A Laid-Back Life in the Red-Hot Era After Being Reborn

Nie Yu

After reading it, I personally feel that this is the best Siheyuan novel. The life in the Siheyuan in the early stage is very interesting, and the chapters about the death of my family and my mother in the later stage were really touching and moved me to tears. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

"Rebirth in the Leisurely Life in the Red Age" - Xiancao (Note: The following content is suspected of spoilers, please read with caution. Also, the evaluation is highly subjective. If you have any objections, you can discuss it. Relatives are not guilty. Diankou De) Excellent: 1. The writing style of an old author may not be good, but the writing style of an author who writes Red Mansions fan fiction and gets good grades is really good in writing other books! It's super fun to watch! 2. The characters are too vivid and vivid, including the various forms of living beings in the courtyard and the warmth and warmth of the people; the gentleness, laughter and curses of the several heroines; and the nine children, all of whom are like dragons (the eighth child is almost). Especially the nine children, each of them is a protagonist template. To borrow the words of a book friend, they are: "The boss is stable, the second is a monster, the thirty thousand cannons are blasting and thundering, the fourth and fifth are enjoying themselves in the mountains and flowing water, the sixth is as I wish. The sky sits on the golden throne, Lao Qi is a hard-working protagonist, a solid stone ground by sweat. Lao Ba feels like a painting saint, and every painting in the later period is a secret book. Lao Jiu is Tang Zichen's template + Wang Chao's understanding + Ba Liming's realm +. God's pursuit of truth." 3. Blessed are those who like to look at the shortcomings of parents. Siheyuan fans are reading a plan, and this article is particularly sour. Fighting with others is endless fun! 4. The God who educates children! I was really mesmerized by the part where the male protagonist traveled all over the country with his nine children. As a father, it is really awesome to be able to reason with your children from a peer perspective and respect them. 5. The hooks in this book are just right, two hooks (negative emotion value collection system) and (infinite progress). It may seem too wide at first glance, but it looks great from the book. The first third is about the plot of the courtyard, so the system plays the main role, relying on some things from the previous life to save the family. After entering Hong Kong Island in the middle and late stages, the (progress) hook comes into play, and the plot direction has even begun to become fantasy. But the two complement each other and continue to play a role as the plot unfolds. Unlike other novels, the plot is very abrupt. Missing: 1. The protagonist's portrayal is somewhat fragmented. ① In the early stage, from the reader's perspective, everything the protagonist does has a purpose and is very utilitarian, but the author keeps writing about feelings about family and country. The two combined, it looks slightly uncomfortable; ② In terms of the protagonist's emotions, about 80% of the full text , and inexplicably accepted Gao Weihong (the author said it was an open-ended result, but judging from the description, it was basically done. The extra story didn't even cover it up). The problem was that he had promised his second son that he would only have four women, and now he accepted another one. Even in the later part (about 90% of the full text), the author's feelings about the Red Mansion got the better of him and he also accepted the actors who played Lin Daiyu and Xue Baochai. Well... The author settled the matter through the words of the four heroines and an apology to the second son, but it seems awkward no matter how you look at it. 2. Some of the author's settings are a bit problematic. ① The system setting is that the things produced by the system cannot change the historical process, but this kind of thing cannot be changed if the author says it will not be changed; ② Some people have died and come back to life. What impressed me deeply was Lou Xiu's ex-husband's father. In the first part, he seemed to have died due to an explosion, but in the second part, he was alive and was killed by the protagonist. 3. Description of Qin Daxue and Li Zhiguo. The images of the two characters in the author's writings, the first and middle period, of serving the country and the people, and sacrificing their small family for everyone, are very wonderful under the author's exquisite writing style. Although no matter how you look at the emotional line, it is all about the protagonist's lust and the needs of the plot (Master River Crab). But things got worse and worse later on. (Chapter 392, Three-year Agreement) At that time, it was said that he would retire at the age of 50, and then in later chapters, when he said that he was worried and could not retire, the character of Qin Daxue was already a bit broken. A heroine loves the country more than the protagonist. From a God's perspective, without the help of the protagonist, this heroine would have died long ago. After all this calculation, the book friend was very dissatisfied with Qin Daxue. The same principle applies to governing a country. There is a section in the article where the protagonist and the eldest brother even complained a little because they did not help the people in the country. Of course it would be nice to be the people under Qin Daxue's rule. It's not too late to be grateful to such parents and officials. But book friends are all ordinary people, and they usually just read for fun, and the protagonists are usually the protagonists (This sentence only represents me), so, alas. Summary: Rating 9 out of 10. Looking at the book as a whole, there is nothing wrong with it. These shortcomings are just for me personally. Just read it, it's a really good book. Supplementary 1: I encountered something unlucky while reading. You said it doesn't matter what water or ink stains are. Even if you say that the protagonist is disgusting, I pretend I didn't see it. After all, the protagonist is indeed a bit utilitarian. But did the author write too well or did some book lovers eat too much? Have you begun to sympathize, empathize, and even take on the role of the great masters Jia Dongxu and Jia Zhang? Make the protagonist the villain? I'm really convinced. Supplement 2: After reading this book, I understand a truth, that is, the author should rely on the subscription results to write the book, rather than the comments. The author's book "Spring in Red Mansions" contains Empress Yin. I hate that the protagonist accepts this character, but many people like it, so I get good results. The parents in this book are short-lived, and some people don't like to write too much about it, but the author's average subscription is rising, so I'll keep writing. Supplementary 3: There are 7 people who have a relationship with the protagonist in the book, four heroines, one beauty, and two of the author's feelings about the Red Mansion. Qin Huairu and Chen Xueru, one is a needle practitioner and the other is a business tool. Supplement 4: You can watch the extras, but I didn't include them in the evaluation. Because this is no longer a fantasy, reversing time and space, "Resurrection, my love" really made me happy, haha. Just watch it for fun. After all, the finale is considered BE. It would also be nice to resurrect them all for a happy ending in the extra episode.

I have written more than ten million words outside the house, and the results of several works except for The Longest One, Dreaming of Pulling the Crotch Point, are all very good. Why is it not platinum, a master level? How do Qidian author ratings come from?

The front part of this book is quite good. I have seen the best courtyard house in it, really. But I got bored after I went to Hong Kong. I don't know about others. Anyway, I couldn't watch anymore even though I was dancing.

In reality, the old man did not survive the return. I hope the author can let Li Yuan help him set foot on Hong Kong Island to witness the return. That is not only his personal wish, but also the wish of all Chinese people. The writing is very good and it is very comfortable to read.

The more I write about it, the more in-depth it becomes. The author should also be a remarkable person in real life.

Seeing this, I will also say: the dragon gave birth to nine sons, each with his own magical power! Just like the author said that there is no facial expression, it must have distinctive characteristics. Fellow Taoists, take a look and see if the nine children of Yuanzi are an extension of the nine ideas he wants to achieve. The word "source" is also the beginning of supernatural power! The eldest brother is loyal and filial, the second child is both righteous and evil, the third child is fierce and powerful, the fourth and fifth child are transparent and elf-like, and the sixth child is courageous enough to overcome obstacles! Lao Qi's forbearance and open-mindedness, Lao Ba's true temperament, a fairy figure! Laojiu's clear and elegant sky! You can take on some of the pig's trotters' roles, but don't be too controlling. Every road has its own pits and pits, and you should live a wonderful life of your own!

I remember reading the part where the pig's trotter jumps from the mainland to the Xiangjiang River. It was very uncomfortable to read. But at that time, there were no other good books to read, so I continued to read a few chapters and found that it got better and better in the later chapters. The whole book has been sublimated since then, and the pattern of the pig's trotter has become bigger. The whole plot jumps out of the small courtyard, and the appearance of other characters makes the book's sense of age even richer. Especially now, the growth of the descendants of pig's feet is not inferior to pig's feet at all. The development of the entire Li family is very practical and has correct views. I like this book very much. At the same time The previous foreshadowing allowed me to see the background of the big family, and this kind of background is not like the empty feeling of big families in other novels. It is a feeling that the whole family can survive only by the merits of the ancestors. I am very much looking forward to the Li family after the reform and opening up. Of course, it would be better if the book can be written by that time. Finally, the author's writing style is indeed very good. I won't compare it with other great books here. There is no point in reading it. I can only say that this book is not a god and it is unreasonable. I also hope to finish it later and write more things.

It's well written, and the plot and characters are very reasonable. The only thing is that the protagonist is too self-sufficient, not lustful, a man is reborn, what's the point if he doesn't pursue some power, wealth and sex, he can't even dream of something good?