King of the Bay Area

I have very complicated feelings. I got involved with this book because after I finished a basketball novel I was chasing, I randomly searched in the sports category. After reading two chapters, I found out that it was rugby. I didn't know anything about rugby at that time, so I read on with the idea of ​​giving it a try. The author introduced the basic rules of rugby in the early stages of the article, which made me slowly understand the book. What really made me stay was the Rose Bowl. The sports category is different, but the same is the hard work and touching. Gradually, I not only read novels, but also went to watch games. I had my own home team and really fell in love with the sport of rugby. In the middle period, in the second season, when the protagonist came back to win the championship, he was really fed up with the repetitive plot and language. He also criticized this chapter fiercely in the book review area, and abandoned the book for a while. In the end, he still couldn't help but look at it again occasionally and reminisce about those touching moments. Now that the book is finished, to be honest, just like Bambi, one journey is over, and there is still another journey. I am looking forward to the next book. Here are some expectations for the next book. There should be as little repetition of plots as possible. Try a different writing method for each game. Don't use the same routine, which will easily lead to aesthetic fatigue. Finally, I wish the author a great success with his next book!

Let me tell you what I think, it's not fully booked yet until the second season ends. 1. One of the best sports novels I have ever read (one of which can even be removed, I'm sorry for Lin Hai). It is high-energy throughout and can make me, a thirty-year-old man, feel passionate and tearful with words. It is a masterpiece! 2. The system is smooth but not offensive, and it is very comfortable to watch. When I saw the second upgrade, I thought it was an increase in off-site requirements, but I didn't expect it, I really didn't expect it, so I won't spoil it; 3. I will end this book, just like watching a movie, I feel like the first part It's over, career, love, friendship, integrated into North American society, to be continued... Just like a perfect ending, my general guess for the second part is injuries, transfers, low points, relationship changes, and family changes. When I digest the first season, we will make an appointment for the second season. See you again! My biggest purchase of 2019!

I can understand the author wanting to write about racism as a cool point. After all, in reality, racial discrimination is not only one of the most serious problems in football, but also in the United States. As a Chinese player, Bambi is naturally happy to slap players and American society in the face. But there is something wrong with the author's pacing. There is too much emphasis on racial discrimination, and almost every chapter is related to this issue. When reading this way, it feels almost depressing except for the chapters that turn things upside down. And I hope the author can also consider that most readers actually live in China and have no sense of racial discrimination at all. The next door "Run Out of My Life" uses "patriotism" to make it more interesting, which obviously has a much stronger sense of empathy. To give a familiar example, "Slam Dunk", Sakuragi debuted as a rookie and couldn't even hit a ball, so he was ridiculed in various ways. However, the way the comics were expressed did not focus on Sakuragi's pain and confusion, but in a funny way to reduce the reader's depression and increase the interest. After that, Sakuragi also worked hard on the basics first, layups and rebounds for ordinary people, and let himself play first, instead of pursuing reasonable shooting first to become the main force or even the core. The first and most important thing for a player is to play with the ball, isn't it? As for racial discrimination, it can become a breaking point in the middle like the whitewashing of Mitsui, rather than the core of the whole story. After all, it is a sports article, and it pursues a sense of refreshment, passion, and a sense of immersion. Bambi's approach will only make everyone watch passers-by acting instead of participating in it. As for the depressed areas, Bambi can grow by losing, just like Sakuragi's will to shave his hair. Losing like this is for better growth. Rather than relying on being bullied by teammates, I know this is reality, but isn't it ridiculous to pursue reality in artistic works? After all, even if racial discrimination is solved (which is impossible), Bambi has not grown at all. What's more, the author's writing style is not based on suspicion of race at all, but more like a disapproval of physical fitness. I sincerely hope that the author's book will achieve good results. For a good book, the author and readers are honored to witness each other. I don't hope that because of these problems, this book will be used as a template and eventually become more popular than "King of the Bay Area"?

The King of the Bay Area is over, and a new story is about to begin. I personally encountered some setbacks in 2018, but I have recovered and returned to a new journey. The American football movement in China also bore new fruit in September 2019. The first official China University Football League competition sponsored by the China University Sports Association of the Ministry of Education also officially kicked off. This may also be the best start to succeed the King of the Bay Area. CUFL may be a key cornerstone of the development of Chinese rugby. We welcome more friends to like American football, and even join in personally to experience the passion, passion, roughness, and changes. CUFL is waiting for you.

The content of this book is very professional, without any flaws, and it is written about my favorite quarterback. Pay tribute to my favorite Eagles and favorite quarterback Brady!

Really, this is the first time I have seen a novel that is written so often with first suppressing and then rising, and it was particularly uncomfortable. The protagonist of this book did not go smoothly.

Since the decision is to write a data flow system document, why are there so many status fluctuations? ? ? Just keep adding new attributes. What you add along the way is simply incredible. The most annoying thing is the constant use of the same routine: Where do so many accidents come from? So many key goals?

When I met Miss Watson on the plane, she looked stupid to me. Emma Watson is a very scheming person. From the time she falsely marketed herself to get an offer from Yale University, she was directly received a positive response and was not given at all. The so-called Oxford diploma was just a short-term exchange student, and there were a lot of other dirty things that made people ugh I am not saying this to discredit her, but to say how could such a woman fall in love at first sight with a strange man who happened to help her, and secretly look at the male protagonist like a little girl, and blush when they look at each other, and uh uh, really uh uh, I feel that the author is like those who write about China Entertainment, and has an inexplicable pure beauty filter for female stars.

To be honest, this book is really a bit watery. Readers who like daily life should be able to read it. However, this is obviously not a daily life book. It is obviously a sports book, but it does not describe as much space as daily life on the field or in training. I haven't read much and only read 200 chapters. The protagonist only played 2 professional games, 2 academy games, and some scattered drafts and trial games. The total length is estimated to be no more than 30 chapters, and leveling training is briefly mentioned in daily life. Half of the saved space describes daily life, a small half describes racial discrimination, and a small half is popular science football... After reading 200 chapters, this book gave me the feeling of depression. Almost every chapter of the book contains comments about the protagonist. Discrimination and rejection, but there are too few times when the protagonist can stand up and get slapped in the face. If the essence of the slap in the face is that the harder you press, the more enjoyable it will be. But in this book, it is directly crushed to death, but the protagonist does not resist at all. The author expresses it himself in the book. , The protagonist was discriminated against when he was an immigrant as a child and got used to it... OMG, we are not the protagonist, we are not discriminated against by the Americans every day, and we are not used to being discriminated against, so reading this kind of book where we are suddenly discriminated against but do not resist is really unbearable for me.

The writing is the most delicate I have ever read among sports articles, and the writing style is not a no-brainer. This novel can be regarded as a god, but it is too niche. Although I have never watched a rugby game, I am deeply attracted by the author's articles. It is very passionate. Although it will take a long time to compare, some details will be very fresh to taste slowly. Anyway, if you read it slowly, it is really a good book to read.

It's strange that some people think that describing the game in detail is too low to count, saying that the reader's g-point lies in the commentary, the fans, and the media. Isn't the core of competitive writing about competition? Isn't it the competition process that makes us excited? How many words should I write about the competition in detail? ! Ridiculous. The support of fans and the mixed reviews from the media are necessary embellishments for sports writing. Writing about other people's mindless licking at the expense of others is just a waste of words!

What age is this? Still so weak against low temperatures? Even if there is no black technology, can you post more than a dozen warm babies on it? It can burn you! A team's logistics department's emergency strategy doesn't even have the ability to withstand low temperatures? Don't even check the weather forecast? Don't use any logic at all just to create a dramatic contrast.

Simplify the article by half and your grades will double

The pace is too slow, too slow, too slow, too slow, too slow, too slow, too slow, too slow. A catch starts from the quarterback of the offensive team, to the wide receiver who receives the ball, to the offensive line and defensive line, to the cornerback linebacker, and then from the broadcast perspective and the fan perspective. It takes five chapters to complete a catch.

The advantage is that it is professional and delicate, and even people who don't understand it at all can read it with gusto. The disadvantage is that it is too sensational. First of all, China really lacks the atmosphere where several generations of a city share a common love for the same team. On the other hand, the author is somewhat naive. Fans are nothing in the eyes of clubs and stars.

I feel like the author always tries to reflect the protagonist's eloquence and humor, but there are too many descriptions.

I feel like I'm still watching Saint Seiya and One Piece catch up. Every time, he would be tortured to the point of ecstasy, and then the small universe would explode. Come on, are you a fool? Are you learning from the Saints?

This book is very suitable for the American Qidian. Com

A masterpiece in the front, a scumbag in the back. I wrote more than one million words, and it was my first time competing for the title. I laid out a lot, and the emotional plot was in place, but in the end I lost! Frustrated! Nausea! Just for the sake of water, a few million more words? I don't know, QQ has given up on it anyway, and I won't pay attention to it in the future. In my impression, it was someone who gave me the idea. It was best not to win the championship the first time. I thanked him.

The more likely reason why the revenue is not as high as that of the NBA is that the audience of football only exceeds that of the NBA in the United States.

I didn't say anything, just support it with two monthly passes.

This book "King of the Bay Area" is about football in competitive sports. A big reason why I recommend this novel is to expand your horizons. Rugby sports articles should be said to be quite niche in our country, but sports don't have to be too narrow. If we really talk about it, at least badminton and tennis, which have been very popular in recent years, should be banned. The beginning of this novel is really good. It is close to the level of fairy grass. The plot design of the game is compact and intense, and the visual experience is strong. The game adopts the technique of suppressing and then rising, with ups and downs. The game process is vivid and professional, with climaxes one after another. When used in a barbaric sport like rugby, it really makes people excited. Unfortunately, the author seemed to have a bad grasp of the rhythm and plot in the later period. The plot of the novel began to become a bit confusing in the middle and late stages. To be honest, if it were not for the popular science knowledge of the olive maple sport and the depiction of the competition scenes, the possibility of abandoning the book would still be relatively high. Looking at it now, the shortcomings of this novel mainly focus on two aspects. First, the author initially set the protagonist as a Chinese, so his values ​​​​are destined to conform to cultural values. However, the book changed as it was written, and the values ​​​​are closer to Western values. This may make some book lovers unhappy. ----Recommended by the official @hao "The Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Book Desolation" Come to us for the book desolation!!!

It's too watery. I really wanted to read on but I was drowned.

I have almost finished reading it, so let me talk about some of the shortcomings that I personally think. In the first volume, I actually felt very good. The standard system upgrade template is very comfortable in all aspects. As a reader who does not understand rugby, I can read it without any effort. Although there are some signs of shortcomings, they are only slightly revealed and are not obvious yet. But when the system no longer provides improvement help (in fact, it is too fast or did not expect it to be so long?), The shortcomings become a bit frequent. Most of the setbacks Bambi encountered in the game were due to continuous mistakes and accidents. I am not sure whether in real rugby games, there are frequent mistakes that lead to victory unexpectedly. A losing game, but the basketball games I know personally and some of the better NBA articles I have read will not arrange the protagonist's setbacks on the court in this way. The protagonist may lose a key game due to an accident, or lose the game due to other reasons such as insufficient overall strength due to insufficient full strength, but continuous mistakes and accidents are a bit disgusting in my opinion. Of course, I know that reality is sometimes more magical than novels and movies, but I'm still not used to this way of arranging setbacks for the protagonist.

Too much is not humor but frivolity, and if it is all cold jokes, it is not humorous at all.

I can't stand it anymore when I see the author constantly writing about strikeouts. A baseball term is always applied to football, which makes people feel no sense of substitution. The pace is also slow. He writes more than ten chapters for one game. It cannot describe the excitement of sports, it is like a personal show of leveling up and fighting monsters.

This is my first time reading a sports book, and I didn't know much about rugby before. In terms of advantages, the game part is written with passion and professionalism, making it attractive to read. The desire to win on the field and the reluctance to lose are also well written. As for the shortcomings, one is the rhythm of the game. Sometimes an offense can be played from the perspective of the protagonist, the perspective of the receiver, the perspective of the opponent and the perspective of the commentator. Sometimes it can even be seen from the perspective of the audience. It feels a bit delayed. It is very enjoyable to watch from the front, but there is some aesthetic fatigue as you go to the back. In addition, after reading the novel, I specifically watched the video of the game. I felt that the first offense ended very quickly. Each commentator could explain one or two yards in detail, which felt a bit out of place. I don't know if this is the case in sports novels, but it was indeed very passionate. Secondly, the portrayal of the protagonist is very successful, but it is a bit broken off the court. Every time he is interviewed by reporters, there are some jokes. The author may want to express the protagonist's eloquence and humor, but he is a bit self-proclaimed and the character is a bit broken. When facing reporters, it seems that he can make reporters laugh by saying a few words or make a reporter laugh. It seems that the protagonist's eloquence is very good, but when I read it, I don't feel this way, and the jokes are not funny. This is a major shortcoming. In general, it is a passionate sports article, and the writing on the field is very passionate. Other than that, I can only say that the flaws do not hide the advantages

By the way, it has only been a few years since this novel was completed. The popularity of the novel at that time has completely cooled down? ? After browsing various major novel forums, I found that no forum mentioned this novel, and all major novel forums no longer mentioned this novel. . . . It's as if this novel never existed. . Is it that exaggerated?

Second brush, make up for the full subscription, can you please write more articles about sports?

I read the first bit and then went straight to the last chapter!