The Marquis of Han

Since you have a big structure and want to change a lot of things, why not change the protagonist to Liu Che. This will make it easier to change the Han Dynasty at that time, and readers will not feel sad about it, and they will have much less worries.

I want to write a book set in a fantasy technology version of the Three Kingdoms. The background is after Emperor Guangwu (the time traveler), the industrial revolution and the revival of spiritual energy. Guan Yu wears a mecha and uses his skills, Cao Cao commands the tanks, and Zhou Yu leads the aircraft carrier and battleship. The opponents are the entire Western Continent such as Caesar, Alexander, King Arthur, Peter the Great, etc. I have no foundation, no experience, all I have is passion. As long as it gets more than fifty likes, I dare to write. Everyone crowdfunds to write a book, and I will be the main author.

Remember only the bad, not the favor. The protagonist is tired of living under such a person. If you want to live, you have to ignore him, or have a fist bigger than his, or wait for death. Having said that, traveling to the past pig's feet is too honest, it is also good to be a prince who rules the southeast. Plan everything well, and you will gradually become stronger. Have you ever seen a person kneel down to a monkey? A time traveler makes Liu Che... Haha

During the period of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty, if you were so capable, your ending was destined to be a tragedy.

The current flow of history seems like the protagonist will not be able to survive without engaging in ultra-era black technology. In ancient times, there was neither the institutional environment for property rights protection nor the support of the upstream and downstream industrial chains. Why is there black technology? Isn't it enough to let the protagonist know the historical trend behind it? ? However, this is not just a fault of this book. This is true of most historical literature. Fast food writing is inevitable. After all, it is based on historical trends and uses historical trends to plan and layout. It cannot be done by simply cramming historical knowledge. It requires a deeper political and historical background. It is indeed too difficult to ask fast food writers to do this.

I won't say anything else in the comment section. If I say too much, the author will get angry. It's not easy to write a novel. Let's talk about the protagonist, who has just traveled through time, and is not used to eating this, that, and minced meat. He insists on improving his food, and even modifies various cooking utensils in order to get some food! Really, it is rare for children to be so squeamish nowadays. At most, children are greedy for meat from time to time. The protagonist is sick. According to the words of the older generation, if you are hungry for three days, you will even eat the cake! ! !

The protagonist is too self-righteous, likes to teach others, and thinks of himself as a saint, but those who show themselves to be omniscient in front of the emperor all die miserably in the end.

I remember that the Han Dynasty was suppressed and beaten by the Xiongnu for many years. The Han Dynasty only rose up once, and then was bullied by the Xiongnu. Compared with the Warring States Period, it was really weak.

I came here and read a few chapters. I felt that it was not as good as the previous one, but it was better to write about Japan. You can write monkey. The first one is a high starting point. Then you can start from the bottom one. I will definitely support it.

The Western Han Dynasty still adhered to Huang Wei's idea of ​​governing the country. If there was no threat and harassment from the Huns, there would be no problem in this way. But the Xiongnu problem must be solved. The war with the Xiongnu must concentrate a lot of manpower, material and financial resources, and it will be long-term. In this way, centralization of power is necessary. Without the pressure from the Xiongnu, Liu Che would not have been able to get to that point to a large extent.