Pillars of the Samurai Clan

Let's talk about his sister first, Sheng Ji... Various dedicated chapters were given in the early stage to cultivate feelings and create a sister who doesn't know what the situation is... But then she just skipped it, right? What's the point of writing about her. . It's something that can be dealt with in a few strokes Besides, Uesugi Kenshin's sister was raised with such virtue as the heir to the samurai family? All kinds of random things regardless of the importance. Is the author too influenced by the two-dimensional tsundere? When the protagonist meets certain women, it becomes almost impossible. He doesn't look like a man at all (this is the Warring States Period) I have seen more than 200 pictures so far, so since the author has finished the book, I won't say more. . If you can see some of my suggestions, I hope they can strengthen the role creation aspect.

Halfway through the movie, I didn't write a few serious battles, it was all about farming. It's really weird to suddenly turn into a bitch in the middle period, especially when you accidentally see someone taking a bath or something like that. It's embarrassing. Moreover, a woman who is independent, strong, and doesn't pretend to be polite to the protagonist is not popular with modern readers. There are too many similar people around her. On the contrary, the real Yamato Nadeshiko type is more popular. Just like Lin Daiyu, a woman who loves to be petty, likes to quarrel with Jia Baoyu and like to be coaxed. She may have been popular in the Qing Dynasty because she was rare, but there are too many such women in modern times. On the contrary, at least I personally prefer Xue Baochai.

Don't be fooled by the author's introduction of historical knowledge The IQs of all the characters will not exceed the level of primary school students The lowest poison point is that the 9-year-old protagonist, as a general, leads 7,000 people to annihilate 18,000 people from the Sanhao family If you cannot accept this, please do not open the book. This is already the least poisonous point, and there are countless more illogical ones than this. According to the author's description of the protagonist, unifying the world within one year is not a dream.

It was written without thinking. 400 People were divided into 5 teams and shot in 5 rounds to kill more than 1,500 people? Or 500 people shooting several rounds at a distance of 50 meters? What gun reloads so quickly?

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 223. The author basically doesn't understand the extent of European military equipment and combat effectiveness from the mid-to-late 16th century to the early 17th century. It's arrogant to think that Japan's rags are comparable to European armies. I feel like I've seen Showa's staff, and I don't like Showa.

The author is really bad at writing about women, and he is simply a dog-licker.

More than half of an article of more than 2,000 words is always historical trivia. I can't stand the second volume 🤫

Quite water... I read dozens of chapters, all of them talking about environmental history. The reason why I read Japanese Sengoku is to see the village war. Every fan book is so watery, and how many people are interested in this kind of book... Until I went to Kyoto, it can be summed up in one sentence: I traveled to the Kira family, and then Imagawa came over, so I had to escape to Kyoto... The rest is all water. I have fought several battles in other fandoms, and you haven't started here yet...

At that time, there was no such high level of asking for death. One achievement collapsed. This time, you are asking for thousands of dollars for death.

The core idea of ​​this book is just one sentence: nobles will always be nobles, and common people will always be common people. Nobles whose families are in ruins are also nobles. Even if civilians are talented and capable in literature and military affairs, at most they will end up in a position where they only have the right to speak. When their term is over, they will get out immediately.