From Dockworker to King of Fog City

Seeing that 242 couldn't handle it anymore, it would be better to write an indigenous protagonist. It's all for the sake of oppression. The golden finger is a patch given to the protagonist during the upgrade process, which is completely passive. There is also a set of buffs that are completely unbeatable. It looks like a bitter and resentful native with a questionable IQ. It is not fun to watch at all. There is a reason why the monthly ticket is not available.

To avoid misplaced expectations, let me share with you. This book is a refreshing text with some characteristics of the Fog City and the Victorian era, including church, nobility, knights, clubs and other elements. It is essentially a cool text. The elements include: liver experience, punching to the flesh, fighting excitement, pushing through the Fog City, plundering demon talents, meat pigeons, and entry construction.

Diaosi is still a diaosi, even if she travels through time, even if she has sex. It's hard for you to survive like this, but you still work hard every day and expect to work hard to save money to learn the exercises? Wouldn't you beat a sap in the dark to steal money? You are truly worthy of being a good citizen of the flower gardening family for generations. 🙂🙂🙂 With this kind of thing, it would be useless if you mess with it.

It looks okay, it's still essentially a fantasy, but with a change of background, it's not so nauseating.

The fantasy martial arts story is about a foreigner, and he kills all the foreign devils in various ways.

If you have a cheat finger and don't use it, you have to wait to be passive before using it. What's the use of this cheat finger!

Where there was no order, the protagonist opened the trap and gained a burst of strength, but he did not dare to sneak attack some gangsters to grab some money to learn martial arts. It must be mixed up with the plot of robbery and his counter-attack. How? The protagonist wants to defend himself?

The protagonist's time travel? Is it weird to see other people taking a day off? ? ? Even if you are aboriginal, you are probably a very ignorant aboriginal. Why does the author make the protagonist so stupid? What is the purpose?

After Chapter 300, no, it was very strange from the beginning. Goldfinger obviously kills monsters to obtain entries and a permanent certificate, but he has never taken the initiative to hunt alien species. Before the first level, you can be said to be too weak to be safe. After the second level, your strength has greatly increased, and you have not been seen to actively look for alien species to increase your strength. It is as if you have a gold mountain in your hands that you cannot mine. You have to work odd jobs to maintain your life, and you have to eat hard?

The biggest feeling when reading this book is that it is covered with a layer of British style, but at its heart it is still Eastern fantasy. The protagonist is obviously a time traveler, but he works more numbly than the natives. He was surprised for a while when he heard that "you can actually rest on rest days"; what is even more surprising is the setting - a foggy city in the Victorian era, a group of Westerners wearing shorts, practicing "breathing techniques" and finding "qi"; coupled with the routine metaphors, the "AI smell" is too strong.

Although the protagonist is a time traveler, he has been tricked by his mother and his IQ has been severely reduced. The correct development model is to kill aliens and strengthen himself, and then obtain resources to practice, instead of working hard like a native every day, not using his golden finger well, and constantly suppressing his combat effectiveness. Moreover, there are too many repetitive paragraphs about cultivation matters, which is just a low number of words, and the plot advancement is too slow.

So far, it should have the background of high-quality food and grass, decisive killing, smooth writing, and reasonable plot. There is no other level of pressure in martial arts. When you are bullied, you have to endure it. You have to go to the extreme limit before you can kill people. The cliché plot of beating the little ones until they grow old!

These literary youths will abuse their masters, do you know that? Moreover, they are mentally abnormal, and you cannot read the things written by abnormal people. Of course, maybe people just want to write something tasteful and artistic, but this is not something I, a layperson, can understand.

It's really funny. What happened yesterday, the protagonist can be found on the second day. Detective! Is this surveillance or are there witnesses?

Xiangzi's novel has a British cover, but the plot is still Xiangzi's. Is the author's imagination so exhausted now?

Later, the words and sentences become more and more literary, and the protagonist becomes more and more brainless.

The Black Death Cult kills people randomly. After being killed by the protagonist, everyone knows about it the next day.

I feel like what I wrote later became more and more frequent. Is it easy to accept things from strangers in the wild, and then go for it after others say a few words? And wasn't the protagonist's most powerful weapon at that time the claw skill? Why not use it? When your life is at stake, you have never tried to use your claw skills to break a rope. Is your brain full of water?

The overall story is passable, but there are constant minor flaws. The author describes the characters too carefully, but the logic is too careless. There is also a protagonist whose mentality is really not like that of a time traveler, or who was a young man before time travel. His sudden shock really made people abandon the book. The author can modify it

I couldn't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 180. I found that the writing was too slow and the protagonist's advancement was too slow. The golden finger was no different. After flipping through it, I visually checked that 500+ chapters had not reached the third level. What the hell is this?

It looks okay from the front, but it looks like a replacement from behind. The protagonist is also a time traveler. I mentioned it earlier but didn't write anything about it later. Just write about how painful the original memory is and how you want to seek revenge from your father. This system of yours is just like the memory before time travel. The system still writes a little bit, but before time travel, it doesn't write anything at all. There were 5 updates in the past, then 3 updates, and now 2 updates. Is this a cool article? It's like it was written by some destiny. It's really frustrating, and the main character is so useless. Is it worthy of us to write it like this?

"Survive" might as well be changed to "survive". The male protagonist's life is often on the line between life and death. Whenever the male protagonist's life gets a little better, the author starts to whip the male protagonist with more intensity. This book is not a pleasure story, nor is it a pure abuse story. It should be a suffering story. The male protagonist lives in dire straits, and endless suffering is waiting for him to get through.

Changed author and AI? 1. When the golden gun is made, it can change in size and weight. It can be turned into a thin rope and wrapped around the waist or body. Then after more than ten chapters, it must be carried? 2. Master Lunde was still a 28-year-old Peak Level 3 at the beginning with a high probability of breaking through to Level 4 in the future, and then after the dock warehouse incident, he turned into an old gunman? The housekeeper also changed from an old man to a woman? 3. The Xuanyin Breathing Technique was originally taken from the Tusol family. It was passed down from other people's families. Everyone in Victoria who is qualified knows what it is like. And after breaking through to the third level, why is there something wrong with the breathing technique that is too powerful to hide? Tusol is also going to find out where the breathing method comes from? 4. The original directors and presidents of the Brotherhood were all Level 3, but after your protagonist reached Level 3, there were not many Level 3 members in the fraternity? 5. When False of Daewoo Gym appeared, he was a level 4 demon hunter. Now that your protagonist has advanced to level 3, maybe he has a grudge against others, will False become level 2? 6. When the blood seal comes out, there are at most three. If you want to kill and then suck the blood, then you need to practice it yourself? 7. The preface always does not match the follow-up, and the previous settings will always change beyond recognition later. Are they written by a group of different authors who do not communicate with each other? You today, him tomorrow, her the day after tomorrow? 8. When Susie first came out, she was Daisis's junior sister, a student of her teacher, a very talented mystic scholar, and then she became an adopted sister later? The servant's daughter has been holding back her revenge for years? There's no teacher anymore, so you're all studying on your own secretly? Always changing, always changing, always weakening and suppressing, the status of extraordinary people is always suppressing and changing😰

Brother, if you write well in front of you, why should you be a literary youth later? You write books to make money

It's neither Chinese nor foreign. To put it bluntly, it's just a martial arts novel with a new skin. It has neither the flavor of a martial arts novel nor the characteristics of a Western fantasy.

At every level, there will be a routine of being seriously injured and being bullied at a low price! Even the protagonist can't survive every time, right? It is getting more and more boring, too squishy, ​​and always jumping on the edge of danger. The techniques are always about strength and aura. The newly released techniques all look very good, but the later ones are all garbage. The attack is useless at all. Others can effectively and reasonably use the attack. The protagonist has never studied his own attack and uses his own attack to quickly expand. What is the ability mechanism he absorbs? Can it be combined? For example, based on the abilities of dragons or certain gods, you can hunt monsters with similar abilities!

Don't think of this book as a steampunk book It's just the lowest level fantasy novel You will regret it if you don't follow it.

The author is very bad at writing about how to feel happy. He killed a bear but did not write about selling it to make money. He killed a catfish and even said he could sell it for a cent, but he killed a few monsters without even searching for them. He didn't even pick up a pistol and sell it. He just kept crying about being poor and dragging down the economy. I killed a big python, and I didn't get any money or sell it. I couldn't even write about the gains from defeating monsters. It was such a waste of expression.

Did I miss it? Or was it written by someone else? I mentioned the rebirth potion in so many chapters before, and said that I didn't bring anything with me when I went to the secret realm. In the end, I got the rebirth potion from the Brotherhood. So where did the bottle you got when you won the championship go? Did I miss it?

I just don't use it if it's there, I just suppress my fighting ability. Killing alien species would greatly improve me, so I just won't kill them. I'll kill you readers. The overall picture looks great, but in fact, the writing and plot are all frustrating. The plot is also very, very ink-written, no wonder it has almost 3 million words written now.