The True Lord Has Arrived

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The beginning is really amazing, so amazing that I started reading the novel immediately after reading the first few chapters. The creation of the small characters is also great, and the knives are also very reasonable. But the main line keeps changing, or the main line serves the author's thoughts at the time and writes wherever he thinks. 1. The protagonist is Taishan's child, so I think the main plot of becoming a tiger in the early stage, evolving into the prince of Taishan and regaining power step by step, is no problem. And it was said at the beginning that the authority of Mount Taishan God was divided into six. But there was no further follow-up, and the six-person holding set at the beginning became ridiculous. Super evolved to become the Tianzhu God. 2. The beginning of the story specifically describes the evil of the Qingmingbo master and the demon, as well as the evil of the aristocratic Pei family. It would be great if we follow this main line. But after Pei Xuanniao appeared, the family stopped writing, and the early foreshadowing was meaningless. The leader of Qingmingbo also inexplicably gained an immediate boss as Emperor Qingming, which made the first big boss appear extremely low-key. There is no end to monsters being evil in the human world. 3. After Zhi Niang introduced Manjusri Bodhisattva, it directly led to the collapse of the main line. There is Manjusri, and Samantabhadra is also mentioned later in the article, but Buddha is not. The Temple of the Reclining Buddha is the first climax and a key node for the protagonist to determine the master of Taishan. However, the appearance of Manjusri caused an imbalance in power. The background becomes chaotic. 4. There is a Lou Guan Tao, and the background is set in the Tang Dynasty, so don't put me on the protagonist. It's inexplicable. Louguan Dao, as the first sect force, does not have the grace and strength of the first sect. It's just a pendant. The sect master is not even a strong fourth grade. Not to mention other Taoisms. 5. Apart from historical figures, human forces, the Tang Dynasty and Taoist sects are of no help to the story. In other words, the whole world is carried on the shoulders of the protagonist alone. If there is no protagonist, An Lushan can even play Datang alone. In other words, every big and small boss after Zhi Niang can be defeated in Datang alone. The existence of Li Bai and Guo Ziyi of the Tang Dynasty is almost zero. It can also be said that the characters appearing in Taoism have no effect at all. It has no impact on the battle situation. 6. There is also a problem with Fuxi's setting🤨 Fuxi pulled the protagonist over and said from the beginning that the protagonist was Bai Zeshu's pendant. So based on this premise, Fuxi's back-up plan should be based on the fact that the protagonist is a tool man. But the fact is that everything big and small depends on the protagonist. Without Li Longji's angel investors, Fuxi's arrangement would have collapsed. Seems very retarded. 7. The Overseas Three Immortals Island is ridiculously strong. It is an overseas organization that relies on stealing luck. The leader on the island is actually at the second level. In comparison, Li Heng in the palace is only above the immortal level. Anyone who comes out of the island is of the fourth grade. What about the fourth grade of the Tang Dynasty? With such a setting, does the overseas Three Immortals Island still need to be carefully stolen? 8. The setting of gods and demons directly caused the main line of the book to collapse. It also made Fuxi's so-called seal seem ridiculous. Shuchuan Gonggong's second-level spiritual world level 2 can be directly shot, and Gonggong has unblocked Wuzhi Qi. Even if he cannot appear in full body, it is still an immortal level. How could a person of this level support Tang Dynasty? Fuxi is fighting the world alone, with no allies at all. So can Fuxi really be able to withstand the pressure of all gods and demons by himself? Is he worthy? 9. Bai Zeshu started out as the protagonist of Golden Finger, and even the mastermind "Shi" introduced by Fu Xi at the beginning also used Bai Zeshu. But unfortunately, Bai Zeshu's Golden Finger has no highlight moments after the Temple of the Reclining Buddha chapter, because the concept of gods and demons was introduced. Then the role of Baize Shu changed and became a tool for rewriting gods and demons. Later, it was directly renamed the Conferred Gods List. Is it suitable for Baize? The first 1/3 of this novel was great. But in the middle 1/3 it becomes very tiring. It's not fun enough, and the battles are drawn out and long. Looking very tired. The last 1/3 just let me go. The mastermind behind the scenes changed from Shi to Emperor Qingming who appeared inexplicably, and then to the regret of the Queen Pangu. It can be said to be unfinished. The main plot changes again and again. It is a mixture of various mythological stories, but it is also a mess. Ignoring the timeline, just convert the effect into the cause. All the names are applied to the protagonist - Taishan Fujun, Tianzhu Shen, Laozi, Qingyuan Miaodao Zhenjun, Taiyi. It's quite speechless to watch.

Have you ever been a real king? It's natural to write some things randomly.

Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was the arrival of the True King, traveling around the world, helping good people to cleanse the dirty world and establish order in the world. I didn't expect the game to take so long. The layout is to start from a small soldier, upgrade and fight monsters, and finally become a true king. You are the rising true king, not the true king arriving. 🤓

Brother Shen, Pictures of AI

First of all, congratulations to the author for breaking one million And since I have been asked to write a book review, and I happen to be free, let me talk about it I entered the pit from Taiping Ling, and then went back to finish a part of the Supreme Master's book. Apart from the fact that I like to make the protagonists in my novels very unreliable, I am used to it. The sexual little shrimp creates a big scene, and the Novice Village allows the protagonist to kill the final boss with the magic weapons supported by various bosses The author's emotional mobilization cannot be said. He has been a bookworm for more than ten years and has experienced thousands of books. Lao Yan is second to none in this aspect. Chu This Zhenjun is no exception. Every time he fights and shows off, the emotional value is enough Unfortunately, success is also emotional, and failure is also emotional. Playing like this every time, it is too easy to get tired of aesthetics, and once you are separated from emotions, it is easy to find this kind of The shortcomings of extreme emotion-provoking writing It is what I wrote before. The protagonist is too weak, and he is constantly involved in all the major events beyond the n-level, and he plays the leading role every time, and they are all salvation-type events It makes it look like the world It's just porcelain full of cracks. Without the protagonist as a variable to mend, it will break if touched casually But I also like to create some characters who are wise and almost demonic. They have some magical calculations and shocking resourcefulness, and they are all from the protagonist's side Others In fact, both sides of the story are well written, but combined, it's a conflict with the protagonist who relies on various external objects and squeezes his potential, and works desperately to survive. When I read it, I was very emotional. After reading it, I thought about it and thought about it. Something doesn't feel right Well, it seems like I talked a little too much I originally participated in the event with the goal of mixing some coins, so I should have said something nice, but I accidentally said my true words And I typed so many words, three to four hundred words, I am too lazy to delete them. That's it I hope the author can read this book review and consider the suggestions, although it may not be correct After all, Lao Yan is a master who has touched the platinum threshold, we are just a pouncer who has not been on the shelves for several years, it is for reference only Just sauce

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