Keep the Team Up? He's Not Even a Coach!

Two paragraphs of evidence: 1️⃣ The plot of the domestic reporter is really hypocritical and difficult to stretch. The protagonist looks like a victim. There is no need to design such a plot 2️⃣ The broken team has already kicked the protagonist out, and you have tried your best to help the team bring in and retain the little monster. Why are you so dedicated? General: The protagonist is the kind of person who suffers from great hatred and is immersed in his own world. He has a sense of deja vu that I have tried my best but was betrayed by the world. (To be honest, no matter how talented this kind of person is, he is still a waste) I sincerely suggest that you write a new team as soon as possible and stop writing depressing plots.

This book was actually rejected by the editor at first, but I wrote 300,000 words before it was signed. Because I have been running naked, there are dozens of friends who insist on reading my book and talking about football. So I didn't have any expectations at the time. The writing style was based on my own preferences. I am a senior FM player and an old Serie A fan. I just wrote what I liked to see, purely for my own enjoyment. But then the editor suddenly lured me out and signed a contract, so I changed my vest and republished the book. At this time, it was too late to change my mind. It's not that I can't write other types of writing, but the rhythm and style of this book won't change, that's the way it is. It is true that there are not many readers who like to read this kind of writing, but I have done this for the first 300,000 years. There is no point in changing my writing style later to offend the remaining readers. I know some friends have good intentions, but this is already a done deal and cannot be changed. But no matter what the results are, I will definitely finish this book and then write the next one. You can rest assured. My last vest was called "Snowfall Guzhou", and the book I wrote was called "President, do you mind if I play a thief?" " Is a Warcraft novel. There is no charge for the whole process. I persisted in finishing it even though I struggled. The same goes for this book, I will finish it even if there is no subscription. The author of Station B ID: AFK's Xing Zhan, sometimes chats about daily life on it, and also mentions the dynamics of writing articles, including replies to some readers' opinions. If you are interested, you can pay attention.

I don't think there are too many tactics written. I've been watching football for 20 years. This kind of detailed tactical analysis is what I like to read. Dribbling +5 speed +10 at every turn is not that cool.

From a purely tactical point of view, the author's book is one of the most professional ones I have read on Starting Point. But I feel like my beard and eyebrows are scratched, which makes the reading experience very poor. For example, for this promotion play-off match against Pescara, I wrote 19 chapters from the foreplay to the post-match, which took 3 weeks. This brought a very, very poor experience to those who followed the update, because they had almost forgotten the previous plot, and the sense of anticipation was exhausted. In the end, there was even a sense of relief that it was finally over. If it could be compressed by half, the experience might be much better. In fact, I feel that the author's narrative skills are relatively good, but he may not know much about the writing skills of online articles, which makes it seem a bit slow.

Is the protagonist of this book a cheap person? 😜 Apart from the fact that Team B is the author's real-life home team, I can't figure out the reason for staying. This score is worthy of the writing and plot, Serie C + Gong Dou + Literary Youth. I feel that the author's own writing has moved me 😭😭

The author's home team is LeBron, so I can understand why he didn't change teams, but you wrote the plot yourself. Your football novel Tiantian Gongdou is sick. You think your protagonist is great, don't you? …Literally young people can do anything…

[Center] Le Paul, Christian Shpendi, Steven Shpendi (on loan), Popov, Tula [Winger/Shadow Forward] Jan Diomand, Vergara Loan: Mekhlaliyev [ Midfielder] Mandela Keita (on loan), Miralem Pjanic (to be retired), Bence Dardaoy, Petricione, Faticanti, Masolin, Cigarini (to be retired), Schmar, Cesarini (to be retired), Koli Sakho Loan: Amadei [Full-back] Palestra (on loan), Alex Valle (on loan), Savona, Bozoran, Favasuli (on loan) Loan: Giraldo Echelon: Putzka, Yancy [Centre-back] Muharemovic, Rugani (on loan), Thiago Gabriel, Tonoli, De Sciglio, Caldara (to be retired) [Goalkeeper] Hornicek (on loan), Vasquez, Lacrever Echelon: Yao Haoyang

Serie A has no future, it sells people every day, makes no money at all, and has no competitiveness. How could anyone buy a club and write a pure coaching article? First go to the Segunda División relegation team, just in time to pick up the popularity of Wu Lei, a young football player, and then come to Serie B to advance to A, stay in Serie A for two years, and then go to the Premier League. Don't buy a whole club. Even if you buy it, buy an Italian club, don't gamble or buy football, and wait for the mafia to smash your house? The protagonist is only in his 20s, so talking about one person and one city is too ridiculous. It just takes repeated efforts to keep writing this book. Besides, if you don't live a new life and see all the scenery in the world, how can you squat in Italy, a place full of idle gangsters.

Author, you have written too many tactics and it seems too tiring. Maybe the stickiness of the book will be reduced. It can highlight local tactics and benefits. A comprehensive description or tactical analysis in one chapter would be too tiring to read.

[Center] In Italy: Borrell can be exempted from signing (pure pivot, the team is bankrupt), Colombo can be rented, and I don't know if Kenan Davis can be poached. You can see the children, visa-free Mandjou Camara (the team is bankrupt). Abroad: Rempel (pre-contract signed in the winter window), Giovane (non-European), McBurnie (British fulcrum center, core of Hull City's upgrade), Immobile, Aubameyang, Giroud, Dzeko can be exempted from signing; for one million, look at Andre Silva; for two to three million, look atAlvaro Ronaldo Driggs (a high center forward who was born as a winger), Ayon (non-European, with doubtful sustainability), Emerson (non-European, over-excavated from home soil, the one Toulouse sold to IFC); for four to five million, look at Koffane (non-European, paid release fee), Ragnar Aher; if it is more expensive, Tresoldi. [Winger/Shadow Forward] In Italy: Er, Oristano, and Lucas Beltran can be rented, and you can go to Serie C to dig Zoma (mainly speed + deep running, the top scorer in the Nuremberg team). Also look at the children, visa-freeEmanuele Rao (the parent team is bankrupt and has to compete with Naples + Bari), Samuele Pisatti (Love from Milan). Abroad: You can rent Kaminski and Zlatan Ibrahimovic on the left wing. For two to three million, look at Afonso Moreira (Director, please work hard!), Alisson Santos (African and European, rented in Portugal), Ara Ibegovic (how to negotiate a deal is a problem), Bill Healy, for five million, look at Vic Tou Muñoz; on the right, Tas Dolan (short, can also play on the left) and Zi Beibei can be waived. For one million, look at Osman Mama (U20 World Cup gold goal, assist leader, dribble leader), for three million, look at Ilankunda (non-European), and for six million, look at Carlos Forbes (vertical speed type). How about digging for Zadok Johanna in Nigeria? In the winter window, you can look at Pietuszewski (cut in as a left winger, or dig in the summer window?), And you can rent Endrick (African-European) and Ilin. [Midfielder] In Italy: Gagliardini (Canadian forward) and Sensi are exempt from visas. Cavilla, Florencio, Ajinsanmiro, Bondo, and Amatucci can be rented. It is recommended to dig Isa Doumbia (left vertical impact mezzala). In addition, look at the children, visa-free Liberari (Love from Milan), Pietro Arnaboldi (Love from Milan), Marco Leandri (the team went bankrupt), go to Bruges to dig Gianluca Ocon (selected for the best team of the U17 European Cup). Abroad: Matic, Witsel, and Louis Mouton (8/10 hybrid without the ball) can be exempted from signing, and Mario Martin (sweeping No. 8) Can be rented. It is very cheap for Fauzi to poach from the German third division. How about bargain hunting Loconga? For one million, look at Nygren; for two or three million, look at Chema (a tall, controlling No. 6), Gustavo Puerta (a non-European, short 6/8 hybrid with high aggression and big coverage), Alvin· Sanches (left-footed free agent in the frontcourt, mid-ACL), Lemberg (a 6/8 hybrid that focuses on coverage), Schontar (No. 6); Four to five million, look at Urai (non-European, short ball-handling 6/8 hybrid), Bugle (a tall 6/8 mix of high running and forward pressing passes); for seven to eight million, look at Mamadu Sangare (a non-European, covering 6/8 mix of steals and advances), Avdula Yu (Organizational No. 6), Pavel Schultz (ends forward without the ball), Luciano Valente (a tall organizational 8/10 hybrid who dribbles and breaks pressure + passes and creates + counterattacks in the frontcourt, his father is Roman). Is Ismail Cone considered? In the winter window, Eddie Dueue can be exempted from signing. Look at Big Timber (the price was missed in the contract year), Anis Mehmeti (the left midfielder, the price was missed in the contract year), Fidalgo (returned to Europe), Tosby, Gruda, and Matteo Prati can be rented. [Full-back] In Italy: Calabria and Augello (Osti's old team, Palermo's Osti+Dain happens to be in Piacenza) can be exempted from signing. You can rent Roma's bilateral Salah Edin+Saudi Arabia. You can also rent Valukeevic, Terraciano Jr., Zerbin, Zanoli, or buy Barberi. Also look at the children, visa-free Matteo Albini (the parent team went bankrupt), Bacune (Love from Milan). Abroad: You can package an older bilateral combination of Emerson (technical, former Italian international) + Cao Far (high-intensity running + crossing) from West Ham United. On the left, Bernardo Fernandez (non-European, defensive midfielder hybrid) and Lopez Cabral can be signed without signing. More than one million can buy Arsène Kouasi (non-European, vertical pushing type) from Ligue 2. For three million, look at Udor (maturity + cross selling point + multi-position switch on the left), Perrault, and five million can dig Jordan Bosz from Belgium. On the right, it is recommended that you can buy Brigitte from Switzerland Overseas, Bergali from Belgium, and Wagner Pina from the Portuguese Super League for two to three million. If it is more expensive, you can rent Quombedi. In the winter window, João Mario and Obrador can be rented. You can also look at Kharebashvili (African-European), reach an agreement in advance and complete the transfer when he turns 18. [Central Defender] In Italy: Ismaili (aggressive man-marking central defender) and Bertola (wide central defender) can be exempted from visas. Rafa Marin and Matias Moreno can be rented. Take a look at Basquilotto. In addition, look at the children, renting Andrea Natali (second-generation football player, spent one year in Milan, and was selected for the best team of the U19 European Cup), and poached Ludovico Valari from Verona (selected for the best team of the U17 European Cup). Abroad: Kevin Dix (right-side midfielder mixed defender, pre-contract signed in the winter window) can be exempted from signing, and Xiaowusi (difficult), Estigo, and Nobel Mendy (non-European, athletic, can be rented) A left center back with good strength); for one million, look at Serhi Dominguez (a tall right center back with a ball-playing foundation); for two to three million, look at Ngoy (a speedy right center back with a large defensive zone and stable ball play), Yi Manuel Fernandez (aerial control + large space defense + physical central defender who holds the ball forward), Kodjo Pepora Oppong (non-European), Ruben Kluivert, Lager Bjelke; five million, look atHai Darry (a high-pressure, wide-reaching left center back with Juventus experience), Jamil Siebert; seven to eight million, look at Baidole (heavy deep-lying center back, potential risk of muscle injuries), Bednarek (payment of release fee). Winter window, visa-free for my sister-in-law, Massina (the contract with Turin was terminated), you can rent Coppola, Marianuchi, you can buy Edmondson Jr. (The one in the Faroe Islands). In addition, you can discuss personal terms with Vanden Bosch (using the relationship with old Sveral), and waive the signing in the summer window (a lanky right center back who is good at anticipating, long passing, and lateral filling). [Goalkeeper] In Italy: Radu, Silvestri, and Lezzerini (returning to their home team) are exempt from visas, and Sportiello and Scoufet can also be substituted. In addition, look at the children, visa-free Alessandro Anelli (the team went bankrupt, the best goalkeeper in Serie A), Palmisani and Motta can be tapped. Abroad: Herve Coffey (African-European) and Muric can be rented, and Rise and Ozer (African-European) only cost three to four million. Also, try digging Van Overen or Ivan Jarwan (both big bodies)?