The Masterclass

There is no sense of immersion in the empty future world at all, so let's wait for the next book!

Does anyone who reads football articles read overhead football? Eunuch on the shelves?

The first time I won the Champions League, I just wrote about my return to my country. I didn't write about the climax after winning the Champions League. The second time I won the Champions League, it was like this again. Why are you chasing after me? It doesn't give readers any emotional value at all. Why do you want people to keep reading?

Awesome, awesome, the U23 national football team has reached the finals of the Asian Cup

Manchester United has laid the foundation for so much. You are the defending champion and captain of the team. The team is built around you. You ask to buy people, but you go to play for a team that is not as good as Manchester United and form a team with He Chaoyue? I can't watch it!

The transfer to Valencia was completely ruined. A protagonist who was even more negative than Cesc Fabregas was written by the author. At least Fabregas could find a reason for being negative. He was from Barcelona's youth training. Arsenal was reluctant to invest and could not see the hope of winning the championship. The protagonist is the captain of Manchester United and has the highest salary. He is deeply respected by the management and teammates. His teammates are also the best players in the world. The team also has consecutive Champions League championships. He has also won consecutive Ballon d'Or awards. Then he was inexplicably transferred to a team that is third in La Liga (equal to Atletico Madrid).

I am extremely disappointed, the pressure on the protagonist is too heavy, and there is not much focus on the finals. I understand that in order to rationally improve the combat power of teammates, I cannot bear to do this again and again. This is not how group scenes sacrifice the protagonist's scenes to fill the supporting roles. I am looking forward to how long the author will continue to suppress the protagonist like this, and when will he be willing to let the protagonist win all the championships in a season. There is also the most disgusting hydrology, pre-match interviews, pre-match preparations, post-match interviews, large chunks of commentary, and the words "water" are flying. The key is that no matter what game, league, cup, basically every game is like this. And don't write about the damn locker room manager and the front desk aunt. These two characters are seriously suspected to be created by AI. They are full of human-machine feeling, and there are specific figures on the moisture content of the lawn maintenance area. The use of AI has gone so far that my first reaction after reading each chapter is whether AI is used, which part is used, and how much AI content is used. The author has lost my most basic trust in this area.

What's wrong with writing about Chinese players? 😄😄😄 It's quite funny.

I haven't seen such a stupid design in sports novels in how many years. Either regret the semi-finals, or directly win the championship. Which protagonist won the game by getting a red card and missing the finals? Can you give me an example? You have written several books and you don't know the poisonous points of sports novels? Why don't you go back to writing about Korean entertainment? You can just open up the harem without thinking.

If you can write, just write. Every day, it's either the water or the national football team. If the first chapter tomorrow is about the national football team, I will delete the book immediately