Football Champion Coach from Scratch

Ever since sports writing became a common practice in online articles it can be said that it is lackluster from the perspective of athletes. It is usually paired with system cheats and then continuously upgraded. The description of the game also includes various kills and overtakes along the way; highlighting the protagonist Long Aotian. From the perspective of a coach, it is usually paired with the perspective of rebirth, and all kinds of potential monsters are directly explored and do various things; it ignores that most stars are actually optimistic about them early on. The description of the game is also about winning and overtaking; it is combined with the commentary perspective and the audience and dog betting comments to create laughter. Then in less than 2 or 3 seasons, he was promoted to the head coach of a wealthy club. Both of the above methods are fine in the early stage and focus on one of them. However, in the later stage, there are all kinds of routines and tricks, which are difficult to swallow. The perspective of this article starts from a graduate student majoring in sports, starting from a low-level league as a team assistant. It is logical and not far-fetched. Then he started to apply for the head coach of the third-level league through UEFA's youth coaching program, which seemed to pave the way for the protagonist, but it was acceptable. The daily description is more based on the strategic height of a head coach and the description of occasional games, combined with on-the-spot command, clearly depicting the division of responsibilities between the head coach, assistant coaches and the team. And establish unique data analysis support through the protagonist's sports science background, laying the foundation for later development. Disadvantages The update is too slow, once a day, and only 17 or 18 pages. The writing is not profound enough and the description is not detailed enough. The portrayal of the supporting characters can be more three-dimensional, so as to highlight the protagonist and bury a few lines better, leaving a lead for later development. The most important thing is that there are too few chapters, and the description of the protagonist is not deep enough. The logic of the characters' behavior is not bad, but it still needs to be explored. It may be due to insufficient writing power. I feel that the protagonist is not vivid enough and lacks the charm of the character. You can consider using some events and descriptions of amateur specialties (such as the conquest of Chinese food) to make the teaching assistant team identify more with the protagonist, and then supplement it with business progress to promote scientific data analysis to give the protagonist a greater voice. You can also add some conflicts to make the characters more three-dimensional. As for the connection with the country, the protagonist can almost describe the pursuit of domestic business in this era, and get some endorsements. However, I do not recommend joining the domestic players. First, it will easily lead to extreme divisions among readers. Second, if it is not flattering, there will be a lot of people reporting it. I hope the author can continue to write well. After all, it is an article with great potential. Also, I personally don't want to mention returning to China to coach the national team in future articles, but the author's update speed makes me afraid of him.

It is more detailed and professional than other coaching articles. Those system articles and traitor football articles almost made me vomit 😥

The first fifty chapters are highly recommended and very enjoyable. But it became more and more monotonous as it went on, and it became a bit annoying later on. A few questions. 1. The competition scene is not burning. The English League One teams' challenges to Manchester City and Arsenal were both written very blandly. Then when are you waiting to explode? Pursue reasonableness and be able to understand. But the writing is bland and unacceptable. 2. Single perspective Is the camera fixed on the protagonist? Can we only write stories from a subjective perspective? There are newspapers and public opinions in the football world, right? Is there a TV host? Is there a stadium commentary? Are there any fans? Is there a forum? Have fun, right? Are there any bloggers? More viewing angles can enhance the atmosphere! What a great foil! You have to write high-burning, passionate and sensational humor. Sports articles are written as stadium broadcasts. Why don't I read the game reports? 3. Character description The protagonist is a little sketchy at first, but later he looks like a puppet. Legendary Coaches started out well, but then became more and more monotonous. What about the protagonist's life? Where is the family? What about friends? Where are the classmates? What about love? After becoming a coach, I just squatted in a small apartment every day. There was no social interaction and my life was monotonous. Okay, can you write a supporting role? The protagonist's good friend was originally a flattering and entertaining person, but as a result, his role became less and less. The team staff didn't see anything wrong either. A tool man of water.

He actually started writing about being a coach from scratch. Nowadays, coaching articles often have protagonists who are only responsible for customizing the general framework and recruiting players, and basically don't know how to write about specific training. This book is also very novel in its approach to data analysis. It's a pity that the subject matter is too niche and it is slow to gain popularity. I hope the author can work harder.

I have never seen such a detailed coaching novel. I don't know whether this writing method can be recognized by the market, but as far as I am concerned, it is quite novel.

I was looking for books and came across this book again. I can only say that it is a pity. If I had maintained the level of the previous dozens of chapters, not to mention thousands of subscriptions, it would definitely be a high-quality book. However, after it was put on the shelf, I fell into using AI to write nonsense. I can only say that I deserved it.

He was not killed, a fish slipped through the net

No need to read it, it's a casual meal. It was quite eye-catching before it was put on the shelves. I originally thought that I could finally see the low league slowly growing up, but after it was put on the shelves, there was a lot of history. I started to AI at a glance. I even suspected that I bought it at the beginning. Avoid lightning, brothers.

After entering the league, it completely changed to FM match reports. The communication between the protagonist and the players and coaches suddenly became 0, and there was no dialogue or characterization at all. Take the game against his old club Burton, for example. It was fine if the opponent did not communicate before the game, and the coach did not shake hands after the game? Just treat it as if you don't have to say a word to an old friend? The next chapter will be about Paul being kicked out of class? Then there was nothing you wanted to say before shaking hands? After the game, Vardy didn't want to talk about exploring his talent? Moreover, there were no post-match interviews, and the players were all blurred and had no shaping at all. It has completely turned into a battle report for fm.

Won't you change it even after you finish AI? The various quantifiers in front, a few thin lines, a few centimeters, did not touch each other. This distance explains something. There is no need to rush or make trouble. Does this kind of AI word have any meaning?