Our Dorm Group Traveled Through Time, and My Intel Refreshes Daily

It feels like the only good guys in the entire dormitory are the protagonists, and the rest are bad guys. Wearing a skirt like this must bring everyone to play, and it's impossible for just four people to play.

The supporting character Wang Tianyuan is disgusting when he repeatedly jumps sideways like this.

At the beginning, Wang Tianyun mocks the protagonist, which is a little deliberate. You can consider mentioning the previous conflict between the two, which seems more reasonable.

It's not like students traveling through time. It's more like a time travel among felons, all of them are born evil cultivators.

You get attribute points, skills, and talents by killing people. How can you cooperate to survive? Within a few days, everyone was dead.

The survival theme is so attractive! ! ! But few people can write about the protagonist's hard work and grassroots rise! Basically, they are all the same, created out of nothing, foresight! ! ! A niche subject that deserves to be written about a god-level subject! ! !

There is something wrong with the setting of this thing. It is set that killing people can inherit attributes. Playing lone wolf with skills is the real way to play. In addition, if you offend someone, kill him! Otherwise, the protagonist has worked hard to develop for a month or two, and if others are better than the protagonist with their killing attributes and other attributes, your book will have no meaning.

How can one author write about everyone in the world? Writing and writing, what I write about is myself and the people around me. Whether it is loneliness or ambition, it is a portrayal of a certain aspect of my life. This is my limitation and shallowness, but it is also my sincerity... The above sentence was said by a famous senior. I like this sentence very much. The book "Group Travel in the Dormitory" was actually just a flash of inspiration at first. When I was scanning the Sanjiang list and saw that book about the community, a flash of inspiration came to my mind - can I write a similar book? The author himself is not deeply involved in the world, and the one he is most familiar with and has the deepest memory of is the university dormitory. Therefore, "Group in the Dormitory" came into being. Frankly speaking, this book was written to make money for food But this book also carries the author's own selfishness and ambition - I want to give the characters souls and let them truly live in this world. So, as you can see, in the plot, I spent a lot of space on the other roommates except the protagonist Xiao Yun. In order to let others be remembered, I designed little secrets, unique temperaments and ways of doing things for everyone. But obviously, the effect is not good. Many brothers complained that the character Wang Tianyuan was disgusting and jumped repeatedly, which affected the reading experience. (But don't tell me, although this kind of character is very annoying, everyone still remembers it... Haha, it can be regarded as a successful character creation, but in a negative way). The author is a very obedient person, and there will never be such repeated plots in the future. Furthermore, because the author's current writing skills are somewhat unable to control the creation of multiple characters, the roles of supporting characters other than the protagonist will be appropriately reduced in the future, and the focus will be on the upgrade and growth of the protagonist. The ideas in the author's mind are still there, but it takes a little time and the story needs a certain breadth and depth before it can be slowly unfolded... Currently, the performance of this book is not very good, but as long as there are people reading it, the author will keep writing. You don't have to worry about eunuchs. As I said before, many things in this book come from the author's life. If he is a eunuch, what is the difference between the author and the eunuch? This book has entered the first round of recommendation in the early morning of the 27th. After reading the recommendation rules, the rules of competition are very difficult. The author will stay steady, improve the quality, and prevent the book from being lost. I also ask for your support, collection and reading, which is the greatest encouragement to the author. ——A ninety-degree bow! I will read everyone's chapter reviews, and if they do not cause serious spoilers for the subsequent plot, I will reply. As for your book reviews, as long as they are not deliberately provoking posts, they will not be deleted. You can comment a lot, and the author will steal good ideas quietly, hehe. Finally, thank you all brothers again for your support and comments. I wish to accompany you all the way, and I will not regret this book.

I feel like the main plot has been messed up and I can't watch it anymore.

I'm trying too hard. A novice author can understand. Life is as natural as a stream. A mountain suddenly pops up every day. It's so embarrassing😳