Transmigrating to the Vikings and Becoming a Warlord

Erliang again eunuch, everyone crowdfunds the surgery fee! ! ! Please give me thumbs up

First-rate creativity, second-rate writing style, lower-rate writing attitude!

I originally didn't plan to give money to read the book But, the history genre itself is a niche. This time you can take the initiative to write a more niche Viking style, and you are willing to put in the effort to write it to your heart's content (I admire your courage). Rewards are not guaranteed, just subscribe to the chapter. Don't be too mean, you have an appendix. Do it seriously and give us a complete story.

Sugar, what's the matter with you? The update is so weak, so many plots in Hall of Valor are not enough for you to write? Even if it just follows the plot of the game, it would take several million words.

Old eunuch, keep writing. Although there is no more hanging, you can still learn from Tai Shigong (ﾟДﾟ)ﾉ

The first few chapters are so poisonous that I can't stand it... But to be fair, this is not the kind of self-advocacy article written by an author who has no talent and is unaware of it. It can be seen from the lines that the author is still talented and can write stories. The main problem is those small poisonous spots and small flaws that appear several times every one or two pages, which are annoying and standardized. It fully reflects the author's lack of life experience and writing skills, but his inability to meticulously carve out details. It depends on whether you can grow in the writing of this book. I think with your talent, if you can change those writing habits that are like poisoning, then the next book is still worth looking forward to

After reading one-fifth of the book, I can't stand it If this book was published in 2001, then it would become a frequent recommendation of historical articles by white people because of its age If this book was published in 2011, then it would become a staple in niche historical circles due to the bonus of memory beautification The problem is that your book was actually published in 21, so it's hard for me to evaluate it In 2021, the online literature market has been divided into several rounds of versions. It is also a skill to write such an awkward and boring beginning of time travel The subsequent development is even more retro style. I wish that a woman would appear and throw herself at the protagonist. If I write a lesbian character, I will look at the majestic figure of the berserker in a daze, and the shota slave I have taken in will look up to me. Although I haven't read the back yet, but I feel that it will be done sooner or later. Ji Wanzhi's bad life As for other descriptions, it is also quite difficult. In terms of technology, the craftsmen in the territory of Yaar in northern Europe are far too big at the beginning. The number of craftsmen in the territory of Yaar is Dorakar. The protagonist can just draw a sketch and give guidance, and he can make a strong and durable hidden sword that is difficult to do even now, as well as a crossbow that an untrained farmer can operate with perfect accuracy The battle description is also very abstract, and everyone's fighting descriptions I have to insert sounds such as "Ouch, Ouch, Ouch" and "Ahhhhh", once or twice is okay, I can come several times in one battle, and I am not absent from each battle. I don't know if it's the number of words or something. The protagonist's combat ability is even more abstract in abstraction. He was originally a 996, but his identity after time travel is a slave. He skipped the first two days of combat training to use his hidden blade. What kind of combat effectiveness can this combination have? Crouching behind the shield wall and being able to hold up the shield for a while without dragging down others is considered Odin's blessing to Thor. As a result, at the beginning, he knew that he was not strong enough in combat and had to compete with others. Not long after, he inexplicably transformed into a Varangian superman and started leading the charge into the front row. What, did you believe in Khorne?

I'm a noob, I couldn't stand it after reading the first few chapters. The beginning of the hero saving the beauty is too cheesy. The dialogue also lacks any sense of logic.

I don't know what you are criticizing in the comment section, but one person said that this is the only Viking novel I have ever read. Others either have fantasy elements or have proper protagonists who look like middle school students. That's all. It's true that this book is gone and I can't find historical Viking texts.

To be honest, I can't stand the second one. You can't be that real in your dreams. You still want to be a hero and save the beauty. Then you also have that ability. You can't even recognize the situation and you rush up to someone. This scene is so disgusting. It turns out that you have been wearing a collar because of your uncomfortable neck. You 🐴 are uncomfortable. You don't know how to look at it. You were wearing a collar all the time. Fuck you🐴. Is the protagonist blind? If you feel uncomfortable, wouldn't you touch your neck? Even if you do, you can still feel it.