Football Champion Coach from Scratch

Ever since sports writing became a common practice in online articles it can be said that it is lackluster from the perspective of athletes. It is usually paired with system cheats and then continuously upgraded. The description of the game also includes various kills and overtakes along the way; highlighting the protagonist Long Aotian. From the perspective of a coach, it is usually paired with the perspective of rebirth, and all kinds of potential monsters are directly explored and do various things; it ignores that most stars are actually optimistic about them early on. The description of the game is also about winning and overtaking; it is combined with the commentary perspective and the audience and dog betting comments to create laughter. Then in less than 2 or 3 seasons, he was promoted to the head coach of a wealthy club. Both of the above methods are fine in the early stage and focus on one of them. However, in the later stage, there are all kinds of routines and tricks, which are difficult to swallow. The perspective of this article starts from a graduate student majoring in sports, starting from a low-level league as a team assistant. It is logical and not far-fetched. Then he started to apply for the head coach of the third-level league through UEFA's youth coaching program, which seemed to pave the way for the protagonist, but it was acceptable. The daily description is more based on the strategic height of a head coach and the description of occasional games, combined with on-the-spot command, clearly depicting the division of responsibilities between the head coach, assistant coaches and the team. And establish unique data analysis support through the protagonist's sports science background, laying the foundation for later development. Disadvantages The update is too slow, once a day, and only 17 or 18 pages. The writing is not profound enough and the description is not detailed enough. The portrayal of the supporting characters can be more three-dimensional, so as to highlight the protagonist and bury a few lines better, leaving a lead for later development. The most important thing is that there are too few chapters, and the description of the protagonist is not deep enough. The logic of the characters' behavior is not bad, but it still needs to be explored. It may be due to insufficient writing power. I feel that the protagonist is not vivid enough and lacks the charm of the character. You can consider using some events and descriptions of amateur specialties (such as the conquest of Chinese food) to make the teaching assistant team identify more with the protagonist, and then supplement it with business progress to promote scientific data analysis to give the protagonist a greater voice. You can also add some conflicts to make the characters more three-dimensional. As for the connection with the country, the protagonist can almost describe the pursuit of domestic business in this era, and get some endorsements. However, I do not recommend joining the domestic players. First, it will easily lead to extreme divisions among readers. Second, if it is not flattering, there will be a lot of people reporting it. I hope the author can continue to write well. After all, it is an article with great potential. Also, I personally don't want to mention returning to China to coach the national team in future articles, but the author's update speed makes me afraid of him.

After reading a lot of player perspective fanfic and some more suspended coaching fanfic, I was lucky enough to come across this book. I am not a football fan, nor am I a fan of people. I watch football fandom purely to experience the joy of wits and martial arts. Many articles written from the perspective of players actually pursue the thrill of winning, and the glory of the current players at their peak. How many games have been won, how many championships have been won, how many personal awards have been won. When you see the later stage, you will feel a sense of emptiness, and you may even think, is it interesting to just win, win, win? There are also some coaching articles that focus on the charm of the protagonist, describing how he is proficient in tactics and how to command cleverly. He can appease the team chairman at the top and capture the troublesome players at the bottom. Some even directly arrange special identities to increase the fashion value, as if the protagonist is the god of coaching who descended from the sky, and it is natural for him to receive all honors. And this article is really a rare one. From pregnancy to childbirth to raising a child, it shows a career path from scratch that is difficult for ordinary readers to access. We don't know the author's current career. As an ordinary reader, I don't know how European football coaches get into the industry, nor how the entire European football system operates. But as long as the author dares to write, and the writing is stylish and logical, it is really extraordinary. Anyway, I was very pleasantly surprised. Thank you, the author, for producing food.

It's well written, interlocking and eloquent. I hope the author will keep it up, and if possible, hope to increase efforts in the content of the competition. Two monthly passes are presented.

This update speed is unprecedented in my life. Can the author have more pictures? 😰

What is this chapter about? The inner monologue is so long-winded. Can this content be simplified? Focus on the differences between your understanding of football and other coaches.

What is this chapter about? The inner monologue is so long-winded. Can this content be simplified? Focus on the differences between your understanding of football and other coaches.

It is more detailed and professional than other coaching articles. Those system articles and traitor football articles almost made me vomit 😥

He actually started writing about being a coach from scratch. Nowadays, coaching articles often have protagonists who are only responsible for customizing the general framework and recruiting players, and basically don't know how to write about specific training. This book is also very novel in its approach to data analysis. It's a pity that the subject matter is too niche and it is slow to gain popularity. I hope the author can work harder.

I have never seen such a detailed coaching novel. I don't know whether this writing method can be recognized by the market, but as far as I am concerned, it is quite novel.

The first fifty chapters are highly recommended and very enjoyable. But it became more and more monotonous as it went on, and it became a bit annoying later on. A few questions. 1. The competition scene is not burning. The English League One teams' challenges to Manchester City and Arsenal were both written very blandly. Then when are you waiting to explode? Pursue reasonableness and be able to understand. But the writing is bland and unacceptable. 2. Single perspective Is the camera fixed on the protagonist? Can we only write stories from a subjective perspective? There are newspapers and public opinions in the football world, right? Is there a TV host? Is there a stadium commentary? Are there any fans? Is there a forum? Have fun, right? Are there any bloggers? More viewing angles can enhance the atmosphere! What a great foil! You have to write high-burning, passionate and sensational humor. Sports articles are written as stadium broadcasts. Why don't I read the game reports? 3. Character description The protagonist is a little sketchy at first, but later he looks like a puppet. Legendary Coaches started out well, but then became more and more monotonous. What about the protagonist's life? Where is the family? What about friends? Where are the classmates? What about love? After becoming a coach, I just squatted in a small apartment every day. There was no social interaction and my life was monotonous. Okay, can you write a supporting role? The protagonist's good friend was originally a flattering and entertaining person, but as a result, his role became less and less. The team staff didn't see anything wrong either. A tool man of water.

No need to read it, it's a casual meal. It was quite eye-catching before it was put on the shelves. I originally thought that I could finally see the low league slowly growing up, but after it was put on the shelves, there was a lot of history. I started to AI at a glance. I even suspected that I bought it at the beginning. Avoid lightning, brothers.

After entering the league, it completely changed to FM match reports. The communication between the protagonist and the players and coaches suddenly became 0, and there was no dialogue or characterization at all. Take the game against his old club Burton, for example. It was fine if the opponent did not communicate before the game, and the coach did not shake hands after the game? Just treat it as if you don't have to say a word to an old friend? The next chapter will be about Paul being kicked out of class? Then there was nothing you wanted to say before shaking hands? After the game, Vardy didn't want to talk about exploring his talent? Moreover, there were no post-match interviews, and the players were all blurred and had no shaping at all. It has completely turned into a battle report for fm.

I suspect that it is a coach with a UEFA coaching certificate who is writing... If it is true, please tell me about the author. I have been wandering for half my life, but unfortunately I have not met my master. If the father never abandons me, I would like to be my adoptive father!

Won't you change it even after you finish AI? The various quantifiers in front, a few thin lines, a few centimeters, did not touch each other. This distance explains something. There is no need to rush or make trouble. Does this kind of AI word have any meaning?

The early stage was good, but in the later stage, especially Chamberlain's transfer, no one was so successful. Don't order it yet, let it sit for a few months and see if there is any improvement.

This book is one of the few pieces of gold I dug out of the shit pile this year. It stands out among all homogeneous systems. You can see that the protagonist's thinking is based on objective facts and seeks to solve problems through reasonable and professional technology. It is not suitable for people who want to read fast-paced articles, especially those who never watch football games and only watch highlights. They want to have fun, not brains.

FM game report stream, the most important moment of the transfer is to determine the final lineup. It's not about going back and forth over the details. I was ready to jump through the whole transfer process. Moreover, your data analysis tool was half-written, but the first transfer window for practical use has disappeared!

Is AI ghostwriting the back part? The character dialogue always emphasizes flatness, neither fast nor slow. Are we all humans and machines?

Start flooding with AI, totally not worth subscribing to.

Don't read the recent one, it's very watery and not useful at all.

The author must be very young. The iPhone 4 had just been released in 2010, and the iPad had just come out. It was still far from being widely used by mobile devices that are now very common. The mainstream systems are still Symbian and ios, and mobile navigation is also difficult to use. Most of the time, I still ask for directions and maps. The traffic charges are very expensive, and the Internet speed is extremely slow, and 3G is not yet widely available.

If I like watching low league and tactical reports, why don't I just go to FM?

It's really getting worse in the future. Please, you only update one chapter every day, and the self-made system for selecting players is no longer needed. If it was considered grass jelly before, now it is at best considered dry food that is damp...

The pace is too slow. Just tell the results of unimportant games. Write down the key games carefully.

There are many problems. Before it was released, the main character's love and desperate impulse to give up his doctor's future for football was gone. I just saw a tired migrant worker watching the video every day. Secondly, the games after going to Southampton felt like copying and pasting. I wrote 2-3 pictures per game, and there was no interaction with the players. The coach's communication, even the classmates who were not good with the protagonist at the beginning, have disappeared. There is no communication between Burton and people, as if they are living in a vacuum. At this speed, is the author planning to write 200 chapters in the English League One, and then another 200 chapters in the English Championship?

The first few dozen chapters are amazing to read, but now they describe the competition in the same way. After so many chapters, they are still going from game to game. The pace is too slow.

I originally planned to update it as soon as I opened it, but when I saw Chapter 121, I discovered a problem. The protagonist is too featureless. And it is becoming less and less distinctive! At first, I still had a youthful spirit and drive. After joining Southampton, I was like countless low-level league coaches whose names I can't remember. A novel in which the main character is "unrecognizable" is fatal. Not to mention the master of public speaking like the crazy lion coach more than ten years ago, the protagonists of several recent coaching articles are either arrogant or happy, at least they all have their own characteristics. The protagonist of this article is too ordinary, with no special features at all, just as bland as water. The characters are not attractive, and the plot has no tension due to writing problems. As a reader, I will not be happy for the protagonist to win, nor do I have any expectations for the protagonist's tactical design to reverse the game. The whole reading experience is like reading a manual, bland and boring.

Before the English Championship, the framework is well set up, making people look forward to the story of the promotion and transfer period However, I am a big fan, and some chapters even made me think it was AI, because there are too many repeated dialogues The operation is too realistic and does not create a sense of tension and expectation. After all, it is a YY novel, so it can be appropriately YY. Kane and Vardy did not come, and there was no tension in the last day's operation. A big one was laid out, and then it was laid out without filling in the flesh and blood. Of course, there is a lot of space in the middle. For example, the protagonist explains the positioning of the next season to the following players, that article is very good. Even the dialogue is nothing new. There are no ups and downs, the passion and cruelty on the football field, no emotions at all, just a running account. Tianwangshan's game against West Ham did not focus on length, creating a sense of fate or enhancing confrontation. It's better not to write. I saw this. The sense of anticipation was gone in an instant We can pass through some competitions in one go. There are enough frameworks and enough momentum. There is no need to write so many repetitive hydrographs. Enter the offseason as soon as possible to raise expectations and reshape the villain's fateful opponent.

Why is it becoming more and more common? Now there is no passion even in the chapters of the anecdotal competition. There is no emotion at all, and the competition process is described calmly. It was written well before, but I don't understand it.

I have been reading books for more than ten years and have never given a negative review to any book. The early part of this book is very good and the plot is correct, but 😮‍💨 It is very annoying to have so many chapters in one transfer.