The Twenty-Sided Die

Take a look at it from the bookshelf. Why have so many people complained about Our Lady in the past two years? 15 I never felt this way when I was following the serial in 2016 After five or six years, have everyone become so cold-blooded? 😥

There is no characteristic other than sharpness... Why do I think of pale justice?

What I can guess at the moment is that it can cast the 3rd level magic phantom horse, which is about the level of a minimum 5 or 6 wizard. It is considered a good wizard. However, Siegel has also cast many special spells, which are not common spells in the player's manual, so I cannot accurately judge. The author also deliberately deviates from the statistical description of spells and advances the plot with a more orthodox Western fantasy flavor. However, car and character cards are also the great fun of DND! I beg the author to release Siegel's character card.

I thought I had found a good DND novel, but it turned out to be a Madonna novel, which disgusted me.

The author has obviously seen Mr. Martin's "A song of ice and fire" and wanted to imitate it, but failed to imitate it well. It can be said that he did not imitate the essence. (There is no need to imitate onions, barley, corned beef!) The author is happy to portray the protagonist Siegel as a kind-hearted image. But some of them were hard for me to understand, very contrived, and impossible for readers to relate to. For example, Siegel pretended to be a slave owner and wanted to rescue the orcs. Then he saw the young orcs trembling when he saw him frightening him with a whip. He actually cried (and secretly wiped his tears). Another example is that he was so compassionate that the slaves (devils) on the roadside would give him thousands of gold coins to free him. This makes me very strange and impossible. As we all know, Europe in the Middle Ages was its darkest period, with countless refugees. Even if your worldview is different, I see that there are a lot of refugees in your article. Why didn't you see Siegel saving them one by one? Writing plot for the sake of plot is really boring. There are also things like "His familiar looks south, looks north..." It's really rigid to blindly imitate Mr. Martin's works. At the time I even thought I was watching A Song of Ice and Fire. But at the same time, there are also many remarkable things in this book, such as the separation of theocratic royal power and legal power, etc., So I will not describe them one by one here.

After all the hard work, the golden magic book found in the treasure was thrown away and then picked up by the villain mage. What kind of NC plot is this? The rationality is too bad.

A mage is just a mage, why do you do so many nonsense... Or just brush it off, and you can describe it in detail. . . Anyway, we know that the protagonist will learn magic in the end, and there is so much space in the early stage describing the followers, lords, etc., Believe me, not many people will want to read it. . . .

The author has a serious problem. There is an extreme lack of psychological description, which leads to readers' insufficient understanding of the characters' behavioral motivations. For example, the plot of the protagonist rescuing an enslaved kitten has persuaded many people. If the protagonist's psychology is described before the kitten asks for a horse, the protagonist attaches great importance to family ties due to his own life experience. He cannot let go of the kitten's move to go home to find his father. At the same time, the knight's sense of responsibility requires him to help others to the end, and so on. The more the author explains why the protagonist does what he does, the better the reader will feel.

The author's writing style is quite good, but the story is not that good. It feels like many things are the same as the third one: the girl's treasure, Long Aotian. It's not Xiaobai's Long Aotian fantasy upgrade flow, it feels like an older novel. The reason I was unhappy was not because it was not a simple novel, but because the description of the climax was too flat. There are also loopholes in the logic that make it feel unrealistic. Although the details are well described, they just don't fit in. The process of collecting girls and kittens is also a bit abrupt and unnatural. The characterization is too thin

😅🤤 So holy