The Tiger of Dream of the Red Chamber

After reading this introduction, I don't want to read anymore…

If you write about Red Mansions, you should write about Red Mansions. Did you add the braid scene in order to get scolded?

Pfft, that's so mentally retarded that it's insulting! What the hell are protons being reused? The collapse of heaven brings wisdom... The emperor who is simply funnier than Fu Cha? ? ? King Wu Fu Chai at least looked down upon and made fun of King Gou Jian of Yue! You guys actually still value the reuse of protons! Simply...

This introduction is like raping my eyes

It's this kind of hodgepodge again, sewing all kinds of things and folding baskets of vegetables, and biting the lighter when there's nothing left to do

It's really unlucky. I don't know what it means to write half a chapter about Yuanchun being trained by the emperor in the latest chapter😅😅 In other Red Mansions harem novels, Sichun is a heroine who needs to be described in a lot of words. Even if Yuanchun is in the palace at the beginning of the original novel, she should try to avoid talking about it or use it as a tool to express the emperor's attitude towards the Jia family, or to express the protagonist's power and influence. Whether you accept it or not, I don't understand why you spent so much time writing about the emperor teasing Yuanchun. The title of the book was originally bad, and the introduction was a mess. Now you are still doing such a bad job. I don't understand where the author's clever ideas came from. He really deserves to be thrown out. Run away. There aren't many fans who read Red Mansions, so a new book can be a great way to filter out readers

Actually, you can accept Yuanchun or not, of course you accept it, I have no objection, But you made a PG plot, Everyone is here to see the protagonist SS, not to see the emperor SS, the emperor SS, just brush it off Well, I feel that usually there are many heroines, I don't think that such a plot with supporting roles is so detailed, this Um qq, I have only seen supporting roles written like this in articles like this. The author now suspects that you have just come to shore. To put it bluntly, you have just brushed this off, or you can say it in any way. If it doesn't work, you can just say that Yuanchun is not that good-looking. The key point is that you have a supporting role. I feel like you can't grasp the point 🙂

You can bring it into the late Ming Dynasty, or you can bring it into the late Song Dynasty and the early Qing Dynasty! You are awesome for being able to write it down, no one thinks I am awesome!

Introduction: The cautious that can hold tight becomes the bomb that holds tight

The title of the book is filled with rare characters, the God Must Die plot, and a controversial introduction. Should I turn on the hard mode when writing a book? It's not bad.

Qingwen looks like this, which is more in line with the original description. The mole on the lip in the 87 version somewhat ruins the beauty

With this introduction, if you don't fight, who will?

If you traveled through time and became a native of Jianzhou, what kind of orphan would you end up being? What's the need? It feels like it's unnecessary to make it so complicated. And things like military training and knighthood are all badly written I think in the introduction, you should directly bind the content to Jin Chai. Then on the golden finger settings, all the work attracts attention. Just use it as a backdrop for a court or something like that.

Lin Daiyu

There are too many bad jokes, which affects the perception. And the background setting in your first chapter is too complicated. Sometimes the surname is Tong, sometimes the surname is Jia, and also mixed with the surname Man. If you like it, buy it and go home to play with it. Are you not afraid of getting sick if you are keen on visiting the brothel?

Why does this brief introduction and setting feel like it has been seen before? Is it a re-post?

Xue Baochai

I flipped through the catalog and read the comments, and I was extremely disgusted.

Not bad. The introduction made it clear. They didn't trick everyone into killing them.

It's a very novel perspective, but if you want to be an emperor or something later, the protagonist's identity is too discouraging.

His name is a colloquial expression, he grew up in a braided environment, and he claims he is not Han Chinese based on his bloodline. Does that count as a braided person or a Han Chinese? This is a problem

Three are banned, when will they be released?

The identity of the protagonist is not likable. In fact, it is very simple to collect Sichun. I have a good idea. Just change the identity of the protagonist's father. Change the protagonist's father to be from the twelfth room of Jinling. His ancestor is the cousin of Ning Rong's second father. He is also the clan uncle of the first generation Ning Rong Ergong. The protagonist's ancestor and the first generation Ningrong Ergong are the same great-grandfather. Because the relationship is far away, I stayed in Jinling as the twelfth room in Jinling. In this case, after the protagonist's father is removed from the family tree, the protagonist's nominal and blood restrictions will be gone. Because the second generation Rong Guogong liked the protagonist's father very much and said something like this about me. The protagonist's grandfather died when he was young. When the second generation Rong Guo Gong went south, he saw the protagonist's father and felt that he was both civil and military, so he took him to the Rong Guo Mansion and raised him by his side. Then the protagonist's grandmother offended Aunt Lai, so Aunt Lai spread a rumor to Jia's mother, Jia Shi, saying that she heard that the second generation Rong Guogong was found to have an affair with the protagonist's grandmother, and she suspected that the protagonist's father was the biological son of the second generation Rong Guogong. Jia Mu immediately went into a rage and designed a plan to rectify the protagonist's father and remove the protagonist's father from the family tree.

I feel like there are serious traces of AI. I don't know if the author has read every chapter after AI. The traces of AI are too heavy.

I can't even understand Jiligulu's name, it's like a hundred years of solitude. Can't stand it at all

Qin Keqing

It's okay. It's faster to sell two Cantonese people.

Good looking, love watching

Actually, it's the Peacock Princess

I don't quite understand why the original characters were chosen. Many novels that start the historical genre almost always choose original characters.