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The plot is procrastinating, the characters are not clear, and the main line is unclear. The plot at the beginning is originally a fun story, with cheating all the way, and then the "heroic spirit" will be released later, and finally the world will be conquered. Now you want to be truthful to me and lied to me for hundreds of thousands of words. Now you can't tell me anymore. I don't believe that the Northern Expedition will not lie in the future, and I don't believe that the Northern Expedition will be truthful in the future. The characterization is even worse. Is the protagonist a bit heroic? In the past, it could "protect the poor people in the world and make them happy", but now what is left? Shen Jin is even more of a villain who is arrogant at first but respectful at the end, and the protagonist has to be shy to ask for marriage. For a powerful minister like Huan Wen, let alone a heroic character, he is simply a buffoon. Liu Jili is also waiting to explode. Now that it's written like this, you still need to write some controversial plot. Xie Daoyun, if you don't intend to accept it, don't write it in the first place. Just mention a few words in the background. Will anyone talk about you now? If I don't accept it now, what's the meaning of what I wrote before? Walking readers? The protagonist's marriage is even more nonsense. Without the Shen family, the Northern Expedition would be impossible? It's nothing more than continuing to cheat. Could it be that after struggling for so long, you just want to go back and lick this villain Shen Jin? Even if you marry someone else, it won't be so troublesome. The reason you are rushing to get married now is because you are afraid that the protagonist will marry into a high-ranking family, right?

I just like collecting stamps, famous ministers and generals, beauties and talented women. I also like collecting stamps in historical articles. It doesn't require too much plot, it can be done in one sentence. Xie Daoyun definitely gives me a better impression than the unknown Shen girl. Those who like to collect stamps should line up. I really don't think there is any shame in collecting stamps. What yy, why do you really think of Xie Daoyun as the lover of your dreams? Such words are uncomfortable to watch. If you like stamp collecting, please line up. The author will definitely not accept Xie Daoyun. I want to see how many people like stamp collecting.

The essence of Dandan's books is still refreshing writing, and for refreshing writing, the importance of reasonable and refreshing feeling is far greater than the so-called sense of reality. Many readers are talking about the sense of reality, the fact that Xie is a second-grade high-sect and the protagonist is not worthy of it, the high-sect is naturally opposed to the protagonist, and the protagonist wants to sweep the high-sect into the trash can of history. This is pure nonsense! If you pursue realism, you will not be able to sweep the family into the trash can of history. This is determined by productivity and is not based on the will of the protagonist. Moreover, just writing this to this day, what kind of ugliness can you see in the high school? There are only two words to describe the Gaomen I saw, and that is kindness! Isn't it kind of Xie An to write a letter of recommendation to the protagonist? Isn't it kind of Xi Chao to treat the protagonist as his half-brother? Isn't it kind of Wang Xizhi's calligraphy to be kept privately by the protagonist and not say anything more about it? Isn't it kind of Huan Wen to give the protagonist a high position comparable to Qingliu? Isn't it kind of Wang Tanzhi to be treated like a cushion by the protagonist? The protagonist ridiculed himself in public. Sima Yu didn't stuff the protagonist with horse dung. Isn't that kind? Why don't you talk about reality at this time? Because I think this is a cool novel, it is completely acceptable to give the protagonist certain preferential treatment. It really doesn't matter if you marry Shen or Xie, there is only one thing that makes me personally dissatisfied: Shuangwen is not happy. The problem with Shuangwen's dissatisfaction lies in the positioning of Shen. Why is the Shen family of the local wealthy family who is acting like a buffoon worthy of the protagonist's repeated pulling? Could it be that Shen Jin is some kind of little Zhuge from the Eastern Jin Dynasty? Shen even had to be given a position in the wife family and tied to the ship. Now it seems that Shen can live without the protagonist, but the protagonist cannot live without Shen. What kind of dog-licking literature?! Personally, I have no special thoughts about Xie Daoyun. I feel free to marry him or not. In my opinion, leaving the two allusions of Yongxue and Tianliang Wanglang in history is already the greatest compliment to her. However, it is really hard to understand that he should get married in advance. I don't know who this malicious intention is towards, or towards some readers? To Xie Daoyun himself? I won't say anything vicious and irrational. I hope Dandan can create well in the future. I also hope that the "strange smell" of the book circle can be dispersed, and some unknown creatures will give you a bigger one sooner or later. After reading the latest chapter, isn't this writing about Gongsun Xun's second role? Why is the image of this protagonist getting closer and closer to Xun in my mind? No wonder it has to be the Shen family. Is this another wealthy man who can conveniently run the logistics department?? The protagonist is not the real Shan family of Beiliu, nor is he a famous figure in Jiangzuo. He is a pure modern time traveler. Can he really draw his sword so easily?

Many people say that the rhythm is because of Xie Daoyun's marriage, but in fact it is not at all!! Why is the processing of this chapter so bad? After reading it for a long time, I can only conclude that it is blunt and ugly!? As for why, it is obvious that the author is angry. Who is he angry with? Are you actually angry with the readers?? Why do you have to stand up to readers when the heat is rising? Are you a second-rate person?? Let's talk about the problem first, why is Liu Acheng's eating appearance so ugly!! Why is there no description at all of this poor woman from the Shen family?? First of all, many people are unhappy, not with Xie Daoyun, but with Liu Cheng and the daughter of the Shen family. Before Liu Cheng left Jingzhou, the daughter of the Shen family was a concubine. How do you want readers to accept it? I, Liu Acheng, our protagonist, went to Jingzhou, became successful and famous, and then came to lick the Shen family, and turned my concubine into a full wife? Why, is it your daughter from the Shen family who has been promoted step by step? Yes, many people, in fact, do not accept the protagonist licking people, but before I became famous, I could manipulate you, why should I be manipulated by you after I became famous? Did I become famous in vain? Then let's talk about the crotch thing that some people are most concerned about. First of all, who cares whether Xie Daoyun is the heroine or not? What does it have to do with us? To put it bluntly, who doesn't know that Dan's harem is equal to the background board? Who doesn't know that Dan just doesn't like high-class girls, but it's not the author who makes the stock market popular? To put it another way, can't this matter be handled coldly? After a few hundred chapters, the heat is over, who cares who Xie Daoyun marries? You can marry a beggar!! The author is so easily influenced by readers. At this time when the popularity is exploding, do you have to write about this? Last and most important thing, it is also the real problem with the rhythm of this episode. Many people are actually unhappy with this. In the first few chapters, they dared to influence politics for no reason. You must know that the dog is in Luoyang and a hundred thousand troops are in hand. After saying those words, I still regretted it. Why did Liu Acheng dare to say that he was nothing at this time? Why didn't he talk about reality at this time? I don't know who I am anymore? The problem this time is entirely because the author is a young man and insists on confronting the readers when the heat is rising. Why is the author so easily influenced by the readers? This time it was a small matter, but what about next time? What about next time? Why on earth can realism only be found in the crotch? Do you know how shocked a large number of readers are when they think about it after seeing the dog? At the same time, they feel really scared. I can pay for your literary talents, but why should readers pay for the author's personal emotions? That's it, the speech is finished.

Look at the picture, not a cloud reader. Whether it's Shao Song or this book, I've been reading it all the time. To reiterate, I have no right to interfere with the author's freedom of creation. As a reader, I have the right to choose and abandon the book.

In the group, I often mentioned that the current portrayal of the protagonist Liu Ah Cheng is my favorite type, elegant and easy-going, decisive in killing, and doing what he can to the best of his ability. His personal ability was obviously too supermodel in the era when superstitions and enhancers were prevalent in the aristocratic family in this book, so much so that it had an extremely severe blow to the mental stability of Liu Bo, a second-rate hero in the Eastern Jin Dynasty. Liu Bo made many extremely decisive choices, at least in line with most of the trends of the times. Under the "micro-management" of the protagonist, an extremely cruel and absurd comedy effect was produced. I will share it with you here and welcome free discussion. Speaking of Liu Bo in the Eastern Jin Dynasty, we have to start with his origins. His family was a typical "royalist". His grandfather Liu Wei, together with his political ally Diao Xie, were the ministers whom Sima Rui relied on in the early Eastern Jin Dynasty. From the official position to the censor Zhongcheng, he and Shangshu Ling Diao and Xie jointly implemented the "Political Policy", upholding the superior and suppressing the inferior, suppressing the powerful, and competing with the political forces of the major Jiangdong families headed by Wang Dao Wang Dun. This political line led to their poor reputation in the Jiankang gentry circle, and they were demoted as "City Foxes and Social Rats". The result was very bad. The two men were not on the right track. While they were suppressing Wang Dao, the representative of the powerful family, they were also suppressing and seizing power from Zu Ti, the leader of the refugee commander in the north. This caused the north to become centrifugal. Zu Ti, the "suppressor" of Wang Dun's mutiny, resigned sadly. Wang Dun saw that the time was right and attacked Jiankang in the name of crusading against Liu Wei and Qingjun. Zhou Zha, the garrison of Stone City who was guarding the gate of Jiankang City, directly surrendered the city to Wang Dun. Liu Wei and Diao Xie, who were stationed in Jincheng, led troops to rescue, but were defeated by Wang Dun who was encircling the area for reinforcements. After the defeat, Emperor Yuan of Jin sent troops and horses to protect the two of them and fled Jiankang. From then on, Liu Wei served as the Hou Zhao of the Northern Hu Dynasty and was taken in by Shi Le. Later, during the civil strife in Hou Zhao, Liu Wei followed Shi Hu's order to attack Shi Sheng, but was defeated by Shi Sheng's subordinate Guo Quan and died in battle at the age of sixty-one. More than twenty years later, Shi Hu died and the north was in chaos. Liu Bo, who was appointed the champion to join the army, took this opportunity to persuade the champion general Wang Qia to go south to the Jin Dynasty and went to the old man Huan to eat. This may seem a bit long-winded, but in order to understand the motivations of many of Liu Bo's "abstract" actions in the book from Liu Bo's own first-person perspective, the background still needs to be explained. First of all, is Liu Bo a nobleman? Yes, and it is genuine, with a clear genealogy and obvious connections. It is completely different from some of the Beiliuzi Qi Taizu who are being blamed. The Pengcheng Liu family is justified. Why don't you go to Jiankang, Kuaiji, and Jiangyin if you have a gentry background? Do you have to come to see Old Man Huan? Because the Eastern Jin Dynasty has developed to this era in the book, the aristocratic family politics have achieved great victory. These southern aristocratic families have dragged down the backbone of the refugee commander, allowed Wang Dun to break Sima Rui's power concentration process, and suppressed Wang Dun's ambition to become emperor, and completely entered the situation of north-south separatism, which has been beautifully displayed in the mountains and rivers. As the grandson of Liu Wei, Liu Bo naturally wanted to "revitalize his family reputation" when he went south this time. As the trigger for the Wang Dun Rebellion in the Jiangzuo clan, and the opposite of the Wang, Zhou and other aristocratic families, the Liu Bo family was the descendants of super-reactionaries in the mainstream view of the Jiankang clan. If they went there, they would only be looked down upon and would not integrate. And although all the officers who joined the army were Qingliu officers, they were still in the military position after all, and they still served in Beihu. In Jiankang's eyes, they were only a little better than the elite soldiers. They couldn't be more filthy. The only thing worthy of praise in the family reputation left by his ancestors was loyalty to the emperor's orders and firm will. If Liu Bo really wanted to start a career, he really had to start with the Governor of Jingzhou like Old Man Huan, who was not limited to his origin, valued his talents, and could also brush up on his military exploits. Okay, the background is explained, now let's experience Liu Bo's first perspective. (Purely a noble perspective, no cheating) Simulation begins You, Liu Bo, are a son of the Liu family in Pengcheng. Your grandfather made great contributions to Sima Rui's ascension to the throne. He was a high-ranking official and well-paid, with power in the government and the public. However, during the reform, he had an enmity with the Wang family of Langya and never fought against Wang Dao and Wang Dun. My brother's grandfather was stabbed in the back by the emperor (Sima Rui refused to kill the Wang clan members in Jiankang City during the Wangdun Rebellion, leaving room for peace), and was forced to flee and became a reactionary that everyone in the Jiangzuo family wanted to beat; while fleeing, he was ambushed by Liu Xia in Huaiyin, and there were only more than 200 people around him when he fled to Hou Zhao; by the time you reach adulthood, your grandfather will have already He died in a war, and his father was not very useful as a county magistrate. Many wars caused his brother Liu Lang to be dispersed. After many years of Shi Hu's brutal rule of human meat barbecue and two-legged sheep, you finally took advantage of the chaos in the country after his death to persuade your general to lead his troops to surrender. Although after the conquest of Shu, the old man Huan's disobedience was known to everyone. , But in view of your family's shabby reputation in Jiangzuo, you can only join him if you want to get ahead. After all, Wang Qia's soldiers will definitely be dispersed. By then, the Liu family will have the ability to protect themselves. They don't have to be like their grandfather, who is hostile to the nobles in the south and driven like oxen by the Jiehu in the north. You have decided that the nobles are too strong and cannot be defeated, so integrate in. Maybe you are also prepared to be loyal to the emperor and stab Huan Wen in the back when he is doing something important, so as to show the Jiangzuo family the family tradition of the Pengcheng Liu family of "loyalty to the emperor and firm will" (which is already the only praiseworthy part). At this time, a spirited young man suddenly appeared from under Huan Wen, and he also called himself the Liu family of Pengcheng. You smiled speechlessly. In the north, there are many anonymous people who pretend to be surnames and deceive. There are more than 200 people in the Beiliu branch of your family, and they are all numerous. If you want to pretend to be a surname, you can still say that you were killed by Liu Xia from Huaiyin. At least it is more realistic and sincere? But this man said that he knew your brother Liu Jili, and it seemed that he was still Jiangzuo's "ancient favorite" under the old man Huan, and the personal companion of Xi Chao, the popular fried chicken. Even when beating a dog, it depends on the owner. You went back to the south with the intention of integrating into the aristocratic family, and you had no intention of going against the Kuaiji gang. You tolerated it without getting angry, and just shook off this man's hand. As expected, the guy behind him did a job that was only in name of pure and dirty. None of his subordinates were willing to travel far away. However, he did not feel any trouble at all when he went on a business trip at his own expense. The reputation he gained was half absurd and half dirty, which was unsightly. Years later, this man actually took matters into his own hands and received a project to adapt Wang Qia's army from Old Man Huan. This is putting his hand in your bowl. You have been in the north for twenty years, and you know very well that if you want to protect your family in troubled times, you have no armor. Shelter is like duckweed in the wind. This imposter's surname is so messy, it is simply destroying the lifeblood of Liu Bo - there is so little flesh and blood left in the clan, how can it be caused by you, a Northern wandering prodigal who is greedy for power and hasty? (Liu Bo's grandfather was greedy for power and advanced aggressively, ruining the good situation in the early years of the Eastern Jin Dynasty. He probably taught his descendants to be prudent first. Later, Liu Bo did not do his best to rescue and preserve his strength when Fu Jian attacked Xiangyang. This may have been influenced by these stories.) What's funny is that he also brought an unsealed one. Xin, his younger brother Liu Lang used his own experience with that person to persuade him not to underestimate this Beiliu disciple. What a joke, what about killing tigers, being a middleman between Tianshi Dao and the Xie family to get a career, what kind of world-famous foreman, Liu Jili, the dignified Pengcheng Liu family, has been reduced to the point where he still needs to be grateful for doing such dirty work? In terms of bravery and change, could he be more unexpected and more capable than those refugee commanders under Zu Ti? You've been here for several days and haven't even met Wang Qia a few times. You didn't want to get involved in this muddy water, so you went to see the old man Huan under the guise of Wang Qia's transfer. At this meeting, the old man asked you with a smile. This man is much more cruel than Wang Dun. He saw your plan at a glance and asked you directly how long it will take for you to control Wang Qia's army? After you gave the date, he directly asked you, Jiankang or Jingzhou, which one do you choose? This is going to end your life. You came back to revitalize the family's reputation, to use military power to become a second- or third-rate family. If you become a thief, your grandfather's "loyalty to the emperor's orders and firm will" will not even be able to retain the last family reputation. You will only be greedy for military power and capricious. Besides, will old man Huan be victorious? Not necessarily! If you choose Jiankang, your future will be lost, if you choose Old Man Huan, your family tree will be lost! After thinking about it, your own career is still incomparable to Pengcheng Liu's family reputation. You and the old man Huan have broken up. Old man Huan is indeed stronger than Wang Dun, and more domineering. He started telling you ghost stories directly. Wang Qia's army has been recruited by Beiliuzi within ten days of your arrival, and more than a thousand soldiers under Zhang Yu have been added. Who the hell believes this? It's obvious that Old Man Huan is planning to rebel and attack. The last members of your Liu family are in the city and they must be rescued! (Let me give you my personal opinion here. I think Liu Bo felt that the old man Huan was fooling him, and his decisive action of riding alone to rescue his family was very "Northern Dynasties style". He should have a lot of advanced survival experience in troubled times, so he should not laugh at him) Conclusion On the way to the rescue, they met champion general Deng Xia and his old boss Wang Qia, and something even more terrifying happened - the ghost story came true. That Beiliuzi really took over Wang Qia's army and horses in only ten days, and he still had enough energy to deceive Zhang Yu's thousands of people. Old Tou Huan's family members all regard him as a subordinate, and you, because you ended up with Old Tou Huan at the wrong time, your future in Jingzhou has been ruined. When you were devastated and preparing to flee Jingzhou and rush to Jiankang, the "ancient love" of Jiangzuo, the first-class family, and the heart of old Tou Huan, Xi Jinbin came, pressed your head and asked you to apologize to that person, saying that the future of the Liu family in Pengcheng should lie with this Beiliuzi who appeared out of nowhere. Ah, who killed me, and who did I kill? You are the hope of the Liu family in Pengcheng, so what the hell am I? (Li Huowang of the Eastern Jin Dynasty was born) Grandpa, I can't tell the difference, I really can't tell the difference! And you are not a person who cannot recognize people. This person, no, it is Liu Cheng now. He is from a humble background, dares to do things, is flexible in his methods, does not stick to trivial matters, is extremely good at dancing, shows both grace and power, and is decisive in killing. There is no such person in Jiangzuo, but there is in the north--grandfather told you that Shi Le, the founding emperor of the Later Zhao Dynasty, was also such a person. Now, "Little Shi Le" in Jingzhou is deeply afraid of you (and will not meet you). Simulation ends So, Liu Bo's mental state is good enough to be able to apologize to Ah Cheng without going crazy. Here are my personal thoughts and interpretations, shared with everyone for fun.

Without further ado, let me tell you my recent views. It has been a long time since I discovered that there is a strong sense of class tension in the book. It is highlighted everywhere that Wang Xie and others are not a thing, and high-ranking people are not a good thing. Didn't your protagonist cheat all the way by licking high-ranking people? The aristocratic family is a product of the times. As for the oppression of the peasants, it is precisely the powerful landlords like the Shen family. Otherwise, where do you think the Shen family's wealth comes from? Although the overseas Chinese surnamed Gao Men have an advantage in politics and have cooperated with the Sima family to suppress the local tycoons in Jiangdong, this is not a problem of the Gao Men themselves but a problem of the overseas Chinese. The people around your protagonist are either vested interests or former vested interests excluded from the vested interests. Which one, Liu Hu, Liu Jili or Liu Aqian, wants to revolutionize the world and establish world harmony? Isn't it for the sake of my Liu family to be like Wang Xie one day? Of course Xie Daoyun may not be the heroine, but is Shen really a good match? There are so many overseas Chinese surnames, not to mention the second-class high-ranking families, but what about others? You are from the Nandu gentry. In this era, you gave priority to marrying gentry girls with the surname Qiao, followed by girls from the northern gentry. As a result, you got a powerful daughter from Jiangdong. People who don't know better thought that your dream was to drive the Sima clan and the Qiao clan out of Jiangdong and seize control of Southeast Asia by yourself?

In Zhang Shuo, there are gay men talking about porn every day, which makes me want to vomit. Instead of blowing up with these people, only blow up with the person who wants the protagonist to marry Xie Daoyun? He did not hesitate to tamper with the original process and let Xie Daoyun get married two years early. Is this the opposite logic? Did the Xie family agree to marry early because the Wang family wanted to "celebrate"? What do you think of the Xie family?

I just want to laugh when I see those people in the comment section saying that marrying a daughter of the Xie family is unreasonable. This is an online article. Whether it is reasonable or not is not a matter of the author's few words. You, a time-traveler, can become an emperor in the end even though you have nothing to show for it. You have no golden fingers and only rely on your fortune-telling and some charisma. Is this reasonable? Writing in a refreshing way, but also a bit coy and pretentious from time to time. Put a memorial arch! I hate this kind of half-hearted writing. I will no longer read books by great authors like this in the future, I will only read them to the end without any rhythm. These people have money in their pockets, and writing books no longer puts serving readers as the first priority.

He humbly begged to marry the Shen family's concubine. Is this the same young hero who outsmarted three thousand northern soldiers and spoke loudly to the old man Huan? You've stepped on Xie An's face so many times, why not go one step further and get the Xie's daughter? Why don't you use the majestic power you used to pull the magic stick from the Wang family to get a wife? A good horse never turns back to eat grass, let alone there is grass ahead. It's really a self-abasement. In today's terms, it's a dead end. Stop talking about being heroic