No Disturbing the Living

Stop writing a bunch of cheesy tropes, just tell a simple story.

The main text is alright, but after 50 chapters, I still can't figure out what kind of story you're trying to tell. The protagonist just drifts along, talking about whatever comes his way. Is this some kind of hellish road movie? When does the main plot even begin? Also, please use fewer clichéd jokes. If you want humor, include humorous moments, but don't rely on so many bad tropes, like that guy who's even weaker than Cai Wenji.

What's the point of changing the name if the mindset remains the same? They need to recapture that same drive they had when they wrote "There's a Demonic Aura Here," that same burning passion, and write another book that readers would want. This book is still "The Great Sage of the White Bone Demon 2.0"—It's restrained, lacks that same drive, and the writing is utterly nonsensical.

The enjoyment has been consistent; hopefully, it will continue the humor of Youyaoqi and have less of the overly literary descriptions—it's too heavy and inappropriate.

Having read up to chapter 30, I feel the protagonist isn't very bright. His special abilities aren't clearly explained, the world-building isn't clear, and while he could have returned to the mortal realm, he gave a nonsensical reason for not doing so.

Dude, it's been over twenty chapters and we still haven't gotten to the main point? Fang Zheng would have been taking Liuwei Dihuang Pills by now!

I hope to recreate the glory of U17! To reach new heights! U17 is a forever regret.

The new book feels like Waterworld.

Build a shelter from scratch, salvage some seawater filters, and each game lasts three minutes – incredibly fun and stress-relieving!

Can you update "There's a Demon Here" again? Or should I rewrite and add new content?