King of the Bay Area

I can understand the author wanting to write about racism as a cool point. After all, in reality, racial discrimination is not only one of the most serious problems in football, but also in the United States. As a Chinese player, Bambi is naturally happy to slap players and American society in the face. But there is something wrong with the author's pacing. There is too much emphasis on racial discrimination, and almost every chapter is related to this issue. When reading this way, it feels almost depressing except for the chapters that turn things upside down. And I hope the author can also consider that most readers actually live in China and have no sense of racial discrimination at all. The next door "Run Out of My Life" uses "patriotism" to make it more interesting, which obviously has a much stronger sense of empathy. To give a familiar example, "Slam Dunk", Sakuragi debuted as a rookie and couldn't even hit a ball, so he was ridiculed in various ways. However, the way the comics were expressed did not focus on Sakuragi's pain and confusion, but in a funny way to reduce the reader's depression and increase the interest. After that, Sakuragi also worked hard on the basics first, layups and rebounds for ordinary people, and let himself play first, instead of pursuing reasonable shooting first to become the main force or even the core. The first and most important thing for a player is to play with the ball, isn't it? As for racial discrimination, it can become a breaking point in the middle like the whitewashing of Mitsui, rather than the core of the whole story. After all, it is a sports article, and it pursues a sense of refreshment, passion, and a sense of immersion. Bambi's approach will only make everyone watch passers-by acting instead of participating in it. As for the depressed areas, Bambi can grow by losing, just like Sakuragi's will to shave his hair. Losing like this is for better growth. Rather than relying on being bullied by teammates, I know this is reality, but isn't it ridiculous to pursue reality in artistic works? After all, even if racial discrimination is solved (which is impossible), Bambi has not grown at all. What's more, the author's writing style is not based on suspicion of race at all, but more like a disapproval of physical fitness. I sincerely hope that the author's book will achieve good results. For a good book, the author and readers are honored to witness each other. I don't hope that because of these problems, this book will be used as a template and eventually become more popular than "King of the Bay Area"?

The King of the Bay Area is over, and a new story is about to begin. I personally encountered some setbacks in 2018, but I have recovered and returned to a new journey. The American football movement in China also bore new fruit in September 2019. The first official China University Football League competition sponsored by the China University Sports Association of the Ministry of Education also officially kicked off. This may also be the best start to succeed the King of the Bay Area. CUFL may be a key cornerstone of the development of Chinese rugby. We welcome more friends to like American football, and even join in personally to experience the passion, passion, roughness, and changes. CUFL is waiting for you.

The content of this book is very professional, without any flaws, and it is written about my favorite quarterback. Pay tribute to my favorite Eagles and favorite quarterback Brady!

Really, this is the first time I have seen a novel that is written so often with first suppressing and then rising, and it was particularly uncomfortable. The protagonist of this book did not go smoothly.

Since the decision is to write a data flow system document, why are there so many status fluctuations? ? ? Just keep adding new attributes. What you add along the way is simply incredible. The most annoying thing is the constant use of the same routine: Where do so many accidents come from? So many key goals?

When I met Miss Watson on the plane, she looked stupid to me. Emma Watson is a very scheming person. From the time she falsely marketed herself to get an offer from Yale University, she was directly received a positive response and was not given at all. The so-called Oxford diploma was just a short-term exchange student, and there were a lot of other dirty things that made people ugh I am not saying this to discredit her, but to say how could such a woman fall in love at first sight with a strange man who happened to help her, and secretly look at the male protagonist like a little girl, and blush when they look at each other, and uh uh, really uh uh, I feel that the author is like those who write about China Entertainment, and has an inexplicable pure beauty filter for female stars.

To be honest, this book is really a bit watery. Readers who like daily life should be able to read it. However, this is obviously not a daily life book. It is obviously a sports book, but it does not describe as much space as daily life on the field or in training. I haven't read much and only read 200 chapters. The protagonist only played 2 professional games, 2 academy games, and some scattered drafts and trial games. The total length is estimated to be no more than 30 chapters, and leveling training is briefly mentioned in daily life. Half of the saved space describes daily life, a small half describes racial discrimination, and a small half is popular science football... After reading 200 chapters, this book gave me the feeling of depression. Almost every chapter of the book contains comments about the protagonist. Discrimination and rejection, but there are too few times when the protagonist can stand up and get slapped in the face. If the essence of the slap in the face is that the harder you press, the more enjoyable it will be. But in this book, it is directly crushed to death, but the protagonist does not resist at all. The author expresses it himself in the book. , The protagonist was discriminated against when he was an immigrant as a child and got used to it... OMG, we are not the protagonist, we are not discriminated against by the Americans every day, and we are not used to being discriminated against, so reading this kind of book where we are suddenly discriminated against but do not resist is really unbearable for me.

The writing is the most delicate I have ever read among sports articles, and the writing style is not a no-brainer. This novel can be regarded as a god, but it is too niche. Although I have never watched a rugby game, I am deeply attracted by the author's articles. It is very passionate. Although it will take a long time to compare, some details will be very fresh to taste slowly. Anyway, if you read it slowly, it is really a good book to read.

It's strange that some people think that describing the game in detail is too low to count, saying that the reader's g-point lies in the commentary, the fans, and the media. Isn't the core of competitive writing about competition? Isn't it the competition process that makes us excited? How many words should I write about the competition in detail? ! Ridiculous. The support of fans and the mixed reviews from the media are necessary embellishments for sports writing. Writing about other people's mindless licking at the expense of others is just a waste of words!

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