A Roll Call of Great Men

The classic story about Jia's nanny is not written as "worthy", purely because it is an original character and there is no brain to help or accept. The contrast between the protagonists is that on the one hand, he is wise and steady, but on the other hand, he is ignored by Wang Xifeng and takes away 20,000 silver. He can't help himself and runs away... It is not too much to say that it is smelly and long. Many words are told over and over again. Those who like to watch Red Mansions can't bear the length of officialdom, which often lasts dozens of chapters. There are too many female protagonists. What was said in the comments, "Every bitch from the Jia family will be accepted" is very vivid and fails to highlight the key points. For a long time, I couldn't see the characters I wanted to watch. It's not flavorful enough, it doesn't have the Red Mansion style, and some of the words are too modern. What is the concept of 8 million words? It can completely reshape a world, but the heroine in the writing is barely spiritual, and the officialdom part is not attractive. I skipped the whole process.

I really can't stand it anymore. The main character is so ambiguous with everyone. I'm halfway through the novel and I can't help but complain. It's a good novel, but it's like a harem novel. I can't complain.

The book "Fengliu" was probably written in the middle period, like a chess game in the middle game, a boat sailing in the middle of the river, all the forces from secret wrestling to open fire fighting, the mystery of Emperor Qiu Mi Yonglong in the Iron Net Mountain fell from his horse and fell into coma, and the former crown prince Zhongshun Wang and Wu Xunniu got together. Lu, Wang Ziteng took the opportunity to invade the capital and seize the throne in one fell swoop. However, due to Feng Ziying's planning and efforts to contact all forces in the capital, he was blocked by the new firearms of Jizhen soldiers and had to retreat to Nanjing to establish a puppet court. The Jia family finally became cannon fodder in this great change. The Jia family, which had been prominent for hundreds of years, finally became white and clean. Xiao Feng became the white horse knight of the daughters of the Jia family, saving them from the upcoming tragic fate. Xiao Feng's wish to "pluck flowers" was finally fulfilled. It's a pity that Duo Niuniu was written about Rui Daduo Qingwen's cousin because the readers didn't see her. Duo Niuniu is a minor character in the original novel Red Mansions, but she directly touches on the dark side of human nature (male). I just wanted to see how Rui Da made Xiao Feng face a woman like Duo Niuniu 🤭. Taking stock of the strengths of the players, the biggest star is still the comatose Emperor Yonglong, who has a legitimate name. The second is the Nanjing Puppet Court. Jiangnan is rich, has a population and soldiers, but the fatal name is incorrect. If the name is incorrect, the words will not be justified. If you are strong on the outside and do nothing in the middle, you will eventually be destroyed by the group. The third is the Supreme Emperor, the former emperor. How to play cards is unknown at the moment. The fourth is Feng Ziying's strongest potential stock, his father Feng Tang, General Bing, Xiao Feng has a circle of teachers such as Qiao Yingjia, Qi Yongtai, Guan Yingzhen, and the military circle You Shigong, his younger brother Zuo Liangyu, Qingtan's classmates, such as Lianshiguo, Fang Youdu, Xue Jia, Shanshan, etc. In the business circle. Lin Danhan of Mongolia from outside, Li Chuangwang of Shaanxi, and Nurhachi from outside the Pass are all opponents who can compete with Xiao Feng in a decisive battle. Come on, Xiao Feng, who has infinite scenery on the dangerous peak!

Let me complain, this book is not good to read, but it is definitely not good, otherwise I would not read the latest version. However, the whole book is too twisted. It feels like a lot of the plot relies on crazy interspersed dialogues between various characters. The characters are numerous and complex, and the plot progresses slowly. After one chapter, it may just describe a few pairs of people who appeared many chapters ago and take turns saying a few words, and then it is over, resulting in a poor follow-up experience. So I watched it for a while, and then I found that the experience was even worse. As I watched, a person who had appeared so many chapters ago suddenly appeared and said what he wanted to do, and said what he wanted to do (another character who had appeared so many chapters ago) said what he wanted to do. Then I felt like: Who is this? What does he want to do? What is this chapter about? So now I just jump through it and only watch the chapters where the girl appears. As for the plot? We don't know what the plot is about either. In general, there are too many clues in this book and it is too confusing. If readers have a lot of time and read it from beginning to end at once, they may find it very exciting. But for people like me who work 996 and only have bits and pieces of time to read books for entertainment, it is really difficult to figure out the context of the entire book.

A 15-year old bookworm, here are some old opinions. 1. The book is worth reading. 2. The harem plot is lengthy, especially the second half. Must all the women in the Red Mansion be included in the harem? It was really difficult for Regan. The plot of "Wang Xifeng" is really speechless and I don't want to watch it. 3. After a long time of preparation, we are about to enter the climax. But progress has been too slow. 4. Several romantic figures have seen the shadow of officialdom. Reagan is still the same old Reagan. 5. Some analysis of the officialdom is still reasonable. Machiavellian strategy, logic, long-term love for children, and success every step of the way. The book has some wonderful parts but also some parts that are too slow. At this pace, 8 million words will definitely not be finished.

The author can say that the ending of each book is the same, becoming an emperor, turning on the steam engine of the industrial revolution, etc., Then a constitutional monarch is established, and the prince must choose a worthy person. It's all a template from ten years ago. I can only say that there is nothing new in writing. I am just writing the same book with a different name but the content is almost the same.

Good! This is like a qualified feudal bureaucrat: evil-minded, ruthless, and willing to do whatever it takes to achieve his goal - only then does he show his fangs! It's no secret that in his previous life, he had a rich experience of several decades and was about to reach the deputy provincial level! The author wrote this chapter thrillingly, thumbs up! 👍👍👍

I always feel like this book has just begun after writing more than 4 million words. Because Dazhou has entered the brink of national subjugation, but the protagonist group still has no real rights to change. In addition, I would like to say that the author wants to portray every character in the book, which results in the book being very long, probably more than 15 million words.

Is the protagonist a son of the Jia family? I'm so eager to be a licking dog

Hey, Yingchun is very annoying. Even if you don't tell Jia She, you clearly know that they want money, but you don't tell the truth and you are in trouble. You even say that you are lustful and self-defiled, but you are still so ruined.

Many people say that the number of words in the dialogue between the supporting characters is limited. In fact, I think that writing novels is supported by the interaction and psychological activities between the protagonist and the supporting characters. The main reason is that now we are just following up on one chapter. It is inevitable that the author is not thinking carefully and the readers are too impatient. If Dream of Red Mansions were placed today, it would seem that there is no main plot at all. It would just be a description of a declining aristocratic family. This book at least has a main plot, which is to redeem the unfortunate fate of the Jia family's daughters, and to resist foreign invasion in the late Ming Dynasty, which led to the regression of Han civilization. Personal evaluation, there are slight flaws, but it is still a fine product.

In the new year, I hope that Lao Rui will be full of ideas and literary talents, he will update twenty chapters a day and all the chapters will be wonderful. End the fight for the throne as soon as possible, kill everyone, shock the world, and create a great cause.

Why didn't Emperor Yonglong give the deposed prince and his family poisonous wine to commit suicide? What if he died first? As for whether the Supreme Emperor really dared to participate, he was not afraid of Duke Huan of Qi starving to death. Sometimes he had to dare to give it a try

After reading more than 1,000 chapters, I would like to share my feelings: First of all, the writing style is undoubtedly good. Whether it is the protagonist or other supporting characters, not to mention they are penetrating and lifelike, but they are always delicate and vivid. Secondly, the plot progresses very smoothly, including the imperial examination, suggestions to open up the sea, laissez-faire local control, resistance to Mongolia, promotion and return to Beijing as an official, etc. The protagonist's step-by-step solid growth process and his pragmatic but yet diplomatic personality are also aspects that I like very much. But one thing I find hard to accept in this book is that the Red Mansion is to cultivate a harem for the protagonist? The Red Mansion has basically accepted everyone (you can imagine that the main character is basically the protagonist), but the Red Mansion is written with the Jia family as the main character and the nobles will fall in the end. When superimposed, it shows a bit of a Virgin (because not many women in the Red Mansion have a good life, so the protagonist cannot be helped?). So when there was basically a Red Mansions plot later on, I skipped watching it, because there were only three things I wanted to do here: pick up girls, help girls solve their problems, and pick up new girls. Having said that, I personally also like to watch the scenes of talented and romantic gentlemen. In ancient times, three wives and four concubines were considered to have fulfilled the dreams of male compatriots 😏, but it still felt a bit too much. And after that, combined with the character and attitude of the protagonist when he was an official, I felt that it was actually a bit conflicting. Summary: If you exclude the things I personally don't like about this book, in terms of writing style and the protagonist's character story, it is a good work with a score of 85 or above among historical texts. But for book friends who mind the above mentioned things like me, I will give this book a score of 70.

Getting better. The foreshadowing is almost time for the climax. Update more quickly

The emperor's women must have one or two!

I remember that several people said that Yuanyang has closed the house. I have already reminded them, so why are they still writing.

That's the end, let's make some comments! Of course, the author and other readers may not like it. The rise of the protagonist Feng Ziying and the defeat of the Jia family in this book are the struggle for the throne of the Zhou Dynasty, similar to Kangxi's Nine Dragons to seize the throne. The protagonist finally became the emperor, because of the extremely chaotic harem setting and the protagonist's own insistence on selecting talents because he was a modern person. In the end, the crown prince's position could not be decided, so that several talented sons were caught in the vortex of Kangxi's Nine Dragons to seize the throne. Therefore, after the protagonist travels through time, the reincarnation of history still comes, which cannot but be said to be extremely ironic. Actually, the author wanted to write about Kangxi's struggle to seize the throne in Jiulong, and also wanted to choose a suitable heir. I can understand that. But the political environment faced by the Manchu and Qing Dynasties and the protagonist are different. The Manchus were a foreign race and had their own Eight Banners base. Facing the huge number of Han people, they had to exercise restraint. No matter how hard they fought, they had a bottom line. As long as the Eight Banners base was still a deterrent, they would have the capital to subdue the landlords and scholar-bureaucrats. The situation of the protagonist is different. The protagonist is Han and has no basic base. If the fight is open, there may be a situation like the Eight Kings of the Western Jin Dynasty. If you are lucky enough not to be divided, the outcome of the internal fighting in the royal family is to let the civil servants evolve peacefully like the Ming Dynasty. Moreover, internal friction is ultimately not good for national development. Therefore, I actually have a bad opinion of the author's writing about the nine kings competing for the throne. It doesn't mean that you can't be an emperor or have a harem. In ancient times, many women were understandable. Again, it's not allowed to have a harem. However, the huge contradiction between the three head wives and the protagonist being an emperor makes the serious ending of the story extremely difficult. The serious ending of the book is very abstract and absurd. It doesn't mean that there can't be a solution between the three head wives and being an emperor. The key is that of the three head wives, each head wife has many children and many excellent children, which maximizes the risk of seizing the heir. Actually, I personally feel that among the three head wives, Shen gave birth to three daughters. After all, Shen's three daughters were exceptionally good in history, and Lin gave birth to one daughter (this daughter was not in good health, because she was weak and had no ambition for power. She liked literature, art, or scientific theory. After all, Lin was also frail, sick, noble and talented). After all, Lin's weak body was not conducive to childbirth, and it was possible for Lin to give birth to a child who was weak and sick. Lin being able to live, marry Feng, become his wife and have a daughter is already much better than the original work. If Lin gives birth to a daughter, and the protagonist makes another woman's child the crown prince, the Lin family's power cannot say anything. After all, Lin gives birth to a daughter, and there is nothing they can do about it. As for Bao, he followed the birth method in this book. After all, after forty chapters of Dream of Red Mansions, Bao also gave birth to a son. Why didn't she give birth to more children? Jia Baoyu ran away and could only give birth to one child. Of course, Shen and Lin are at a loss for having a daughter, so the author should provide compensation, so the protagonist can train the princess to go out of the palace and participate in social activities, and even the princess can participate in politics. After all, modern people have to be a little different! Because East Asia has deep-rooted patriarchal patriarchal ideology, princesses have no right to inherit. Emperors after Emperor Feng were far less afraid of sisters' princesses participating in politics than brothers' participation in politics. In fact, I personally like Daiyu. If Daiyu still loses even though she only has one daughter, Lu Xiangsheng can actually be assigned to Daiyu's daughter. As for Shen's three daughters, they can also arrange for outstanding figures in history to become their husbands. As for the heir, Bao's son is better. My personal ending thoughts, Daiyu gave birth to a daughter and married Lu Xiangsheng, Shen Yixiu gave birth to three daughters and one of them married Sun Chuanting, whose age was changed by magic. After all, the protagonist traveled through time and the Ming Dynasty also lost butterflies. Wouldn't it be nice to change Sun Chuanting's age to give the protagonist a daughter? As for Baoqin, she gave birth to a son and had a loyal and honest character. Baoqin was competitive and eager for quick success and quick gain, and had strict requirements for his son in the hope that he would win the title of heir. However, Baoqin's son was dissatisfied with his mother's strict requirements and had a good relationship with Jia Baoyu, who was already a Taoist. In the end, he rebelled against his mother and completely settled down. He had a good relationship with his brothers and sisters, especially with Daiyu's daughter. The Baoqin son I set appears to be a good character, and Emperor Feng also likes him, but this son caused Baoqin internal injuries. It's better than Lu Xiangsheng in this book marrying Bao Qin's daughter and then wiping the butt of his useless brother-in-law all the time. As for Daiyu's daughter in this book, she is said to be her father's favorite, but it is not clear who she is actually married to.

It's hard to see how many women there are at the end, so skipping the content related to women doesn't affect the reading experience at all. The word count of the full text has reached 8 million. At the end, I am only 30 years old, so I can imagine how slow the plot progresses. Only the first 3 million can be carefully read. The rest of the content seems to have no outline. It comes out as you think. Especially the ending, where he really vomited blood and was inexplicably dressed in a yellow robe.

Che Zhuluo's words come and go, and the same paragraph appears again every few chapters with a different meaning. The protagonist was drugged in wine and picked up girls for no apparent reason several times. Every time he was tricked, he was unprepared. He felt like he couldn't lift his pants to recognize someone after being tricked. This plot advancement was too weak, too formulaic, and too simple.

Great author, come on! Nong Chao is very well written. I hope that I will achieve better results by counting famous people.

Lao Zhang left Xiao Wu to Xiao Feng and also did some training. ——Feng Mansion should also write ✍🏻. Xiao Feng does not have a killer group

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This is a reference to falsehoods in vernacular. Nowadays, novels refer to classical Chinese. You are probably not writing a script, right?

This ending has no logic at all. If it were a cool novel, would Zhou Zhao be able to do it or Gonghe would be able to do it?

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Officialdom Without Boundaries is a masterpiece among officialdom novels in my mind, and Lu Weimin is the one who truly proves the saying that the prime minister is compared to the states and counties. Moreover, Lao Rui's official writings escape from intrigues, intrigues and official struggles, so they cannot be simply regarded as official writings. They are simply a reform history of urban construction and economic development in New China, allowing us to truly feel the enthusiasm of our fathers for building and reforming the country. It's a pity that the environment does not allow it. I hope Lao Rui can express himself in this fictional novel.

Nowadays, officialdom writing is dead and can only survive by relying on fiction. A few years ago, all the officialdom writings were so exciting. Hou Weidong's Officialdom Notes, Official Ways Without Borders and Official Gods are simply masterpieces, especially Officialdom Without Borders, which can better reflect the changes in the current situation. Come on, Lao Rui, keep up the good work 😡

The Late Ming Dynasty and the Red Mansion have always been hot topics in history, but many authors have different views. For example, many people in the late Ming Dynasty wrote about the struggle for hegemony, war, colonialism, and turning the tide. The Red Mansion is about concubines and palace battles, but they ignore the essence and core of the party struggle in the late Ming Dynasty. They ignore that the essence of the Dream of Red Mansions is actually a history of the political rise and fall of a feudal dynasty. Being able to combine these, I feel that it will be more like a hero showing his true qualities in the great times, and that he will have the pleasure of awakening to the power of killing and lying on the knees of a beautiful woman. So I really look forward to Lao Rui using his official skills to express these contents. It is very good, and I look forward to it being released!