I Am a Primitive Man

It is very unrealistic for the protagonist to just think about farming, and to give up hunting is to be a self-eunuch~ Not to mention the degradation of fighting among tribal warriors, the increase in nearby wild beasts is a big problem~ I really think it is a modern wilderness~ Not to mention ancient times, look at those parks in the United States. Hunting licenses are issued every year to encourage hunting, otherwise animals will overflow in less than two years and come out to attack humans~

The best original time-travel farming novel I have ever read. Many of the others are about cultivating immortals, superpowers, totem power, etc. It gives me a headache to read. The plot of this book is relatively reasonable!

If the tribe wants to develop rapidly, the only way to do this is through alliance plundering wars. In this way, year after year, Hancheng will not be able to develop the steam era until it dies. Han Cheng's current strategy cannot be too conservative and must expand his personal beliefs. Let the surrounding tribes know how good the Son of God is, and let the surrounding tribes help spread the influence of the Son of God. Let people yearn for the life of the Son of God tribe. The writing was good at the beginning, but not so good afterward. It's fine to have a stable development period, but we can't forget about technology. What's going on when it all stops? Swords and daggers are both very good weapons. The best daggers are convenient for anything. Even if people are satisfied, people will also be dissatisfied. The former is to give him something good and he will be grateful to you and always remember you to do well. The latter means that if you give him a better life, he still wants a better one. If you don't give it, he will attack you and gather some people, so he will think he is great.

Time passes so fast in the book, and what I fear most is the death of the witch.

It's very interesting. I don't know why not many people see it. Good luck to the author.

The author is so good at breaking up the paragraphs. It could have been divided into one paragraph, but it was written in two paragraphs. Although the number of words is indeed twice that, the content is not concise enough. After reading a chapter, I only felt like it said something, but it didn't seem to say anything... This is the first time I have felt like this since reading a book. Although I can feel that the author wants to enrich the content, I also hope that the author can reduce some unnecessary content. Also, after all, it is an online text, so to a large extent, the number of words in each chapter cannot be too many (because the more words, the more money is spent on a single chapter, and readers will feel that they are at a disadvantage), so the content will look watery. If the author wants to write substantial content, he can consider writing as many articles and novels as possible first, and then publishing 5-10 chapters every day, so that readers will not feel that it is watery (it doesn't matter even if the number of words is small, most readers don't have much time to worry about this in order to continue reading), but if the content is real water, there is no way. If you don't want to wait until you finish writing before publishing, then you can only find a way to make the content more concise. [Not only to Mo Shoubai, but also to other friends who want to be writers]

What I read is a pirated version, and I respect the fruits of your labor. I will reward you with 100 reward coins for subscribing to the rest of the book to support the author. It's good to read, but there are too few updates and it feels like it's not interesting enough. I hope it explodes!

It is recommended to use Qi Jiajun's Yuanyang Formation in battle. The Yuanyang Formation was originally suitable for small square formations in the south. The Yuanyang Formation is most suitable for fighting in mountains, hills and jungles.

I feel like the author looks down on the reproductive capacity of wild animals. For a tribe of dozens of people, the number of fish in the river will decrease after a period of time, and the number of animals will decrease after a few months in the forest. It's too exaggerated. There are so many poachers in Africa using modern weapons to kill them. Australia spends hundreds of millions of dollars every year to kill them with modern weapons, but they can't kill them. The Asian carp in the rivers of the United States are also overrun even though they have developed antibodies to fish medicine.

In fact, the protagonist should really support the surrounding tribes so that they can generate surplus value, such as growing food, mining, etc. Then let them exchange excess food supplies for salt, pottery tools and other goods. In this way, Qingque can free up part of the labor from heavy labor such as planting and mining, and use the labor for other things. Especially now that porcelain is about to be released. If the surrounding tribes are too poor to afford food, no matter how exquisite your porcelain is, if others don't even have money to buy pottery, will they come to buy better and more expensive porcelain? I have always felt that the protagonist's strategy of making the surrounding tribes so poor that they cannot afford to eat, and then having to join Qingque is unreliable. In fact, it is good to just use the employment methods that have been used before, such as mining, road construction and other low-skilled labor. As long as Qingque's core technology remains ahead, it will be fine.

First of all, I want to say cheers to the author, and secondly, what I want to say is, First: In primitive society, the adoption of slavery was a very progressive act. The author also made a good start, without being stubborn to be benevolent. The use of slaves. Even in the post-archaic period, the rise of Rome was caused by the use of a large number of slaves as a productive labor force. The large use of slaves as labor force can liberate the men of the tribe to be trained and armed as professional warriors, while the slaves exist as productive forces, responsible for supplying food and building infrastructure. Second: The domestication of wolves is a great start. As a major hunting aid during the savagery period, domesticated wolves or dogs are extremely ferocious existences. I think the author has already made some considerations on this point. I don't need to be verbose. See the development in the following article for details. Third: I think the domestication of sheep, deer, and pigs is more important. The population carrying capacity of the fishing and hunting civilization is frighteningly weak. However, the population base of the tribes in this book is indeed relatively small, so don't worry. It's just that I think the domestication of these creatures is a more important part of the development of the tribe, so I mention it. Fourth: After using slaves to liberate a large number of male labor forces, you can consider using militarized training for young men, including training in throwing, fighting, wrestling, tug-of-war and other aspects, in an effort to make the men of the sparsely populated tribe martial and strong, thereby capturing more slaves. Fifth: Author, you can think about finding a powerful weapon like a horse. Even if there is no steel or stirrups, it doesn't matter. Prairie people have been raised since childhood and can still ride naked, but they cannot charge. People who ride horses are mentally and physically stronger than people who walk. If you cultivate this tribe into a horse-riding nation and supplement it with training, I believe there will be no tribe more powerful than Qingque. The slaves are responsible for building infrastructure, houses, and farming to supply Qingque. It is simply indescribable. Finally, it is really difficult to write primitive novels without fantasy elements. The production of many things will be criticized by book friends regardless of whether they are good or bad. These problems are difficult to deal with and it is difficult not to be affected, including my remarks. So I can only say that I hope the author can consider many aspects. After all, everyone has different ideas about novels, so I can only do my best. Thank you very much for the good book you brought me. I hope you will continue to work hard. Come on!

Regarding the new tribe, I think building a city directly in the Sichuan Basin is a bit too idealistic. First of all, the distance between the old tribe and the new tribe is too far, and the migration takes too long. If it is winter, there will definitely be many people who die on the way. If it is other seasons, then you are destined to lose food for a year. If there is a problem in the middle, it is possible for two years. Secondly, regarding the resources near the old tribe, such as salt mountains, copper mines, tin mines and a series of other important resources, if you move to a new tribe, you will have to look for them again? I'm afraid it's not very realistic. Finally, regarding the infrastructure construction near the old tribe, the established tribal alliance, and the future tribal order, we cannot just focus on the life and death of one tribe. It is recommended to set up an outpost near the new tribe to occupy the land first, then hold a tribe meeting, and use means to force the tribal alliance to move together. Then, while thinking of ways to increase the number of people, build roads. You can establish a gathering point at intervals along the road and appoint trustworthy tribe members as city leaders. , Leaving part of the army and slaves (make a plan for the city owner, tell the slaves that they can be given citizenship if they perform well, and eat all the slaves in the current tribe in this way); if other tribes are willing, they can also stay at the gathering point built halfway, and continue like this until they reach the new tribe. This method has several advantages. The future positioning of the old and new tribes can be separated. Each gathering point in the middle can also assume different responsibilities. For example, the area near the copper mine is responsible for collecting and smelting copper, and a gathering point in the middle can bear the responsibility of casting and forging. If you encounter good soil on the road, you can also establish a special gathering point for firing pottery. By analogy, the main city is positioned to control food and supply food to other gathering points, while the things produced by other gathering points are transported to the main city and distributed by the main city. The most important thing is that you write it like this to make it interesting. What the protagonist needs to do is to establish a system to help the tribal system transition to the feudal system as soon as possible, instead of blindly looking for food, cooking food, building cities, and fighting.

How can you eat sweet tofu brain? Gotta eat something salty. Anyone who doesn't eat salty food is a heretic, and I strongly oppose eating sweet tofu.

When will our powerful slave-owning snake-eating human tribe appear? Will there be a more powerful villain after Soaring Snake is destroyed? Or the Soaring Snake Tribe has been defeated after repeated battles, and uses the Soaring Snake Tribe's frantic development model to quickly capture the population, force slaves to give birth to children quickly, use cults to confuse other tribes, and finally turn other tribes into slaves, restoring the population to the pre-war level. It will not be completely wiped out every time, and then learns lessons and grows in technology. Each attack will become stronger (the system develops towards a dark civilization, such as extreme slavery and becoming a humanoid Zerg tribe, developing a cult with great charisma and believers who are not afraid of death, and carrying out a large number of attacks). Human experiments are used to master forbidden technologies that the protagonist does not know much about and is unwilling to understand (such as opening the skull of a living person and stimulating relevant areas with hot needles to make the person tell some relevant information), using marijuana poppy to train drug-addicted berserkers, and eating corpses to produce corpse plague. Resistant to the corpse plague, but there are residual corpse plague viruses in the body to infect people who do not eat corpses, engage in human breeding, develop spies, etc. (Of course cults are the core), and then become the villain of the whole story. The protagonist is crazy about technology, and Soaring Snake is crazy about destroying troops. I am looking forward to it.

Shou Bai, I read Chapter 468 in one go. It was well written. I voted for you with all four monthly votes. How about adding more?

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AuthorI have read 12 chapters of your novel, and I can basically conclude that it is a rare high-quality original novel. It is difficult to say in the future (I am really afraid that you will add any such messy things as immortality, fantasy, internal power, artillery, gunpowder, etc. In the future, and destroy this seedling). It is classified as primitive stone tools, so as to return to the end of the Paleolithic Age. I hope the author will give you the original flavor

Let me continue with some suggestions: Now that there are more people, can we establish a rotation system? In this way, there won't be a situation where even the normal defense people can't spare the time when the farming is busy, and they have no physical strength. Of course, currently we can only rotate some light jobs, but we can have enough physical strength to cope with emergencies. The second issue is the issue of emergency plan training and exercises. If the environment is not peaceful, everyone must achieve the required effective training time for queue training, and for example, a small exercise once a week and a large exercise every two weeks to gradually discover problems and improve the emergency plan, so as to reduce losses as much as possible. For the guy who attempts to defect, some slave rights, such as food and rest, can be appropriately restored on the grounds of better performance and a reflective attitude. Give him appropriate hope. After all, this guy was caught without causing any consequences. The most important thing is to prevent this guy from actually successfully escaping or making a big mistake. It's also about winning people's hearts. Finally, the protagonist should not be idle. Education must be launched as soon as possible, mainly for young children. Adult night schools must also be provided, so as to lay a solid foundation and truly prosper. After all, only when we have a foundation can we develop. Just like now, famous farmers and workers say that their education is low, but if they can understand the construction drawings and construct according to the drawings, they are the high-quality workers that foreign countries dream of (this is really not a joke). Finally, there is entertainment. In addition to original ditties, there are also more entertainment items. These modern things should not be too rich, and of course there should be more to promote collective unity. This era is an era where we need to stay together to keep warm. Otherwise, it will be a civilization that has just appeared.

I finally finished reading it in three days. I have been reading this novel for five or six years. This is the first time I have read it all. It is full of flesh and blood and very warm. I like the naughty generals and the proud uncle deer, especially the flying stones in cowhide. But the one I respect the most is the witch. Between the lines, I can feel the identity of my grandfather in it. The movie is really well written and unique. It is much better than the current Shuang novels. I can't stop reading the current Shuang novels after reading a few hundred chapters at most. But this novel is really good. Alas, at the moment when the general, the wizard, and the deer all passed away at the end, I felt very uncomfortable. I really felt uncomfortable. In today's fast-paced life, this book is worth reading.

The book is well written at the beginning, and the content is not bad. However, the author becomes more and more fluent later on. One sentence is clearly explained, and the author has to go back and forth like Tang Monk to explain a chapter. The content is repeated, and the words are repeated, just like what is written by AI.

It's too watery, I can't stand it anymore

The fan value is ranked 12th, and this month the monthly vote list is No. 1. I don't know if it deserves a boost.

I have read the most original novel that suits my taste so far, but it is a pity that I have gone to write about the Three Kingdoms... I will definitely support the author when he releases a new original novel.

Write two paragraphs of history lessons from later generations. The teacher tells the students about ancient history.

Brother, when will you write about the primitive era again? There are already very few original books. Waiting for you to come back to the primitive era when will you give me a poke? I will definitely order them all.

The low power of bows and arrows is probably a problem with the arrowheads. Wooden arrowheads are certainly not very powerful, but arrowheads made of stone or bone are more powerful. In addition, the short distance can be improved by modifying the arrow, such as tying cloth strips, adding feathers, etc., And the arrow must be as straight as possible. If you can't find a more suitable wood, you can try to make a bow from bones, such as antlers, or make a bow from bone and wood together. If a recurve bow is difficult to make, you can only try to make it as long as possible to make a long bow.

I've only read a few dozen chapters, so I won't talk about typos and other typos in the writing. After all, I don't read these online articles, but the ideas conveyed in the article made me a little uncomfortable. The protagonist blames everything on the gods. This approach can indeed help him gain a foothold in the tribe, but it also lays the foundation for the future of the tribe. It should be noted that although gods can make people fear and encourage people to do good, and serve as spiritual sustenance in troubled times, they also put a heavy shackles on civilization. The history of the European Middle Ages is the best proof. The protagonist's abilities are limited. He cannot develop technology to the point where he can deny the gods, but he can use his actions to make the divine power of future generations unshakable. Zhuanxu's desperate attempt to cut off the power of witches to communicate with the gods was not only to wrest power away from the gods, but also to embody the simple wisdom of the ancient Chinese people. Since then, in this land of China, people only believe in their ancestors and no longer have gods. This is why, while other humans in the world are still drinking blood, we have established a vast unified country. Without the restraints of ideas, only the descendants of China can fully display their talents. China has lasted for five thousand years. What I am most proud of is not the strong men or the Tang Dynasty, but the Spring and Autumn and Warring States periods when a hundred schools of thought contended. Maybe China at that time was not unified, or even had a common national plot, but it was a period in which we made the fastest progress. There was no burning of books to embarrass Confucianism, nor only respecting Confucianism. There was just a hundred schools of thought contending, using the simplest and most direct way to prove who was right. It was an era that did not rely on faith and was straightforward and self-confident. At that time, someone told us through stargazing that the earth was round. At that time, some people realized that population registration was important. At that time, many truths passed down by future generations for thousands of years had been discovered. If the late Qin Dynasty had unified the six kingdoms, or had not burned books to embarrass Confucian scholars, and had not imprisoned ideas, the future might be very different. If the era of contention among a hundred schools of thought continued, we might be able to look up at the Earth from Mars. I have not finished reading this book, so I don't know if the author has solved this problem later, so I just make some suggestions. It may sound cool to rule the world as the son of God, but it will bring disaster to this immature civilization. Childish children holding sharp weapons will only hurt themselves in the end. I recommend the author to read this book... In fact, it has already been 404 [laughs] You should be able to find it by searching online... But I think it was blocked because the things it explains are too profound. The author is also a stubborn person who dares to say anything that cannot be said, showing the good and evil of human nature and capital vividly. I think he handled the protagonist's position in the tribe very well, and the evolution of the slavery system was also very interesting. He did not simply deny slavery, but made them realize the shortcomings of slavery and the importance of limiting the rights of leaders in a way that made people feel pain without actually killing too many people. emmm Also, I'm really not a troll... This book actually feels pretty good when I read it, otherwise I wouldn't have written so much. It's just that I hate magicians... Finally [Funny] to save my life...

Does the author understand the difference between wild silkworms and domestic silkworms? It's not something you can just take for granted and just raise it. First of all, the incubation time between the two is slightly different. They have one black flower and one pure white flower, and their growth period is wild and short. They are small in size but big in size. Wild silkworms are wild and crawl around wildly, but domestic silkworms are very honest and well-behaved. Wild silkworms have a strong smell. The cocoons of wild silkworms are small and rough, while those of domestic silkworms are large and smooth. At least the male moths of wild silk moths can fly, while the female ones also crawl around in a fluttering manner. Bombyx moths are flightless and honest. Bombyx moths are basically white and have few hairs. Wild silkworm moths are gray and black and have many hairs. Silkworms: Bombyx silkworms are nearly twice as big as wild silkworms, and their number is more than twice as large. These are the general differences between ordinary white silkworms and wild silkworms. Not to mention other varieties of silkworms. By the way, at least the northern wild mulberry silkworms come in three types: tawny, black and gray. . . .

I've never been fined before, and now I'm ranked fifth on the monthly list. Please give me a try for the first time.

I saw that four-month tickets can be used to increase the quality. I have four recommended tickets and five monthly tickets. Can I add more information? Lost in thought🤔