Cyber ​​Cultivation 2077

The author of this recent chapter has really arranged everything in a coherent manner, but it still feels like it still hasn't strayed away from the feeling of "finding things for the protagonist to do" in essence. The protagonist has been chased away by various cleverly arranged coincidences, without any chance to rest or "farm". There are many branch lines, and the protagonist is exhausted. He often returns to the main line after reading more than ten or dozens of chapters, and the reader will think of the setting of "Oh, this protagonist is still a half-finished product who will die if he doesn't steal electricity and cultivate immortality quickly." Why do I feel like this? I'd venture to guess that the author hasn't decided on the outline yet, at least not decisively on what to write about. Maybe sometimes an idea will strike and an additional branch line will appear. The author's logic is good, and each plot can be arranged with reasonable reasons, but the feeling that the protagonist is driven around by coincidences will not change. Just writing blindly may not be correct. I hope it will be helpful to the author.

After reading Chapter 4, I finally understood what the label "He is good at playing and she is also good at playing" means. I thought it was just some jokes, so I clicked in🐶I never expected... (Swipe to the bottom) I have sorted out sadomasochism, can you believe it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Funny life-saving)

Great, very good. After reading it, I actually wanted something like this.

The author has read Chapter 84 and I feel that this is a good book But the narrative method of the story is not clear. The information directly presented to the reader is always flashbacks and memories It weakens the sense of existence of the main line. The supporting characters are a bit upstage The pig's feet are also a bit of a dog-licking mentality (a teacher in one bite The image of the female supporting role is well created But the changes and progress of the male protagonist as a reborn person are not written out In the end, there are too many private goods. Easy 404

I saw that Chapter 28 was the part where the psychic warrior named Eddie was killed through a betting machine. After that, I started reading it in a skip. If I had continued to read it, I would not have this evaluation, but it was precisely because I skipped it that I realized what potential this author still has. . The beginning of this book is wonderful. What's so wonderful about it? There are a few points: Go straight to the plot right from the start, with a description that can be understood at a glance. It is both a plot and a background introduction. The second is the writing method that pave the way for the concept of mechanical ascension. Third, the treatment of AI Maeve brings out the protagonist's meticulous acting style. Fourth is the protagonist named Z. . The protagonist's code name reminds me of Z. Those who have watched Infinite Horror should have this concept, and I think of it a lot. Being named Z and at the beginning made me think that the protagonist has the courage to deserve this code name, so even if the later chapters are not ideal, I can bear it after thinking about it at the beginning. . After talking about the good things, let's talk about the bad things. . When I first wrote the review, I felt that the reason why I skipped the article was Lily. I think the interactions between characters such as Lily (jumping as if she saw something rolling?) Made this book vulgar. But, if you think about it carefully, you can't blame it entirely here. It's just part of it. After all, I still persisted until chapter 28. So what's the problem? It's the rhythm. . If there is a problem with the rhythm, the person writing it will feel uncomfortable, and the person watching it will naturally feel uncomfortable as well. Specifically speaking, the problem lies with the protagonist, who talks too much about himself. Something that can be narrated from God's perspective is too cumbersome to be written as a psychological description. . I jumped to read the chapter. The chapter is different from other chapters. I feel the opening, it's intense. The writing style of these chapters is very touching, and of course the story of Kelly and Anthony is good enough. Jump out and look at the protagonist again. After the protagonist collects Kelly's desktop terminal and looks at the relevant description of the window, you can see the problem and play the game in place. . This kind of description of the protagonist is too deliberate. If you set the protagonist too deliberately, it will not be a very likable story. . One last related sentence, although I have no idea about other settings, I am curious about other characters that have not appeared. . Digression: The author once mentioned Mystery and Squid. Mystery is very popular, and Squid is also a master who has written books for many years, but I basically don't read his books. I haven't paid attention to many books by great masters. The ones I've read that still left an impression on me are probably The House of Horror with the Air Conditioner (I read about 20 to 300,000 words when I started writing it) and Xiaolong? Or Whose World of Panic (renamed and 404 seems to be), Yipin Cultivation (I haven't finished reading the progress until I jump out of the wedding dress a few times), these are some popular books, and the others I am reading are also just following the trend, with basically no highlights worth mentioning. . What I mean by this is that the author has room to write a story worth reading. . I have opened a hole and written more than 600,000 words, which is already more than a person who is limited by his thoughts. His spirit is commendable. . Life is not easy, but those who keep loving it and keep going are brave people, come on.

This is Cyberpunk 2077

Don't be discouraged. You are a writer with your own ideas. As long as you don't give up, you can hope to write a masterpiece. Internet writing is destined to be imperfect. We can do many things, but we will always not be able to do our best due to various reasons, and we may even have to make bad choices. I once had a similar experience. As far as personal experience is concerned, sometimes incomplete things are successful. Excessive pursuit of perfection usually makes a thing have no beginning and no end. Embracing imperfection and constantly improving oneself toward perfection through trial after trial is the model path for online writers. Looking forward to your new work, come on💪↖(^ω^)↗

Finally built the foundation, let me express my feelings. This book is really precious in the starting point. Its imagination and meaning are all at T0 level, and its writing style is also first-rate. The author really wanted to express some ideas and content from the book. Some people often say that pursuing reality in virtual novels is ridiculous. This statement is really ridiculous. The novels that are divorced from reality are indeed fascinating, but the ones that are closely connected to reality will linger in the mind. Cyberpunk is one of the best in this category. It provides a weird stage for authors to express their creativity. Describe your thoughts and struggles between spirit and body, society and humanity, morality and humanity. The main line of this book is to cultivate "the unity of spirit and body, to achieve true cultivation". In the current content, the weight and emotion of the word "cultivation" are indeed shown. The first person to cultivate must be the efforts of countless people. The countless sacrifices of the predecessor Z generation are indeed very interesting. But the real part has not yet become obvious. Since the body and soul are united, the reality we seek cannot only be the material truth, but also have the clarity of thought. There's no hurry with this, the story has just begun. Although the other branches are slightly more homogeneous than other cyberpunks, they are still quite interesting. The only thing I don't like so far is the emotional line (pornographic line). Although the 18+ content is part of cyberpunk, there are always some meaningless cars that are a bit abrupt. The author seems to want to describe an image of people who are mentally numb and pursue physical stimulation, but there are too many meaningless cars and the feeling is not deep enough. Finally, come on, author, it will get better and better from now on. No matter how you let it fly later, just focus on the first 200,000 words, and I will be the first to order.

The soul of migrant workers All history is contemporary history

Although I have only written 210,000 words, even if I am a eunuch now, it is enough to leave my name in the history of online novels. The routine of online novels has not seen such a breakthrough for a long time. If this book can be completed successfully, this book will feed many newcomers like books such as Infinite Horror and Buddha is the Way.

What is cyberpunk? Prosthetics, bionic organs, synthetic humans? This is skin. Super corporations, monopoly trusts? This is bone. The impact and distortion of capitalist production relations and unrestricted science and technology on existing social relations is the soul.

Originally I didn't even want to see the seedlings. But I saw a lot of book fans in the comment area saying that the boss opened a trumpet account. Can't help but come and enjoy it. Found this to be the case. The ideas are new. Perfect rhythm control. Very little watering. It's really a masterpiece. I just hope the author doesn't tj. If not, I will keep chasing him.

The author is working hard to think of the plot. There is no eunuch. It will be updated after a while. Please don't disturb me. Thank you!

The plot of Lily's transformation is so awesome💩! After the memory, personality, and soul are destroyed, and then rely on Andy to complete it, the original Lily actually dies, and another person wakes up! The author killed the original Lily But in fact it was completely inexplicable and meaningless To reflect the growth and changes of Lily, the character can be described slowly in another way, whether it is through her participating in a climax plot, or through the protagonist to see how she has changed Now Lily is downplaying her inexplicable death and relying on the protagonist to complete another personality and wake up. Is this considered growth? Fart! This is castration! It's a complete waste of all the previous descriptions of this character! It gives the impression that Lily, who longs for warmth, is not worthy of winning the love she longs for through self-struggle and sacrifice. She is not worthy of being a comrade-in-arms of the protagonist. She can only rely on the rebirth given by the protagonist to continue playing the role of a tool It is a pity that so many words have been used to shape this character A waste of characters The author is probably a new author It is extremely easy to suffer from literary youth syndrome br>The dead heroine is not a poisonous point The protagonist's indifference and selfishness are not a poisonous point The cyberpunk world is cruel and indifferent, life and death are unpredictable - it is not a poisonous point, and it is not even strong enough. Mr. Carp should increase his efforts Only this plot setting is neither completely necessary nor a waste of the original character's arc. But in fact, this plot setting is neither exciting nor exciting, and it also fed most of our readers💩. It can be said that no benefit has been achieved, but a flaw Mr. Carp, please don't say it is a plot requirement. You have said that you want to reflect Lily's transformation, and there are many ways to do it. Anyway, I'm so happy to read this 💩 It's really unnecessary

The latest chapter is really great. I think, therefore I am? The body is only the carrier of the spirit. Only when spirit and flesh can be combined into one can we be called human. The respective strength of spirit and body is the path to immortality. At this moment, I feel like the heroine can be called the heroine. In the first volume, I always thought the heroine was just a passerby. The moment she beat her boss, she awakened from the machine and became a human being. People will have no, not just yes, not just desire and rationality, but also feelings. The male protagonist is the opposite of her. The male protagonist pursues rationality, evolution, and becoming stronger. Does he have emotions? No, his character is as boring as a machine, and the old Terminator is just right. The female protagonist is spirit and the male protagonist is flesh. Interfering with each other and eventually integrating into one.

First of all, the book is a good book. Let me talk about some of the issues I think. But this book is not cyber, or not cyber enough. The sense of the future is not strong enough. Society's oppression of individuals is not cyber enough. The setting is a world after nuclear war, and the post-apocalyptic style feeling is not established. The oppression and feeling of reality are just like those in books. (Laughing) Specifically, some of the ideas are not eye-catching enough. Brain machines, virtual reality games, prosthetics, functional combat mechas, etc., As a reader, I am already tired of aesthetics. Especially now that the concept of cyberspace has become popular. There is no sense of the future, which is particularly noticeable in the recent plot. The future is here, so where is the opium left? Chemically synthesized addictive drugs are no less expensive than your opiates. These plots may happen around us, which brings another problem. Design of aesthetic distance. The aesthetic distance in the book is very close and the sense of substitution is strong. They all want to give the poisonous dog two knives. Although there is nothing new under the sun, this sense of substitution is too strong to dispel the concept of cyberspace. There is no saying that it is not good if the aesthetic distance is too close. This point lies in the author's control and choice. We can tell that the author wants to write something, just look at how the author shows the struggle of the resisters and the flash of humanity in the darkness.

After reading the latest chapter, I felt Andy's contradiction. Decades of life have made him disregard everything. No matter you are male or female, old or young, how beautiful or powerful you are, apart from being a "human", you have no characteristics. But Andy is old-fashioned. Decades of time have tortured his soul to pieces. The memory of his previous life makes him feel unwilling to change if he has a chance. But even Lily has become so strange, Andy must be confused

The female protagonist said that she would do anything for the male protagonist, and then the male protagonist inexplicably recruited the female protagonist to death and created a new personality. . . You have violated our simple values.

Are there so many scolds in the comment area? I remember that I was quite shocked when I first read it. The crazy feeling is in line with my imagination of cyberpunk. The difficulty of creating cultivation from scratch is also impressive. It's a pity for the eunuch.

The cyberpunk wasteland is a theme that has existed for a long time. The idea of ​​the heart being more important than things and mechanical ascension are not original. According to the classics, there should even be a group consciousness. But this novel is the one that appeals to me the most. As for depression and poison, you underestimate the poison resistance of Qidian readers. And many of the people who subscribe to this book should be hard-core readers who don't care about this. In my opinion, the logic of this book is basically self-consistent, and the speculations on human hearts and human clusters are novel and in place. As long as there are some coincidences, the story makes perfect sense. These coincidences are not embarrassing at all, and they very well show the form of rational cruelty, chaotic and desperate thoughts, the great and indifferent pioneer, and the bold and careful protagonist. Almost completely digitized, everything has traces, everything can be measured, decision-making relies on data analysis, and execution relies on data. Gods on earth must also have their own value. This is absolutely cold rationality. Loopholes mean a price, and they may be subject to the harshest sanctions, and the children will not have a chance to come back. This is cruel. People have broken through the final bottom line, their malice has been infinitely amplified, and goodwill must be accompanied by darkness, but there are still people who pursue the light. No matter what it is, good or bad, people have to put their all on the line and do their best to achieve goals that may have deviated from them. The prophets each had their own concerns and pursued the future with little effort and in a way that was difficult to distinguish between right and wrong. On the one hand, they sacrificed their lives for righteousness, while on the other hand, they ignored and even caused suffering. This book helped me, a person whose work and life are inseparable from modern cities, far away from disorder and even other people's malice, to recall again: life can be a cost, evil can penetrate everything, and people are so small and blind. I was shocked when I saw the single chapter where I confessed my love. The author was so pure. Could it be that he was the dull genius he said 🐷

The plot of the recent two balls is really incomprehensible. They made fake breasts and changed the hook. This part is very bad. It feels like the author let himself go after failing to express his love. Moreover, it feels very disconnected from the plot. I have saved more than ten chapters since the beginning and planned to read it in one go. I didn't expect the author to complain, ugh.

It's okay to speed up the progress, but I hope the author will continue to maintain a steady rhythm and rigorous thinking, an excellent slow-burn writing style, and never get sidetracked by noisy, brainless and cool writing. The most taboo thing about a book is that it starts and ends but has inconsistent rhythm and style. Slow heat gives people relief, while cool stories give people stimulation. Each has its own market and it is not appropriate to mix and match them randomly. You can increase the excitement by creating a climax of conflict in the plot, but it is not advisable to speed up the ascension and run for pure cultivation in an abrupt and brainless way. After all, the cyber genre is the only one with new ideas. Not to mention the 114,514 books on Cultivation Literature, there are almost 114,514 books out there. To put it bluntly, I think Cultivation Literature is the most important one in my heart.

Most of the cyberpunk in the world is limited to imagination, and most of the cyberculture is just a fantasy of trying to buy the meat of a dog. Only this book is cyberpunk and punk enough.

My biggest question about Cyberpunk is who does the company sell its products to? Where is there such a big market to support the company?

From Earth to Hell It seems that the author failed in his confession.

The author confesses that failure is death, the book is finished, and he bids farewell.

Yaya's new book "Infinite Coins"

Lu You's "Two Poems on Shen Yuan·Part 1" The setting sun on the city is painted with mournful corners, and Shen Yuan is not a restored pool platform. The spring waves under the sad bridge are green, and it was once the shadow of Jinghong came. Translation The sound of painted horns on the city wall under the setting sun seems to be mourning. Shen Garden is no longer the original pool, pavilion and pavilion. The spring water under that sad bridge is still green, where I saw her beautiful figure. Shen Garden: namely Shen's Garden, its former location is south of Yuji Temple in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province. Set the sun: the sun in the west. Painting corner: Colored military instruments, emitting a sad and mournful sound. Jinghong: The phrase comes from the poem "Luo Shen Fu" written by Cao Zhi of the Three Kingdoms Dynasty, "as graceful as a startled dragon", to describe the lightness of the beautiful body. This refers to Lu You's ex-wife Tang Wan.

It is being prepared for 2026. I have forgotten how old this book is, but it has always been on the list of my special attention. The books in it are updated slowly 😥 The first thing I read was Cyber ​​Heroes, but I have forgotten this one. But I think the author's previous layout and writing style are very strong. After the update was discontinued, I still went back to read the first volume from time to time. It was very enlightening. But I am also thinking that such a smooth start cannot avoid the eunuch ending. Does the author have any obsession? And I am very sorry that the author seems to want to write a double line, but his ability failed due to practical problems? I still hope that the author can retell this story, refer to Mr. Yang's golden age, and renovate and rewrite it later.

Yaya... This is the second book...