I Farm Attributes in Slam Dunk

First of all, the author thinks that basketball is the most talent-hungry sport in the world, so I won't say anything else. Secondly, now everyone wants to reduce the system's sense of existence. While subtracting in this regard, the author is adding to it. The system rewards of bronze, silver, and gold are acceptable, but the rewards are too messy, including nutrient solution, talent points, badges, and skills. Among them, skills are divided into levels 1 to 5, and badges are divided into bronze, silver, and gold. Oh my god, it's not an online game article 😰

Writing this heroine is a huge failure

Finally we have Ayako as the heroine, let's try it out

Coach! I want to play basketball! !

The writing is okay, but the heroine is not very good. . . Can you add a few more? The leaves in Caiko's martial arts competition are not good enough. Every time I see the heroine Caiko, I feel so sick that I can't stand it anymore.

I originally wanted to say that as a systematic and experienced protagonist, I should crush a second-year Xiangbei even if I don't even mention beating him. After all, I have read a lot of basketball articles. There are basketball tyrants with slam dunk plots. The road to superstardom starts with slam dunk masters. Masters are not always slam dunks. Basketball miracles and so on. Whether it is concepts or techniques, the world of slam dunks should be crushed with a vision and experience higher than that of high school students. But when I thought about it carefully, the author said he only wrote about slam dunks. If he was crushed, it would end too quickly, and he wouldn't be able to write much at all. It would indeed reduce the protagonist's starting strength and growth rate to a certain extent. After all, although those fans who crushed the game felt happy, they ended too quickly. Just like the master book above does not always slam dunk, but directly takes over Sakuragi's body, and can directly crush the high school team in the slam dunk world with a single shot, so that book also ends very quickly, with a short and smooth ending. Anyway, come on, although it has certain poisonous points, it can still be regarded as food.

While talking about entering the NBA to fulfill his dream, he also said that he is purely a slam dunk fan and does not involve the NBA.

Or do you mean that, you've failed for one year, are you still afraid that Zebei will evolve into a better team next year? Just beat him up in a duel. Alas, what is written next?

Just exit when you see this paragraph

The writing is very good, but the number of words is too few and not enough to read. . .

The pace is too slow. After writing about Slam Dunk, I can still write about NBA. Of course, I have to upgrade it fiercely.

How does the quality compare to the previous Sanjiang Slam Dunk Master?

This book has nothing to do with the NBA. It will be finished after playing in the high school league (the author said)

AI

I hope so next year. The backup shooting guard can have Katsumi Ichiro in that big movie. After all, this year's Shohoku has entered the national competition, and then Mitsui. At most, for that year, it can also be said to the outside world that the experience of the bad boy who was injured and rested was not exposed, and then it was beautiful. I originally respected Mitsui, but I hated him because he knew about his experiences as a delinquent. I hated him for wasting his time and talent. But things have changed now. He should be able to come to Shohoku.

I am Chaowei. From the perspective of a slam dunk master, isn't it the best one to write? There are only a few NBA articles that are good. The current rhythm is not very good, and playing basketball is boring to death.

Check it out, it's a very good novel, very graphic and powerful.

Not bad, just stick to the current rhythm Will you write NBA in the future?

Look at the section where Shohoku played Hainan. At the beginning, it was said that Shohoku did not open up the score, and then a large section in the middle only described how the goal was scored, without mentioning the score of the two teams. Then suddenly it was 70s to 70s, and Shohoku was still lagging behind. Rukawa Kaede's junior high school final was not very good either. You just mentioned Rukawa Kaede's influence on the offensive end. If you describe a scene where the defensive end blocks a shot or steals, wouldn't it be more logical to make a comeback? In addition, in terms of plot, losing to Hainan in the joint final is actually more in line with the paper strength of the two teams, and if they lose, it will not affect the national competition, and the county competition in the protagonist's sophomore year will also be interesting. Otherwise, there will be no opponent in the county competition next year. Why don't you write about it? I am posting this single chapter because your writing is indeed good, the writing has a certain literary foundation, the main line is actually simple and clear, and the plot also has a beginning. But I saw you said before that you only think about the ending, so I want to say that please remember to ask for the top, get the bottom, and the bottom for the bottom. If you just want to finish the book, then I can guarantee that this book will have a bad ending at best.

It feels ok to invest in it

Why are the results so mediocre? It shouldn't be. The description is very good and the plot is well controlled. It has great potential. Why is there so little discussion? Is it because there is less traffic for newcomers, or is it because Slam Dunk is too niche now?

Can you update it more? How pitiful! And this disconnected part is so annoying!

The system is not good, the fans are not as good as those cheats given by NBC

Why did Japan's second team beat the Chinese first team and they couldn't take care of themselves? If he hadn't stopped, he might have lost 50 points.

I posted this post just to discuss the slam dunk fanfic with the author. There are really not many slam dunk fanfics written in this era, and there will only be fewer and fewer in the future, because people who read SD are gradually becoming old. Writing SD is actually very similar to writing other types of invincible stories. You can neither suppress the protagonist's combat power, nor overpower the opponent, which can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue and fall into the sameness in every game. How to achieve balance is the author's own consideration. Rukawa Kaede and Sendō in the anime are actually very close to the protagonist templates in various slam dunk fanfics. They are handsome enough, strong in football skills, cool enough, and the ace of the first-year team. With these two people, it is indeed not easy to create a stronger character in all aspects, but what you have to think about, the author, is that we are good-looking and cool, the protagonist is strong enough, and will not suffer from aesthetic fatigue due to being too strong, and how to intersperse daily emotions and friendships, especially friendship! You can create your own fictional best friends of the protagonist or two! In the context of Slam Dunk, there are rich characters. Don't just write about characters who have only appeared in anime. Apart from the protagonist's contact with the characters in the original plot, doesn't he have his own friendships since he was a child? Or the girls who like him or the girls he likes? What I want to express is that you create some of your own characters in addition to the protagonist in your own world! AI cannot ghostwrite, but it can use AI plots to create character creations for reference! In fact, there is still a lot to say, come on! (Bgm: The end of the world! Ring!)

Why is there only one chapter today 😐

It looks good, I'll give you twelve monthly passes, come on👏

I don't know when Tian Gang was worthy of such a thing. . . Among all the coaches who appeared, Tian Gang was the worst and most irresponsible. . . Losing to Northern Hunan and losing to Hainan were all losses in the end because they did not have the ability to respond on the spot, and were completely inferior to Gaotou. . And Fukuda is the only one among all the players who wasted several years because of coaching. .

It's just that sometimes there are too many interactions with Ayako during the game, which affects the content of the game. Wait, what if you are still flirting there and someone launches a fast attack? You can just write the interaction separately. Some people also like young couples, so don't write too much in the game.

I'm currently reading the last chapter. The protagonist is in the same class as Miyagi, so the summer national competition is over. Should I write the Autumn Kingdom style? There are also trials in winter, do you have anything to write about? Will you go to Japan U18 training camp? You probably won't be able to go to the domestic training camp, because you haven't played in the country, and it's not a youth training within the system.