The Death Train

I'm a new author, this is my first time trying online novel serialization, thank you for your support and understanding, sending you lots of love ❤️

The writing is very good, come on brother 😃

I have a physiological aversion to the inexplicable "metaphors" in AI copywriting! &Nbsp;                                    ——Seventh Winged Blade

Yes, it's very well written. However, next time before an emotional scene, I hope you can focus more on the scenes and characters. Because the older and younger sisters had too little screen time and their characters weren't well-developed, I didn't feel a strong connection with them and couldn't empathize with their experiences. Also, during the flashbacks, I hope the main characters can participate more and gain something from them. Because I lacked sympathy for the two sisters, I almost skipped that part.

Keep up the good work, author! You write so well! It really got me a little scared. You're awesome, author! Keep updating, I'll keep following your updates!