Naruto: Time Stop From the Start, With New Superpowers Every Month

This book is well written, don't mess with the ambiguous plot. The readers who followed your book were all looking for multiple female protagonists. However, the last book with more than 200 chapters was still Xiao Chunan.

I always like to play some unpopular characters. These unpopular characters have to be delayed for a long time every time. What's the point? What's the point of accepting these unpopular characters? Especially the popular characters should be written occasionally. The author of these unpopular characters especially likes to write close-ups. No matter how charming they are, these characters are just broken shoes. The author especially likes to pick up broken shoes and wear them. He still insists on saying anything about understanding Boss Cao In my opinion, the author The reader cannot grasp the plot, and can only rely on these characters to force the plot And the protagonist has no charm at all. I am talking about character charm. The protagonist's character is like a castle in the air, too blank. I have almost no impression of the protagonist. Can you give the protagonist's character some characteristics? The protagonist looks like a blank person, which is purely controlled by the author. I have read several of the author's books, and the protagonists in the author's works are all blank people. Can you give the protagonist some personality characteristics? Also, stop writing so much about broken shoes, okay? These broken shoes are not very popular, so why do you always write about them like this? You can write about many heroines, but can you write about some popular ones? What you write is unpopular and shabby, and you always like to write a lot. You can't grasp the plot. You want to write about these characters to delay the plot. Write something popular, OK? I don't have much to say about the protagonist's golden finger. It's pretty average. These super powers can only be experienced. Although the seeds will be left behind, it's best to adapt them to the protagonist's combat system. Otherwise, you won't have much of an impression if you write them all down. But I still think you shouldn't write too much, because the world is still Naruto. If you write too much, it will be a bit subjective. It seems a bit fragmented It is better to localize it. For example, similar skills can be practiced, and physical talents and the like can be passed down like blood. If not localized, these superpowers, skills, talents, and constitutions are the work of multiple world views. If these are not handled well, the sense of fragmentation will be serious, so I I think it's better to try to be as local as possible In general, don't write so many shabby shoes. If you really want to drag out the plot to write about these characters, just like the popular ones, and don't write about shabby shoes. (I think you should try your best to write the plot and improve your plot processing skills. The few books you have written so far, your plot processing skills are not very good. Progress is basically just walking in place), and then it is to add some characteristics to the protagonist's character, so that everyone can have a certain impression of the protagonist (the characters of the protagonists you wrote are almost the same, they are all blank people, and they do not shape the character of the protagonist). I think these super powers are novel, but try to localize them and prioritize them.

Don't subscribe, this is from a dead eunuch

I don't really want to read your book which is purely Tang Dynasty and doesn't include a lot of female characters. Don't kill people and struggle like crazy to write about the daily routine of chicken chop.

I always describe people riding, but it's not trendy, so there's no need to describe it in such detail, just a normal plot.

Is this book still as old as an old book? When the male protagonist of the old book met Kushina, Kushina was not married, and Minato Namikaze had not become Hokage, but they were forced to be together. What kind of fuss was going on? Mikoto has already accepted Kushina, but doesn't she? Please explain as soon as possible when new books are released 😐

That's how Qidian's articles are, I don't even dare to write about humanities, I always have a slight feeling of suffocation.

When did the heroine get fucked, and when did she watch it. No, the light is ambiguous? Haha, definitely not watching it

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The author might as well just write an NPC named Kawahara Dou 🤭