Starting with Wellness in Another World

The author can now write confidently and boldly. The Bronze Gate was pretty good at the beginning, but starting from the Republic of China copy, I was afraid that it would be harmonious and the writing became more and more biased. The fantasy flow background is a perfect match for the author's style. I hope the author will not write biasedly again.

Mouse Girl

The writing is okay, and it's quite entertaining, but there are too many laden shit-peeing jokes.

The plot is a mess, and I don't even know what the protagonist is doing. The plot is a little bit in the east and a little bit in the west.

There is a feeling that it is boring to read and it is a pity to abandon it.

The book is good📕, but the main character is a bitch. He is very afraid of powerful people. He doesn't dare to offend anyone who is slightly rich and powerful.

An author who has written 8 million words, how come his writer level is only level 3?

Winning the prize and turning it in, you're great

The style is still to my liking. The protagonist in your book is like an ordinary person. He is lazy, does not correct his mistakes, has no firm will, and always thinks out loud. These are the characteristics of ordinary people at the bottom of modern society. In another world, with a golden finger as a pillar, you have the capital to polish yourself little by little, just like the theory of the rich second generation in the book. Trial and error, trial and error, only now do we have the capital to grow.

To be honest, this book is really good, much better than the previous books.

The previous book, The Bronze Door Through Time and Space, was quite interesting.

The author still has the same style, a familiar running account

It was interesting at the beginning, but I didn't understand much about the parasitic beasts, and I couldn't stand it until the fourth chapter.

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The plot is okay, but the viewing experience is a bit poor. It feels like a running account, like the previous one, which seems to be narrating the story in the later stage without saying much.

The beginning of this book is a bit confusing, can you fix it?

A ten-year-old fan came here uninvited. I still want to support the new book. What route will I take this time?

I thought it was a regimen for eternal life! Playing immortality in a different world

The author of the Bible must have read it, right?

He is obviously capable, so why does he have to be a bit yellow? The first two books were a bit restrained, but this one starts at the beginning. The first two books were more enjoyable for me. My personal opinion. In the early stage, the protagonist develops his own power and has subordinates. It is composed of three layers: middle, high and low. It is not very delicate and cannot be wasted like other novels. Fighting a battle will result in the loss of several people. What's the point of this? It's from your first two movies. What I like to see is the kind of your subordinates, not the exquisite ones, but consumable, mass-produced and consumable. This kind of fighting gives a sense of immersion and dominance, because if the appearance is not so high, the loser will not have any inner thoughts. It gives people a very powerful feeling, especially when your Bronze Gate book travels through the Japanese island country. You can travel through time and space and bring matter with you. At the same time, you can also create your own loyal subordinates, but use them as the backbone to maintain your rule. Recruit local natives as cannon fodder to be consumed. You don't need to take the initiative to expand, you just need to provide logistical supplies and let them expand on their own. Maintaining and perfecting your own rule is a bit more enjoyable to read There is a stand-alone Tokyo novel. I think it is well written and circumvents some domestic restrictions. It is written about cities developing their own legions. Developed in Japan. At the same time, you can recruit your own elite units for precise combat. There is a mini map plug-in, which can appear or disappear in reality at any time. At the same time, elite subordinates can be recruited, or cannon fodder's subordinates can also be upgraded and eventually developed into an international organization with the ability to compete with government intelligence agencies and subvert the power of small countries. I didn't write it anymore. It feels like it is not finished. It can directly subvert the power of a small country and perform behind-the-scenes manipulation, and directly evolve into a national manager to carry out larger operations and a larger chessboard.

I have always regarded the author as someone who makes me laugh. I really like this style of imperfect protagonist.

The author writes well, and I have another learning target! Thank you for your support! The title of the book is "Feng Yu's Past Stories" and the author is Shi Qi ages

It develops steadily in the early stage, and the golden finger is also relatively powerful.

Still very good food. The author has also written several books with more than one million words, so we can expect more of them.

There are so many comments, and the number of words is only 47,000. In the beginning, why are there so many comments?