I Have Many Masters

I've read a few hundred chapters. Now that the Tan Yurou incident is over, I have a lot of free time, so I'm here to talk about it. First of all, if I only look at the title of the book, I can probably only think of an entertaining plot about a cheap talent, of course it may be about a system or something. But it's so easy for you to open it, it's a rare thing. As of today, this genre of online novels probably won't become a big hit, but it's better than being stable. I don't watch much martial arts. Gu Long Jinyong has only watched a few episodes of TV series. So I think martial arts is more realistic. The author's positioning is very obvious. It is nothing more than becoming stronger through adventure. At the beginning, it seemed that it was not done well. The substitution of online games is indeed a bit stiff, but don't worry. In describing the world of Shaolin, the author uses an outsider's attitude to examine the so-called game world. Yuan Ci, Mr. Ying... These are traditional, but in the context of time travel, these intelligences are detached and active as the role of master. The combination of traditional martial arts and modern elements is not superficial, and it is not all funny and cheap, which is rare even for commercial novels. Wang Anfeng has always been a cattle herder, and his father never wanted him to leave Daliang Village. But he just picked up the beads. The beginning of the book seems inconsistent with the style that follows. Ignoring this, Wang Anfeng is probably the character who is most consistent with socialist values ​​​​I have ever seen. He has many advantages, but they are all human. He also has shortcomings, which are also human. He is an ordinary person, and in the novel it is inevitable that he is also a genius. He has to earn money to buy food and cook, and at the same time he has to practice martial arts and socialize. Different from most novels, the author spends a lot of time talking about Wang Anfeng's growth. From the initial ignorance of martial arts training, I learned to temporarily avoid the edge and get out of the mountain, and then it became difficult to calm down. Coupled with his character design, his transformation is very reasonable, but the boy has just grown up and is ready to see the world. Wang Anfeng is a representative, a boy who has just entered the society, but he has a few more decent masters. So he can maintain his original intention in the end. The author is probably not a "petty citizen". The most important thing is the contrast between various characters. The standards of good and evil are difficult to describe, and both good and bad people have their own difficulties. There are only two dotted lines in the world, from good to evil, and we are in the middle. We should also pay attention to the social picture of this book. If hundreds of families govern together, it will be difficult to bring peace to prosperity. What would have happened if Emperor Qin had not burned books and Confucianism had not praised Taoism. Confucians govern politics, military strategists form the army, Legalists control law, and Taoists can recite his scriptures. This is an ideal social form, where everyone performs their duties and no one is left behind. Even today's prosperity makes us envious. Da Qin can be mapped to reality, a "big country in the prosperous age". We understand that things are under official control, foreign troubles still exist, and life is uneven. The hardships Wang Anfeng encountered can actually be found in similar cases in reality (I hate to admit it, but social security is not as good as we heard.) In addition to the author, readers will think more. The author's style is very flexible, with both the appearance of a commercial novel and the emotional content. The gluttonous Wang Anfeng is at odds with Yi, and Mr. Ying's "tsundere"... This is what online novels should be like. Probably,... This way first.

What I want to praise is the author's writing style, which is really good and has the charm of ancient martial arts. The character traits of each character are also very prominent, and the details are well controlled. The smoothness of the plot, the logic of the story, and the interest make this book have the potential to become a god. Book I personally think the author should be more attentive to the emotional line. I can't say that Xue Shisan's character design is bad, but this emotional line is too old-fashioned. If the author feels it is difficult to write, I suggest changing it to another one. After all, Luo Hua Wu Wu and Liu Shui should be ruthless. No It is necessary for the protagonist to be a suitor, which is too cheap. If the author has a good and novel idea on this emotional line, just ignore it. As for the protagonist's life experience, although the blood theory is good, it will also give people an old-fashioned impression. But since the author has laid the groundwork, I suggest the author write something more eye-catching, not just the protagonist's father who is a dead strongman or an ascended immortal like we think. I believe that most people will feel that they have guessed it if they see a similar plot. There is nothing to pick from the rest. From now on, we need to be more refined. It cannot be said in just a few sentences, not to mention that I think the author's skills and ideas are enough. I said it very harshly, but this is based on my experience as a person who has read books for ten years. Of course, the author does not have to You should listen to me, because what I say is not necessarily right. I am just expounding my thoughts, and I just want the author to understand. After all, I am not writing a book. From the perspective of a bystander, I naturally cannot understand the author's hard work and suffering I just hope that I can give the author some help from the perspective of a reader, because I think this book is really good. I write so much hoping that the author can read it. If it can help this book a little bit, I think it will be a great happiness for the readers. Of course, I will not force it. The author's own rhythm is the most important. While ensuring his own rhythm, the author himself It is very important to position yourself as an author. If you think this book is just an improvisation, just for fun, it doesn't really matter the opinions of others. But if you want to write this book well, I think the readers' opinions are also valuable. Having said so much, come on, author!

I feel like it would be better if the protagonist is named Wang Anshi, which is very touching. People's words are not enough to show compassion, ancestors are not enough to follow the law, and destiny is not enough to fear!

I have fully ordered this book. It can be said that the world described by the author is of flesh and blood, and the protagonist does not rely entirely on Goldfinger. The protagonist grows up step by step, understands the cruelty of the world step by step, and also feels the warmth in this world. Unlike today's fast food articles, which are just tm and zb, Jianghu should be like the author's writing, with basic three views. Although it is cruel and dark, there are still heroes, which is a symbol of human nature. Unlike some dark literature (some apocalyptic novels), I hope that the protagonist will not sacrifice the basic human ethics that a person should have for this, then it is not called a Virgin? , The core values ​​have been directly corrupted, right? It doesn't even count as a person. Those who say Our Lady, can you please read the book before commenting? The writing is so good, step by step, one step to reach the sky. Only after reading too many yy novels can you say why it is so heartwarming. It is not like Jianghu at all, Jianghu is cruel. I just laughed, and the rest are no more bb than those xx. The author's writing is very good, but the knife is too damn painful, as long as a hundred miles. I hope that in ten or twenty years from now, the Qin Dynasty will be peaceful and the country will be peaceful. I hope Tuoba Yue will make the country happy and the people happy. I hope that in ten or twenty years' time, the boy and the girl will be unmarried, the boy will be unmarried and return to the fields, and the girl will have no burden. Furthermore, why should a young girl from a general's family be responsible for a country's major events and a country's happiness? Shouldn't it be shouldered by relatives of the emperor? Even the marriage should be done by the princess, not by the daughter of a retainer. When I first saw the single female protagonist, I was very interested. The harem story is just yy, and a single female protagonist is a reality, but when it came to writing about Tan Yurou, I fucking wished there could be more female protagonists. All I can say is that the author's writing style was so good in my opinion that it changed my mind. To be honest, when I saw that, I wanted to send the knife, but before I could send the knife, I was stabbed by you first, but the ending was still satisfactory and acceptable. The bitter flower reminds me of the silent flower. They are all equally bitter, and they suddenly become sweet until they die. This book is placed in the martial arts section. This book is enough to be called a god. But there are too few people in the martial arts area, and only in areas with many people can one truly become a god. By the way, you are also the only author who asked me to subscribe. Usually I read pirated versions. . . . Then, finally, I beg you, don't let Baili and Tuoba's ending be too tragic. Then can the author get back to me? Typing is very tiring. It's even better with added precision!

Damn it, we disciples, deacons, and helmsmen didn't say anything. Why is it that a group of trainees say something is wrong here and say that the three views are not correct? Is it so difficult to find a clean comment area for book friends to discuss the plot now? Is it so difficult to find a book worth reading that makes people hate it so much?

Four refuges, four refuges, monk, why do you always refuse to take refuge in me? Thirteen years later, in a lonely grave, a bold man's body was withered, and his voice, which had never been restrained, also became lower. In fact, I had already converted. I was a convert long ago. Tears have long since dried up, but blood should not be shed lightly. On that day, the world-famous King Kong with Angry Eyes transformed into Shura, just to seek justice. "Master? Master?" Wang Anfeng's call came to his ears, and he came back to his senses. "Where did I just say that?" "You said that the women at the foot of the mountain are tigresses. You must stay away from them if you encounter them." Wang Anfeng scratched his head. "But I think Thirteen is very beautiful, very beautiful..." The voice gradually became quieter. For him, questioning the master was simply a heinous thing, but it was very embarrassing for him to admit that Thirteen was not cute. "The woman at the foot of the mountain is a tigress." He repeated this sentence in a low voice, feeling great pain in his heart. Just one look, and she ate his heart out. What is it if it's not a tiger? But how much he longed to use his heart to save her. "But he is also the Bodhisattva in my heart." Without saying anything, he closed his eyes and signaled Wang Anfeng to go out. Wang Anfeng walked out of the door a little uneasily, thinking that he would just follow the master's will next time, but he didn't realize that in the dark room of confinement, a drop of crystal tears fell on the cassock, crying silently.

I have been reading the chapters of Dahuangzhai recently. To be honest, the plot is a bit dull and depressing, and it seems a bit not "cool" enough, so I usually wait a few days to read it. With Lao Yan's update volume, this is more enjoyable (by the way, when will Lao Yan update 100,000 a day, so I don't have to wait a few days before reading) But when reading these chapters, I can always see some people shouting about "pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger", "routine", and "pretending to be slapped in the face". To be honest, I didn't enjoy reading these chapters, but I was really speechless for these people. Let me analyze this plot with the way I read novels. Wang Anfeng didn't come to the Western Regions for an outing or to pretend to be a pick-up girl. He came to track down clues about Baihutang. The Baihutang is a Jianghu organization that has been hidden for many years, has huge power, and has many eyes and ears. Even the Criminal Department of the Great Qin Dynasty has been sending spies to the Western Regions, but they have not been able to find out. How should Wang Anfeng investigate on his own? He was arrogant, showing off his holiness to everyone on the road, telling Baihutang that I am here and come quickly to pay my respects (Is Baihutang such a mentally retarded organization?). Or should you hide your identity, hide in the dark, and wait for prey? Fortunately, Wang Anfeng chose the second option which was not "cool" enough. Then analyze the section of Dahuangzhai. The first is the Jianghu environment, the martial arts in the Western Regions, from the Thirty-six Kingdoms to the Rest of Peace, Lao Yan has already written it very clearly. Not to mention the pool of stagnant water, it is also filled with the atmosphere of "little demons in the temple, strong winds, shallow ponds and many bastards". Most of the warriors in the Western Regions don't need to fight hard, because their status is determined when they are born. Those with advanced martial arts must be from noble families, while those from poor backgrounds are destined to have "mediocre qualifications and cannot be cultivated" (of course, a small probability event is not excluded). Therefore, they have already compiled their own rules and are accustomed to using this set of rules to treat others. Experts must be of noble birth, and those of noble birth must already be famous. Those who are unwilling to declare their family background must be of bad origin, so I don't know that those who are not of good origin must be weak. Also, what Jianghu in the Western Regions does must have a purpose, either for reputation or for profit, so they think that they can let evil people leave just because they keep their promises, and they can deal with evil people without having to talk about Jianghu morality. Does it look familiar? I think it's quite familiar. The world of many "cool" novels is like this. In such a world, the strong can abuse the weak at will, because the weak are used to it and they don't dare to resist and will never get ahead. The weak can even abuse the strong, because the weak only needs to say "Aren't you afraid of angering ×××?" And the strong will endure it. Compared to Da Qin's Jianghu, it's a little cuter because although there is abuse, there are always lovely people who will stand up and demand justice. To go a step further, let's talk about An Feng. He is hidden in the dark, so he is destined not to be exposed at will. He has always kept a low profile until all the prey have appeared and the net can be closed. In this case, naturally you will not take action until the necessary time. As for how to calculate the necessary time, it depends on each person. After all, some people are the type of people who say, "If you curse me, I will kill your whole family." And An Feng is a very kind and lovely person. He is willing to give up a large bounty to vent his anger on the child, and he is also willing to fight alone for a group of women he has never met. I don't think he would take action because of a passerby's sarcastic remarks or a few kid's troubles. As he said himself, they don't deserve it. Because he himself walked into the trap of Dahuang Village and took risks for the sake of Baihu Hall, not to show his saintliness in front of others. How could a hunter, who had been squatting for several days for hunting, rush out and beat a wild dog on the roadside just because of the barking of it, thus ruining his hunting efforts? Wasn't he worried about disturbing his prey? So Wang Anfeng won't. --------The above------- It's a bit too much to say and a bit confusing. I guess many friends will not read it for a long time. To be honest, Lao Yan's intercourse posts have never been very good. Either no one said anything, or some people shouted that this is not good and that is not good, and there were very few people laughing together. But there are a lot of mistakes in the chapters of Dahuangzhai, and they are all posted at the end of the chapter, so you can catch them accidentally. It makes me feel quite unhappy when I read it, and I always want to jump out and scold them, saying that I don't think it's good, so go and read something else, blah, blah, blah, but I'm just a reader, and it's not good for the author to say such things, so I've been holding back. But I suppressed my discomfort, so I wrote this mess. Qidian novels, some books are really comfortable to read without using the brain, but some books are more comfortable to read with the brain. I think this book is in the second category. I didn't enjoy reading these chapters. A bunch of rubbish in the Western Regions think they are noble and narcissistic, but novels cannot always be enjoyable. Moreover, the last volume of the previous book was really unhappy. It was clear that I was victorious and fully blossomed, but it felt depressing and unhappy (I wanted to complain for a long time, Lao Yan's ability to trick tears is beyond the sky). Compared with that one, this time it was just drizzle. And after thinking about it carefully, I can find a reasonable explanation for An Feng's behavior. At least I don't feel so unhappy anymore. When reading this book, everyone should use their brains more. It is also very interesting to think about it by yourself.

Regarding [Ninth-Rank Master], can you make a small comment? The upper limit of this world is so high, and every warrior at each stage is followed by a [master]. Isn't it too inconsistent? 😰I feel like a ninth-grade warrior is enough. Just like Legend of the Condor Heroes, the upper limit is five unique skills. The Seven Monsters of Jiangnan and the owner of Lujiazhuang can also be called "master"... But if a disciple of the Beggar Clan comes and knows both skills, he can also be called "master"... Wouldn't it be very shameful for a real "master" to be a [master]? . In this article, a warrior can be rated. Everyone knows that he is a ninth-grade warrior, so why is he still called a [master]? 🤫 Is this just an honorific in this world? It seems like a title like "hero"? 😄

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