy and have to rely on the aura to reunite it? Anyway, I feel like I made a bug myself.

"An old man who traveled back in time picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Nod to see directly] A director graduate from his past life, accidentally time traveled and became an old man who picked up rags. He worked hard in variety shows, worked professionally, blackmailed people as a group actor, begged and explored ghosts on live broadcasts, sold fake goods, made horror videos to scare people, and made bad movies to survive. Traveling through different worlds to collect film materials and returning them to the big screen in reality, the audience went crazy watching it. You can invest with confidence

The failure of this book is not because it is not well written, but because it is too real, and it is difficult even for me, an old man like me, to read it. If you like physical books but are too hard to chew physical books, this is a good recreational book.

I heard that the protagonist is an idiot, which is my cup of tea. I like novels like this, similar to Can Ming.

I downloaded Qidian from Baidu after reading the book I saw elsewhere. I came here to say a few words (I had an account before but uninstalled it later). It is really amazing. For a person who is keen on novels and reads novels carefully, the author's description of the numbers in this article is quite impressive. It's amazing. The first number is 300 taels, followed by 500 taels and 800 taels. I won't show the specific numbers. Just give an example. Also, Zhou Yanru is Wen Tiren's former chief executive. First, Zhou Yanru served as the first assistant for several years, (the second assistant was Wen Tiren, Zhou Yanru was more than ten years younger than Wen Tiren, and Zhou Yanru was the first assistant at the age of 36). After Zhou Yanru stepped down, Wen Tiren became the first assistant, in the order of entry into the cabinet. Doesn't the protagonist like to read the Di newspaper? Zhou Yanru was the first assistant in the 3rd year of Chongzhen and became official in June 6th year. Wen Tiren became the first assistant in June 6th year and became official in June 10th year. Zhou Yanru became the first assistant in 14 years for the second time and was dismissed from office in 16 years.

One thousand and five muskets drove back twenty-eight thousand banner cavalry. I don't understand.

"Li Song" has almost 1 million words written. Why is no one reading it? Please take a moment to take a look at it. Single-player writing is so boring. ,