Ultimate Warlock

Why not use your sister as a sacrifice?

The younger sister is so annoying! The plot seems to be going to involve her getting tricked by a friend, the protagonist cleaning up the mess, and then the sister finally accepting him, or some other twist to get her approval. What's the point of this plot? Why force her approval if she doesn't like him? It's not like she has any complicated feelings for him; she just genuinely dislikes him. There's been no adoption or anything like that yet; they're just siblings. What's the point of this plot? It feels so toxic! Can the author please revise this?

Dog Egg's skills are getting deeper and deeper. Why are there so few readers for this book? I've followed it to the latest chapter and it's quite good. Southeast Asian setting + secret martial arts + Black Tide + true swordsmanship explanation. In short, the author has perfectly mastered the style of the legendary Gun Kai. I'd believe it if you changed the author's name to Gun Kai. Keep updating! Don't abandon this story!

The main storyline is too weak after going to Black Tide. The protagonist just goes with the flow and doesn't have any pre-determined goals, which makes things difficult later on.

Why is it that even though they all follow the style and approach of "Rolling Open," none of their stories are as exciting or engaging as "Rolling Open's"?

I don't understand the author's intention in repeatedly mentioning at the beginning that the younger sister is hardworking and diligent, while the older brother is a good-for-nothing, yet the family still favors the older brother. The older brother (the protagonist) isn't even their biological son. Even something as mundane as playing on a computer gets mentioned—it's a broken computer, but one the younger sister has cried countless nights over and still can't have. It's disgusting. 😰

Your free chapters look pretty good, but the paid chapters are a complete low-budget version, get lost.

All the concern is superficial. Parents, sister, friends—the protagonist doesn't care; it's all an act. It portrays a hypocritical person; even a purely evil character would be better than this hypocrisy, even worse than Yue Buqun.

The protagonist keeps saying that warlock is his future path, and martial arts are just for fun. But every sacrifice you make actually improves your martial arts. Isn't that ridiculous? All those sacrifices don't deal any magical damage; they only increase physical damage. Anyway, from what I've read so far, it's basically an unconventional martial arts style.

The cautionary tale of the wizard bloodline... Can a master soar to great heights?