Swallowed Star: A Path to Journey to the West

Writing about family is like shit. If you can't write about family, don't write about family. It would be better to just let the protagonist be an orphan. The protagonist was running for his life outside. When he called, he was scolded. The key danger was caused by that family member. I was speechless.

Damn it, a third-turn golden elixir only increased my strength by 3000kg Why is Journey to the West so bad?

There are too many flaws 1. The middle-level war god who has made enemies kills the high lord, but he still doesn't have the black god suit. 2. Send the God of War team to pick up the protagonist. When you see the protagonist fighting a medium warrior monster, you are still there and commenting that you are not the person you are looking for. Have you not seen the recorded video, or have you not seen the protagonist's photo? If you don't know the person, just pick it up.

The power conversion on both sides is also very harmonious! Just hope you don't lick it! Personally, I want to see a pure protagonist struggling in Devour! Luo Feng doesn't need a protagonist to be a lord! Coupled with the resources exposed by the protagonist, Luo Feng will grow faster! So I guess that's enough! Well written, cheers!

Journey to the West raises the world level too high

The realm of "Swallowing the Starry Sky" is divided into four major stages: the earth chapter, the universe chapter, the cosmic sea, and the chaotic source space, all arranged in the order of the original work. Earth Chapter (Mortal Stage) Quasi Warrior: Transition, not yet formally practicing genetic energy Apprentice Level (Level 1-9): Corresponding to warriors, generals, gods of war, warriors at level 1-3, warriors at level 4-6, and warriors at level 7-9 Level God of War Planet Level (Level 1-9): Can fly in the air, does not need air to survive, has a lifespan of thousands of years Stellar Level (Level 1-9): Lives for one era, can destroy planets Cosmic Level (Level 1-9): Comprehension Domain, the body travels across the universe, lifespan is 10 epochs Domain Lord Level (Level 1-9): Soul is stored in the life core, lifespan is 100 epochs World Lord Level (Level 1-9): The world is born within the body, lifespan is 1000 epochs >Universe Chapter (Immortality Begins) Immortal Gods Immortal Military Lord, Immortal Lord, Peak Lord, Elementary King, Advanced King, Peak King, Limit, Invincible Universe Lord: Normal→Medium→High Wait→Universe Overlord→Top Universe Overlord Lord of the Universe: Elementary, Intermediate, Advanced, Peak, Ultimate, Invincible (Level 1-6), can reverse time and space, open up a small universe Cosmic Sea Stage True God (Universe The strongest): The Kingdom of God transforms into a small universe, divided into 7-10 levels The True God of the Void: Controls the void, the power far exceeds that of the True God, and can travel through the passage of reincarnation The Eternal True God: Understands the evolution of the universe and can create a miniature universe Become a Saint: Master part of the origin of chaos God King: The chaotic space evolves into a small universe, transcending the reincarnation of the original universe Hunyuan Space (Final Chapter) Lord of Hunyuan: Breaking through the God King, can formulate supreme rules, Luo Feng finally Reaching this realm Small supplement: Era = 10081 years; Reincarnation Era = countless epochs; True God, True God of Void, Eternal True God, Saint, God King, belong to the universe sea; Chaotic Source Lord is the final great realm.

The rhythm is okay. It's too fast and it's easy to jump. Take your time. To have that feeling, it can't be like a running account.

The pace is too slow, not enjoyable at all

The author is angry with both humans and demons, please update quickly