Swallowed Star: What Do You Mean I’m 8.2 Billion Years Early?

It should be detailed and appropriate. Don't go over some things over and over again. Just go over them in one go. Otherwise, it will be a bit annoying to read.

The descendants of the protagonist have taken over the earth. If Luo Feng comes out, it means that this lord is real. If Luo Feng doesn't come out, it means that this is the real universe. Realm beasts are vulnerable, so they should be able to defeat them. I don't know whether this is reasonable or not. 🙂🙂🙂

In fact, there is no need to add the high-flying heroine. The protagonist Xingxing has crossed the threshold of time and space. With hard work, he can be rated as the master of the universe. How could he not be worthy of a world master's daughter?

I don't like articles about having a son-in-law, especially when one feels pride in having a son-in-law.

? ? ? Write about the Yuanxing era? Let me ask a question: If the two earth civilizations of Yuanxing and Shanhaijie were not destroyed, where would the new generation of earth civilization of Luo Feng's period come from? As long as there are immortal strong men in the clan, it will be difficult to lose the home planet no matter what, right? Unless you are very deliberate, there is no solution.

The plot goes back and forth, the narrative is too long-winded, and the same thing is repeated over and over again, which makes reading a bit tiring.

Those with high bloodlines don't participate in the genius war at all. On Earth, they become apprentices at the age of 20, while others become world masters at the age of several thousand years. The genius war selects the fish that slip through the net. In front of a first-class bloodline, the star level is still a baby and is still nursing. How can we fight in the genius battle?

Phantom King

The protagonist's entire net worth does not even have 0.01 Treasure points. He is so poor that he picked up a piece of the mythical beast inheritance order and gave it away directly. This thing seems to be worth 1 treasure point! Is it too generous?

The best solution for traveling to the original universe is that people on Earth have a clone of the Yan God Clan

How many billions of years is a reincarnation era? I asked AI to say that a reincarnation era is 3.6 Billion years. Without transcending reincarnation, one can live up to three reincarnation eras.

Let's talk about the shortcomings first. After a lot of back and forth, the clone of the second "Swallowing the Stars" is a great point. It is well written. It is not just a bonus, but it makes up more than half of the novel. But if the original work is written by the author, it will be copied wherever it is. The three novels seem to be like mountains but not mountains. I had already expected it through the avatar to feel better. Sure enough, the subsequent storyline, including the golden finger designed by the author for the protagonist, did not feel satisfying. Advantages: A glass of boiled water is not pleasant, but there is nothing particularly disgusting about it. Finally, the author should keep writing harder. Just treat it as practice.

It's really rare for a Devouring Star fanfic to write about women.

Who are the three clones of the protagonist?

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I can't accept the heroine. Just by looking at the beginning, I can think of the bloody evidence behind it.