Simultaneous Transmigration: Everyone Is a Weakling?

The author's writing about astronomy is mediocre, but his writing about martial arts seems to have the help of a god. It's just that the writing is too slow, and among the martial arts that have been pursuing transcendence for so long since Xiao Ao, only the Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty can break the void. Marvel's worlds of high martial arts are inherently immortal, and there is no timeline for world recovery that can be proven forever. Currently, it is expected that after Shattered Void, other martial arts worlds will begin to transcend one after another, and other high-level martial arts worlds will appear, receiving help from the martial arts world and feeding back martial arts. The upper limit of martial arts is still too low. Let's switch from martial arts to immortal as soon as possible

I couldn't stand watching Demon Slayer until halfway through. The first three worlds were pretty good, but later on I felt like I wanted to write about a miscellaneous fish and a strong character, and then I suppressed the protagonist in some inexplicable place. I still like to watch the snowballing feeling of watching the Doten Clone Ryu. This kind of reopening is too tiring to watch, and the writing is also very weak.

Subscribe specifically to write a book review. The opening setting of this book is very innovative, and it is an innovation compared to the traditional infinite flow, which is worthy of recognition. The protagonist's strength improves very quickly, and he is almost invincible in a dozen chapters. Although it is like riding a rocket, the author uses different time flow rates to round out the setting, which I can barely accept. But within a few chapters, the disparity in character creation made my impression of the game take a turn for the worse. In the Demon Slayer chapter, the protagonist refrains from killing and does not harm ordinary civilians. My expectation is that the male protagonist is restraining himself. He is worried that once he starts killing, he will not be able to suppress his own demonic desires. I agree with the logic of this setting. At that time, many readers complained about the protagonist Madonna, but I can understand the character's motivation. Even if the plot of the fight against Zhan Wumei breaks down a little later, I don't care. Back to the Swordsman chapter later, the reading experience immediately collapsed. The protagonist of this world line has become a rootless person since his death, and his personality has become cold and extreme. I didn't like the plot of the singer very much. I understand the author's setting: the characters of the protagonists in different worlds are inherently different. The protagonist of the Swordsman storyline has a twisted mind and acts harshly due to his experiences and physical changes. I can also accept this. Out of the motive of not wanting to die first, he lures or even forces others to practice evil-repelling sword skills, and then uses the heart-burning method to absorb others. I have seen this kind of cruel plot in other novels, and it is tolerable. What really makes me uncomfortable is Ning Zhongze's ending, the straw that breaks the camel's back. I like the character Ning Zhongze very much. Her life has been rough enough, and I can sympathize with her choice of Yue Buqun. I can accept the protagonist's darker character and ruthless methods, but I simply cannot accept the author's arrangement for her end. The protagonist in the Demon Slayer chapter is willing not to kill civilians who don't know what is right and wrong, but in the Xiaoao chapter, Ning Zhong, who was not at fault, died in the aftermath of the war without any foreshadowing, and a large number of Huashan disciples also died together. This is the world of martial arts written by Jin Yong. It is not considered high martial arts, or even medium martial arts. The aftermath of a fight can affect these ordinary Jianghu people in batches. The sense of disobedience is too strong. How come you are so awesome and you are still doing nothing? If you directly dominate the Jianghu, you can do whatever you want I think Xiao It is said that there are very few long reviews, and usually I will quit voluntarily if it is a little unsightly. But your book, and the book I read before, Lu Mingfei to Douluo, are the two types of books I hate the most. They poisoned me to death. I have to leave this as a warning to others who will come after me.

As the title suggests, first of all, the main character Zayu was written based on basic logic, but the author also liked to write original famous scenes for the protagonist to participate. The result is that there is no benefit and I am weak, but I have to participate in the highly dangerous original plot. For example, let the Xiaoao protagonist, who can only defeat Yu Canghai, participate in the Golden Pen Washing Ceremony.

Have you divided it into 99 parts? Just write it out and take it for granted. References

When I saw the comments, I didn't want to read them at all. They were so bad. I gave it a try and the results were okay.

I read the introduction: The Swordsman: The Lord of Infinite Horrors and Mysteries, and then clicked on the catalog: Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. This kind of book that is trying to swindle itself is a direct escape from lightning.

If you haven't eaten Shi, you can take a look.

You are still a dick who dare not kill important people. You give people the impression that you are very powerful, but all you do is to tie your own hands. Others will jump on your face and try to explain to others. What should you explain? Beat them all up and then break off their legs and hands. From a human standpoint, it is much better if I don't want to kill you than to explain it to you. The first few well-written chapters will make you appetite, but the rest will just feed you history.

Xiao Ao still has memories of time travel when he was 6 years old. He didn't have money to do things such as imperial examinations, building a force, or even doing business, so he just kept practicing the third-rate martial arts of the Lin family. Why did he have to cut him off? It could have been a few months earlier. The author changed it to have to do it to wake up the memory, otherwise the protagonist will look like a personal machine.

Now it feels like it's just a fish for the sake of being a fish. What I saw at the beginning was that the protagonist was a fish but didn't give up and jumped over the dragon's gate. Now the main god team battle is going to kill everyone. I won't write about it, so you can suppress the combat power. In the end, Dragon and Snake won't lose in a three-on-one battle, and others commented on the protagonist in a condescending manner. The protagonist said that he wanted to break the golden sword. The golden sword symbolizes Wang Chao's first martial arts. It is the same reason even if there is no sword and a chair, even a beautiful woman is only worthy of the strong. In the end, the protagonist actually broke his sword and left. Now let's look at the ending of Naruto. If the final ending still forces the protagonist to be beaten to death by the natives, then you are not a bastard but a clown.

It's so funny, the golden finger is mutilated, the pig's feet were cut off at the beginning, and his second brother is also mutilated. . . I laughed to death after reading the first chapter hahahaha

I didn't feel anything at first, but the more I read, the more I felt uncomfortable. At the end, it can be said that the book's title is a matter of strength and plot, and it's a fish for the sake of being a fish. As you write, it feels like the protagonist has become abnormal without realizing it. It's like a psychological distortion. You are so proud at the beginning and have to cut off the chicken, but then the world has more ideas and you still become stronger? Do you specifically castrate your emotions mentally and physically in order not to write about women? Anyway, watching Xiaoao feels like watching the rise of a pervert. The martial arts he has developed can hit people, and the chickens are gone, and the women's skills are gone, and people are still dead. The same goes for later. If you can cut yourself apart and study it piece by piece, why not study whether you can get the chicken back? You can use it but you can't live without it. The subsequent world is similar. It's purely for the sake of the title and suppresses the battle and plot. It feels boring.

There are some places that you cannot think carefully about, and you will make mistakes as soon as you think about them. First of all, there is Douluo. Although Tang San used the Tang Sect mentality after time traveling, look at what the martial arts world was like before he time traveling, and what the ghost world was like. There is also Demon Slayer: Demon Slayer: It is instinct for demons to eat people. What the protagonists share is only memory and not spiritual superposition. Why can he resist Muzan's will? Just because he is the protagonist? The author also said that the protagonist is just a bastard, and he can resist Wu Ke's will just because he has obtained a memory different from his own? I won't talk about other things... You who can't share abilities might as well play with technology. At least there are more or less physical rules in every world.

You are a miscellaneous fish with all the members. You have accumulated enough. You should start pushing it from the beginning of Douluo. No, you should start pushing it from about 200 chapters onwards. Now, just for the sake of miscellaneous fish, you can write miscellaneous fish and reversal in the early stage to attract readers. Now that you have accumulated so much knowledge, you still write about miscellaneous fish? Knowledge is not a thing? Can't take the scientific side? Even if you use martial arts, use internal energy, or use flesh and blood, with so many experiences and having dissected yourself in the true spirit ball space so many times, who can compare to you?

666. Killing ghosts but not killing people, Xiaoao fiercely killing, it doesn't matter whether you kill people or not, but you can't have double standards 😅

"Swordsman" can definitely be completed perfectly. Originally, the main character had a poor background and had to practice martial arts in the palace. However, in the later stage, he has practiced to the extreme and is invincible in the world. He is no longer the same style as others. The transformed celestial beings are neither men nor women. It is barely an explanation of the previous plot. It is not a pity to end the plot. In the later stage, there will not be much in other worlds. So what is the significance of adding this setting? ? ? Interaction can also show up from time to time. But the author has to arrange a reincarnation plot and add a protagonist because there was a problem with the previous life. In the end, in order to maintain his own existence, he could not even interact with other selves. In order to go further, he reincarnated and rebuilt, and at the same time had the opportunity to make up for and correct the previous life. The foundation of it can be regarded as a perfect ending for the protagonist of Swordsman. It's okay. It's not outrageous and acceptable. If you are practicing immortality alone in the future, you can also interact with other worlds from time to time and deduce the techniques. But why do you insist on the protagonist Tian castrated? ? ? I took a bite at the end💩. You, the author, have said it yourself. From now on, the storyline of Xiaoao will be disgusting if it is not integrated, right? Now that the plot of Xiaoao is over, why not give the protagonist a good ending? ! ! Originally, the protagonist practiced cultivation in the palace and became invincible and immortal. He was considered a ruthless person. If he was reincarnated and reborn, he could live forever and make up for his previous shortcomings, which would be considered a second-hand person. However, the author forcibly arranged a situation and ended up becoming a heavenly eunuch. Then you are reborn as a chicken feather! He becomes a pure TM clown

This is the worst and worst comic book I have ever seen, especially the Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty. It suppresses combat power, is self-indulgent, has no writing skills, and likes to add drama to inexplicable supporting characters to make up the plot.

The plot is actually okay, but it's too wordy. The protagonist has the nerve to talk about Qian Renxue, but he himself is the same

Infinite Ancestor just happily increases the points. Although the protagonists are all miscellaneous fish, this is just a matter of birth. Don't make every copy a hardship. I feel that Lin Ruhai in the Infinite Ancestor copy is the most miserable. Either the main god has made it more difficult, or the author has made it more difficult.

The quality of most of the copies in the book is very online. The copies such as Xiaoao, One Person, Dragon Snake, Death, and Lord God have wonderful plots and comfortable rhythms. They are completely in line with the reading pleasure of the time-traveling novels, and the overall reading experience is excellent. But in comparison, the look and feel of the three copies of Douluo, Naruto, and Demon Slayer are really awkward, which is an obvious shortcoming of the whole book. The combat power level of these three worlds is not very high. Logically speaking, the plot advancement should be crisp and neat, in line with the characteristics of the time-traveling flow with repeated climaxes and tight rhythm. However, the actual content is extremely slow and redundant, and the whole process is grinding and unsatisfactory. What is even more surprising is the flaw in the plot settings. The newly added god-related settings are very abrupt, with no previous foreshadowing and seem extremely stiff. The author also forcibly descended the gods to target the protagonist. I personally think that it is most likely that the final BOSS of the original Demon Slayer has no tragic pattern and the combat power cannot support the ending scene of the copy, so he made the forced change as a last resort. The most unreasonable point is that the protagonist, who could have promoted various high-level dungeons with high martial arts, was deliberately suppressed in these low-strength dungeons and frequently suffered losses. Both the rhythm and the combat power system collapsed, and the author's plot design ideas were completely incomprehensible. In fact, the Demon Slayer dungeon can have a more exciting and smoother plot trend. Connecting the world view of JOJO is an excellent choice. The two are extremely compatible and there is almost no sense of inconsistency. Demon Slayer's breathing method can perfectly match JOJO's ripple qigong. The settings of the man-eating evil ghost and the vampire born from the stone ghost face are highly consistent. The strength and pattern of the ultimate creature Kaz can fully support the final BOSS positioning of this copy. At the same time, the JOJO series itself has settings related to gods. The god Hermes who appeared in "Kishibe Rohan: Still Motionless" matches the fatalistic tone of JOJO throughout. On this basis, a plot of checks and balances by gods and manipulation by fate is added. Not only will it not be abrupt, but it will also greatly enrich the level of the world view. At the same time, it can complete the plot foreshadowing. It is set that among the first six plots of JOJO, there are already stand-ins who secretly control destiny like the eighth "Miracle on You", perfectly connecting the entire closed loop of fateful plot. In addition, it can also naturally integrate classic Japanese ghost story elements such as Sadako, Kayako, and Slit Girl, and fit the background of the Japanese world view, making the integrated plot fuller and more self-consistent. It is far more exciting than the current airborne setting and procrastinating plot. Overall, there is no doubt that this book is a good work. Most of the dungeon content is of a very high standard. Only the three dungeons of Douluo, Naruto, and Demon Slayer have a broken rhythm and hasty settings. It is a pity. I hope that the subsequent plots can be optimized and polished to avoid such problems.

Author, do you think that the painting style of Zhu Xian, a cultivator of immortality, is suitable for avatars and English letters? If we continue to do this kind of bad work, we must be able to write well enough for readers.

The last one is a joke. If you don't kill the three of them, I can understand the tie. After all, there is no extraordinary element. But Wang Chao still had an appreciative tone. I was really speechless. It took only two of you and Tang Zichen to injure the protagonist. You praise your mother. This Ba Liming can be killed but won't. Are you three pretending to be your mother? If the top three masters in the world besiege a master who sees the gods and don't kill him, they will lose. If the fight is like this, won't your punches retreat? If it weren't for three against one, the three of you would have died together. It's a piece of cake. Under One Man and Swordsman are much better than this.

The author should really reflect on it As soon as the Lord God plot came out, Lei left a lot of people, and the remaining people watched it while cursing. By the end, those who scolded the Lord God were gone Then came Dragon Snake. There were indeed fewer people scolding, but after watching the ending at the end, they stopped playing, and now another group left Now there are no people in the comment area who even scolded, it is really clean

In the early stage, I can understand that the main character was in jail and had regrets, which suppressed his combat effectiveness, but now that he has passed the early stage and it's time to exert his strength, the main character's writing is the same as Shi's. Redeeming and upgrading are all ridiculous. It is purely written by a fan of Infinity. The s bloodline plus the main god improves the innate attributes and the god is indestructible. As a result, the four locks cannot be unlocked. This is not an infinite fan. It is fun and does not affect subsequent writing. The perfect springboard world is gone. The information exchanged by collecting so many points is enough for the protagonist to raise a large number of levels. In the end, he changed a few skills and ended up. The impression is purely disgusting for readers.

It feels like the author is forcing himself to become a trash fish. It's not okay for a trash fish to become stronger. It must always remain a trash fish.

The martial arts community said it gave the power to avenge the desperate. At first I thought it was the martial arts community that had started to form its own organization. Then it was like planting a fruit tree, and there was a harvest, but I didn't expect to let those desperate people run wild and offend the people of the world for no reason. I don't know what they were trying to do. This is not a cool point either. Then, if you don't kill those people in Ghost Slayer, you can at least write down a reason. Don't worry about whether the person watching accepts it or not. But you don't say anything, just let others chase you at will. This is very confusing. This is no longer a matter of feeling better or worse. Having said so much, I sincerely hope that the author can become bigger and stronger.

What a shame, you can write about the Tang Dynasty for a lifetime 😒

Being the first to be the proudest eunuch in the world. This is shocking for today's Internet articles, but for seekers, it seems to be harmless, just the bane of lust. As for the God of Death, the whole story is okay, but the part about scolding the nobles is a bit hypocritical. Because the essence is that he does the same thing. However, the protagonist has a similar personality to Daai Xianzun. That doesn't matter anymore.       ， Although I also hate the author Tang San, the writing of the main character pretending to be B is a bit rough. This is real thunder, there is nothing to say. Then there is one person, I like this section the most. Overall, the author has some deep thoughts about why I am who I am and what I am. Also, the setting of transcending tribulation is quite novel among one-person fics. The only bad thing was that Xia He was killed, although it would be acceptable later. But I didn't really like it at the time. After all, who doesn't like such a dangerous and charming character? What's more, I'm still reading a novel. I gave up the book if I felt slightly dissatisfied. After all, people who read novels also like to read about driving. Finally, it's Marvel. How can I put this? It feels like there is no highlight. It's a bit like playing house. But Marvel is just a hero performance stage that also plays house. Overall it's quite satisfactory. I think the story and plot of this book are both good and thoughtful. But the content is a bit hard, but there are no ups and downs in reading. This ups and downs are just a sign of exhaustion, and the protagonist has been pursuing the avenue. Keep tightening and never let yourself relax. For me, who can take on the role of the protagonist, I feel a little tired. Although there is a pretentious plot to release emotions, the emotional changes are too rapid. After all, life is already tiring, and I hope it can be a little more relaxed in the novel. I personally think that you can write some lubricant plots in the book, such as the scenery and culture you see when you are on the road, and you can understand something from it; or the driving of a supporting character, a funny oolong plot; or an ordinary day's life, such as the ordinary daily life of the three masters and apprentices of the protagonist; You can also write a plot in which a supporting character falls in love with the protagonist because of some strange things. These are plots that can temporarily slow things down. Generally speaking, there are too many divinities in the protagonist now, and many times I can no longer take on the role, but it is not bad if I am a bystander. After all, I am a bystander outside the world of the novel. But I hope the protagonist can embody a little more humanity, so that it feels more alive. Maybe I want to become a real person, but the protagonist wants to become a real immortal. This is the difference between cultivation and immortality. I can't fully understand it, maybe it's the difference between cultivating immortality and cultivating truth.   Damn, I haven't written so much since I finished the college entrance examination. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhing. Send a message

I don't understand why Spider-Man must be disgusted. He's already having a bad life. Wouldn't it be better to change to a superhero? I'm done.