Mini Game System

To be honest, I think the writing is okay, but I really like the layout. So I suddenly thought of looking for pirated copies on the Internet, and found that the pirated copies were ranked surprisingly well, and they were almost as good as the genuine ones. . . Author, can you do this?😥

I feel like I have subverted Zhang Jiao. The Yellow Turban Army section is the most brilliantly written section. You may not remember the rest of this book in the future, but you will definitely remember the part about the Yellow Turban Army.

A history of growth. From the following books and the review section of this book, we can see that the author's writing style has made great progress.

What about the mini games we promised? What are the things written below! ? Except for the Fruit Ninja at the beginning, there are no mini-games! ! ! At first, I thought the heroine was the elf girl, but Zixiu suddenly appeared and saved her with her life without any emotional foreshadowing! Oh my god! I'm convinced! Did the author write whatever he thought of or what? ? Replacement?! In the subsequent forced sensationalism and bitter hatred! What the hell! Forced Xiaobai?! Moreover, the plot was written piece by piece, as if there were missing pages, and I was convinced!

I always feel like there is some misunderstanding about mini-games

The protagonist is too softly portrayed, the sentences are too confusing, and the pace is too fast.

Maybe I stayed up too late and my brain was burned out. I really can't understand this novel.

The mini-game promised by the headline party? Where is the hungry shark? It's all badly written Holy Grail stuff, but it's better to look at the table of contents

Alas, there is no denying that there are wonderful moments, but 70% of the content is fragmented and incoherent, the details are rough, and the transitions are stiff. It's good stuff, but it's like swallowing it like a whale, swallowing it whole before you even taste it.

The very beginning, congratulations on attaining the platinum level 😆🌹

It's a bit confusing. The focus of the "main world" and "dungeon world" is very confusing. I even think that the focus is mostly on the dungeon world. Take the second Jin Yong world for example. After the end of Fruit Ninja, the main world progressed for a few chapters and then entered Jin Yong's world again. Then it took a long time to describe Jin Yong's world? That's okay, but when describing Jin Yong's world, the settings of the martial arts system are basically used, and there are not many shadows of the main world. So after reading the length of Jin Yong's world, I even forgot what kind of setting the main world is... Am I reading a system text or an infinite stream?

Mini game system? So what the hell is Legend of the Condor Heroes?

It's a bit confusing and the front and back links are not smooth.

What's the background? I don't understand. When did you give up practicing Dou Qi? Why is the story so fragmented?

Although I haven't finished reading it, and it's been a long time, I still think about the Yellow Turban part.

Lao Yan, why are you so unfinished in the later stages? Learn to get out of here, elbows, home pigs, toads, Liuliu, right? Why is every book like this? What a pity. The early stages are so wonderful. Did you vote for the Demon Suppression Museum by mistake? You should vote for Xianxia - Modern Cultivation!

Is the emotional line of Tomato Killing God copied from your Demon Suppression Museum? Why is it so similar? Above the dome, the Lord of Mysteries, the Dragon Clan, starting from Red Moon, the Tao Weird Immortal, plagiarized everything on the surface, but not the core, it was a pure stitching monster!

I saw it a long time ago. I searched for it on the browser for a long time and finally found it.

Is it unfinished? I looked at the catalog and it didn't feel right.

Very creative, but the plot is not very interesting

The author's writing is very good, and it is definitely worth reading and subscribing. Recommend a book that is decisive, sharp, and full of joy: "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...

Why banned?