I Am a Primitive Man

I feel like the author looks down on the reproductive capacity of wild animals. For a tribe of dozens of people, the number of fish in the river will decrease after a period of time, and the number of animals will decrease after a few months in the forest. It's too exaggerated. There are so many poachers in Africa using modern weapons to kill them. Australia spends hundreds of millions of dollars every year to kill them with modern weapons, but they can't kill them. The Asian carp in the rivers of the United States are also overrun even though they have developed antibodies to fish medicine.

In fact, the protagonist should really support the surrounding tribes so that they can generate surplus value, such as growing food, mining, etc. Then let them exchange excess food supplies for salt, pottery tools and other goods. In this way, Qingque can free up part of the labor from heavy labor such as planting and mining, and use the labor for other things. Especially now that porcelain is about to be released. If the surrounding tribes are too poor to afford food, no matter how exquisite your porcelain is, if others don't even have money to buy pottery, will they come to buy better and more expensive porcelain? I have always felt that the protagonist's strategy of making the surrounding tribes so poor that they cannot afford to eat, and then having to join Qingque is unreliable. In fact, it is good to just use the employment methods that have been used before, such as mining, road construction and other low-skilled labor. As long as Qingque's core technology remains ahead, it will be fine.

First of all, I want to say cheers to the author, and secondly, what I want to say is, First: In primitive society, the adoption of slavery was a very progressive act. The author also made a good start, without being stubborn to be benevolent. The use of slaves. Even in the post-archaic period, the rise of Rome was caused by the use of a large number of slaves as a productive labor force. The large use of slaves as labor force can liberate the men of the tribe to be trained and armed as professional warriors, while the slaves exist as productive forces, responsible for supplying food and building infrastructure. Second: The domestication of wolves is a great start. As a major hunting aid during the savagery period, domesticated wolves or dogs are extremely ferocious existences. I think the author has already made some considerations on this point. I don't need to be verbose. See the development in the following article for details. Third: I think the domestication of sheep, deer, and pigs is more important. The population carrying capacity of the fishing and hunting civilization is frighteningly weak. However, the population base of the tribes in this book is indeed relatively small, so don't worry. It's just that I think the domestication of these creatures is a more important part of the development of the tribe, so I mention it. Fourth: After using slaves to liberate a large number of male labor forces, you can consider using militarized training for young men, including training in throwing, fighting, wrestling, tug-of-war and other aspects, in an effort to make the men of the sparsely populated tribe martial and strong, thereby capturing more slaves. Fifth: Author, you can think about finding a powerful weapon like a horse. Even if there is no steel or stirrups, it doesn't matter. Prairie people have been raised since childhood and can still ride naked, but they cannot charge. People who ride horses are mentally and physically stronger than people who walk. If you cultivate this tribe into a horse-riding nation and supplement it with training, I believe there will be no tribe more powerful than Qingque. The slaves are responsible for building infrastructure, houses, and farming to supply Qingque. It is simply indescribable. Finally, it is really difficult to write primitive novels without fantasy elements. The production of many things will be criticized by book friends regardless of whether they are good or bad. These problems are difficult to deal with and it is difficult not to be affected, including my remarks. So I can only say that I hope the author can consider many aspects. After all, everyone has different ideas about novels, so I can only do my best. Thank you very much for the good book you brought me. I hope you will continue to work hard. Come on!

Regarding the new tribe, I think building a city directly in the Sichuan Basin is a bit too idealistic. First of all, the distance between the old tribe and the new tribe is too far, and the migration takes too long. If it is winter, there will definitely be many people who die on the way. If it is other seasons, then you are destined to lose food for a year. If there is a problem in the middle, it is possible for two years. Secondly, regarding the resources near the old tribe, such as salt mountains, copper mines, tin mines and a series of other important resources, if you move to a new tribe, you will have to look for them again? I'm afraid it's not very realistic. Finally, regarding the infrastructure construction near the old tribe, the established tribal alliance, and the future tribal order, we cannot just focus on the life and death of one tribe. It is recommended to set up an outpost near the new tribe to occupy the land first, then hold a tribe meeting, and use means to force the tribal alliance to move together. Then, while thinking of ways to increase the number of people, build roads. You can establish a gathering point at intervals along the road and appoint trustworthy tribe members as city leaders. , Leaving part of the army and slaves (make a plan for the city owner, tell the slaves that they can be given citizenship if they perform well, and eat all the slaves in the current tribe in this way); if other tribes are willing, they can also stay at the gathering point built halfway, and continue like this until they reach the new tribe. This method has several advantages. The future positioning of the old and new tribes can be separated. Each gathering point in the middle can also assume different responsibilities. For example, the area near the copper mine is responsible for collecting and smelting copper, and a gathering point in the middle can bear the responsibility of casting and forging. If you encounter good soil on the road, you can also establish a special gathering point for firing pottery. By analogy, the main city is positioned to control food and supply food to other gathering points, while the things produced by other gathering points are transported to the main city and distributed by the main city. The most important thing is that you write it like this to make it interesting. What the protagonist needs to do is to establish a system to help the tribal system transition to the feudal system as soon as possible, instead of blindly looking for food, cooking food, building cities, and fighting.

How can you eat sweet tofu brain? Gotta eat something salty. Anyone who doesn't eat salty food is a heretic, and I strongly oppose eating sweet tofu.

When will our powerful slave-owning snake-eating human tribe appear? Will there be a more powerful villain after Soaring Snake is destroyed? Or the Soaring Snake Tribe has been defeated after repeated battles, and uses the Soaring Snake Tribe's frantic development model to quickly capture the population, force slaves to give birth to children quickly, use cults to confuse other tribes, and finally turn other tribes into slaves, restoring the population to the pre-war level. It will not be completely wiped out every time, and then learns lessons and grows in technology. Each attack will become stronger (the system develops towards a dark civilization, such as extreme slavery and becoming a humanoid Zerg tribe, developing a cult with great charisma and believers who are not afraid of death, and carrying out a large number of attacks). Human experiments are used to master forbidden technologies that the protagonist does not know much about and is unwilling to understand (such as opening the skull of a living person and stimulating relevant areas with hot needles to make the person tell some relevant information), using marijuana poppy to train drug-addicted berserkers, and eating corpses to produce corpse plague. Resistant to the corpse plague, but there are residual corpse plague viruses in the body to infect people who do not eat corpses, engage in human breeding, develop spies, etc. (Of course cults are the core), and then become the villain of the whole story. The protagonist is crazy about technology, and Soaring Snake is crazy about destroying troops. I am looking forward to it.

Shou Bai, I read Chapter 468 in one go. It was well written. I voted for you with all four monthly votes. How about adding more?

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AuthorI have read 12 chapters of your novel, and I can basically conclude that it is a rare high-quality original novel. It is difficult to say in the future (I am really afraid that you will add any such messy things as immortality, fantasy, internal power, artillery, gunpowder, etc. In the future, and destroy this seedling). It is classified as primitive stone tools, so as to return to the end of the Paleolithic Age. I hope the author will give you the original flavor

The book is well written at the beginning, and the content is not bad. However, the author becomes more and more fluent later on. One sentence is clearly explained, and the author has to go back and forth like Tang Monk to explain a chapter. The content is repeated, and the words are repeated, just like what is written by AI.