The Island Beyond Time

That's not to say that you can't challenge your weaknesses, but I think it's undesirable to completely throw away your strengths for the sake of your weaknesses. There are some people in the comment area who are so obsessed with Red Mansion. Let's first find out that among Yehuo's books, Red Mansion's achievements account for a very large proportion. I have accumulated a group of Red Mansion fans. Without waiting for consolidation, I will turn around and ask the author to write something else. To be honest, I advocate writing about other types of people. Will you pay if Yehuo writes it? I ordered two books, and neither one of them is about karma. Now, after reading these few books, Yehuo is not able to write authors with attractive plots. The characteristic of Yehuo is that girls can write well and make readers happy. To put it inappropriately, I am just a vulgar person, I just want to see a harem in the Red Mansion. For this reason, even if the plot is clichéd or unrealistic, as long as the girl writes it well, I don't care. But if you want to put aside the girl in the red mansion and write a good plot, then I am definitely very picky. If there are bugs in the plot, it won't work. If the plot is cliché, it won't work. If I want to pay for the plot, it must be really well written. I don't know how many people think this way, but I think it depends on your grades. Ye Huo has written so many books. You should have a strong balance in your mind whether your writing style will give you good grades or not.

I saw a new book opening a few days ago, but I wasn't interested in reading the introduction (The Red Mansion is still interesting) It's better to continue writing about The Red Mansion, as long as you don't do anything about cultivating the immortal Red Mansion (The Red Mansion of cultivating immortality is a bad thing, I can't grasp it) The Red Mansion is all about garden drama!

A spaceship that far surpasses Earth's technology costs 2 billion yuan. Although it is a spaceship that cannot be activated, an aircraft carrier costs more than this. Author, are you insulting the reader's intelligence? Not to mention that this is not what supporting good people does. The protagonist wants to build an environment on an island that can accommodate hundreds of thousands of people. Is 2 billion yuan enough? It is simply not enough to renovate the living environment of an island with hundreds of thousands of people. 2 Billion yuan is not enough, let alone the daily necessities and food needed by hundreds of thousands of people.

Double portal, both worlds are suitable for you. Don't waste your time. Isn't the writing about the time and space very good, especially the part about the Red Mansion. Be obedient. The next book will be a double portal. Ming Dynasty, Zhang Yan, Ba Yan, Kun Xing, Tian Guifei 😁😁😁

Is it a familiar track or an old problem? The pace of certain worlds should not be too fast.

You've written quite well on this subject matter, polish it well and don't let it fall apart again!

Finally, I no longer cling to Dream of Red Mansions. To be honest, the genre of Dream of Red Mansions is really difficult to write. It would be better to write about a theme like the original book Blind Date in Time and Space.

Leng Zixing in the last book, that kind of unnatural situation, I mentioned it endlessly, don't let it happen again

Wouldn't it be better to call it "Time and Space Island"?

By the way, does anyone know where the author's latest book is? I quite like his emotional scenes, they are well written.