Mystery Revival: I Command a Black Umbrella from the Start

It feels very good, the pace is not slow, and the protagonist grows up quickly. I hope the author will make more chapters in the future.

The ghost umbrella doesn't sound very good, so the rain master should be more suitable for the occasion. It can also be considered as a myth and legend (dog head)

The Black Umbrella Yin is Yin in the Ghost Realm. There are 6 floors with the exit on the 5th floor. This causes the strong ones to rush all the way to the 6th floor and find that they can't get out, and the weak ones can't get to the 5th floor.

One reason why there are more fans of Mysterious Resurrection is that the platform's big data algorithm believes that anime and other derivatives may be as popular as mortals. Guess

When writing novels, the author must not stress the combat power, the word count, or abuse the protagonist. As you watch, you will find that there will be fewer and fewer people. If you have the strength, try not to lick. Other novels use the name of the transaction, lick the protagonist and lick the headquarters in various ways, and the chips are completely unequal. Try not to write about selflessness and self-sacrifice. This is all the brainwashing of the rulers to the people at the bottom. Nine out of ten Mysterious Resurrection fan books are like this, so I'm saving this one first.

Can you write a heroine named Yang Jian? No one has ever written one. There is a gap in the market. I feel like it's interesting.

"Author, your updates are so slow!" The author was stunned for a moment, and then immediately understood what the reader meant. Laughing, he took off his coat. Author: "Haha! Come on!" The reader also laughed and patted the author on the shoulder. After him, his other readers were no longer restrained. They all sent their best wishes to the author with a relaxed smile. "Go, you idiot author!" "Go and prove that you are not a man who relies on your face!" "If it's hard, just do it for me." "Winning! Mr. Author!" And the strongest author's response to all the cheers was a confident "Okay!!" "There will be more updates!!""

Your novel is full of words. It's so tiring to read.

It's a bit too invincible and I feel like it won't be long enough to write.

The protagonist has neither relatives nor friends in this world, not even anyone to talk to. The only people who care about his life and death are his classmates. He has been running around trying to clear the next dungeon in his dream. Isn't this life too miserable?

Every enemy of the protagonist can be called a sinner who wants to end the human era.

As of Chapter 29, it's considered the tall guy in the mysterious fanfic. There are so many mysterious fanfics that it's hard to even pick them out.

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In fact, the biggest failure and poisonous point of many fans of the mysterious resurgence is writing about the headquarters. Every time, they have to write that the people in the headquarters disgust the protagonist, and then the protagonist does things for them (join the headquarters and become the captain no matter what). I feel that this novel can not write about the headquarters, or significantly reduce the words about the headquarters. At least, do not join the headquarters in any form until the headquarters changes the idea of using the ghost controller as a consumable, or the protagonist can use the characteristics of the Republic of China dream to connect with Mr. Qin and let Qin The boss warned the headquarters not to provoke or cheat the protagonist (the key point is not to write about the double-handedness and back-handedness, the headquarters cannot disobey Mr. Qin). Of course, the above are all suggestions. I really hope the author can avoid the big pitfall of the headquarters, so as not to ruin a good book (ps: other novels write about the headquarters because they cannot be written without writing about the headquarters. This book can write about the Republic of China or other supernatural beings in a large chapter because of the characteristics of dreams. It is not critical that the headquarters is just the icing on the cake, but it would be really disgusting if it is not written well.)

Umbrella Man, you rely too much on Super Ghost Man.

The plot is too dense, can you let the protagonist take a breather?

When will the uncle on the fifth floor be released to end the supernatural era?

Ask, what is the author's outline? The subject of mysterious recovery is destined to be a tragedy

In fact, the ghost exorcism method of the Republic of China had more potential. The patchwork method of Yang Jian's era was too crude and could not achieve the effect of 1+1 greater than two. This also led to the fact that there were not many ghost exorcists in Yang Jian's era, and none could even reach the level of the Seven Elders of the Republic of China.

What is the person on the fifth floor who can end the supernatural era going to do?

I only have one element left, can I play ghost game?

Mysterious Resurrection has many interesting ghosts to write fanfics about

It's just that the number of chapters is too few. I hope it can be written faster or with more chapters.

Yu Shan: If you dare to mess with me, I will perform a sport called shaking people to summon a mysterious black-robed ghost-catching uncle who lives on the fifth floor 🙂

This hook is too big, right? It's just like the Umbrella adds to the lake. A well-developed ghost is also there. How to write this? After watching the plot, I feel so dreamy and want to add new ones. It's too tight. It's easy to collapse.

Don't mess with the main character later. Just let the golden finger be left by his parents or something like that.

The author writes well. Nowadays, there are not many people writing about Mysterious Resurrection. I am optimistic about you. I feel pretty good after reading the introduction.

It's okay, but there's a bit of a bug in Kisame's last two choices at the beginning.

( ͡°ᴥ ͡° ʋ) The world in the dream is strange but it is in line with the mysterious recovery. A golden finger without any price will be meaningless in the mysterious recovery. It is just a pure and refreshing article.

It's nice to see, but how will we deal with this ghost at that time? Quite curious