Dreaming for Ten Thousand Years

The author is very problematic, and the problem is very big and fatal. To put it simply, the author does not understand the original work. What is the point of Infinite Streaming? The point is that you have to know the original work very well before you can write a second creation well. Otherwise, it would be better if you just write the original Infinite Streaming world. For example, Sun Wukong fights Transformers. If you write that Sun Wukong raised his fist and fought with Transformers, competing for unyielding will, it would be boring. It should be written about the Seventy-two Transformations, Somersault Cloud, Body Holding Technique, and Golden Cudgel. Battle lasers, missiles, and fire sources. Write about Sun Wukong recruiting people from heaven to help, and write about Megatron using the source of fire to create an army. This is the highlight of the second-generation plot of Infinite Streaming. If you don't write about second creations and purely original works, then you can write about them. Put aside the plot of the original work and only use some of the original settings to write your own story. For example, what Shi Fei often does in his dreams is to unify the world. Unifying the world is very complicated and troublesome, because you have to let other people work hard, organize people's production, let people live normally, distribute materials, build cities, and develop the economy. This kind of thing cannot be done by the protagonist alone. If you want to leave it to others, it involves various issues such as the appointment of talents, deception from superiors and subordinates, lack of ability, foolish loyalty, and stubborn ideas. This is a human problem, and it is already so complicated. Combined with the background of the times, how to deal with the internal and external troubles of the Qing Dynasty, the contradiction between too many people and too little land, low food production, and the dumping of products by the great powers? Let's talk about the Song Dynasty. The Northern Song Dynasty couldn't do anything it wanted. The Southern Song Dynasty inadvertently established international financial hegemony through Sui coins. People's lives were better and they were unwilling to fight. Moreover, they had never been able to win in the past, and now they would rather seek peace. How to deal with this situation? If you write something original, you should definitely not write it off in one go. However, the author does not have this kind of knowledge reserve. He does not have the knowledge reserve of the original work, so he cannot write second creations. He does not have the knowledge reserve of the real society, so he cannot write original content. Some people know that they don't understand national management, so the book only covers small national organizations, such as the Anomaly Handling Bureau and the like. Some people simply don't write about these things, and just write about otherworldly adventures, writing about teams, individuals and not organizations. Authors are advised to figure out what they can write about. So in the first sentence, the author's problem is fatal.

I only saw the new book opening at Aunt Ai's place. At least let me know at the old book's place 😆😆😆

What a pity for this old man. He had a chance to become popular. Nowadays, many great gods are popular because of newcomers' works, and then quickly accumulate fans, and they become popular in one day. However, this old man likes to suddenly go crazy like a young man, and likes the world to be filled with red flags. However, all kinds of behaviors are just smoke and mirrors. It's not what I want to say. As the old saying goes, the economic base determines the superstructure. How to develop productivity, break feudalism, emancipate the mind, democracy, reform, restructuring, land reform, struggle, education, people's wisdom, science and technology, industry, you don't touch it at all, there is no logic. The last sentence: The world is red 🤔 Of course, the basis for the implementation of the above must be a country with an industrial society. In ancient times, there was no red soil. The most suitable system in ancient times was to establish a constitutional monarch and develop a capital economy. Only when capital develops to a certain extent and productivity is liberated, will there be red soil.

Author, stop trying to become famous without thinking. The first few book gods were fooled by you at the beginning.

The first bathhouse in the world, everyone must be honest with each other here. It sounds like it is more helpful than money.

The protagonist is more invisible in the middle and later stages, but there are really not many in the early stage. The key is that you are still a fan. What kind of character should you describe for the supporting character? You left it to Wang Yuyan and A'Zhu to show off their saints in front of others, something that should be done by the protagonist, and you just let them go with Qiao Feng. It can be seen that, really, the author, you have an idea 😅

Old devil, wake up quickly, old devil, use your endless domineering thoughts and flag-holding will to overthrow this time, wake up, the universe is super... Wake up, Old Devil Shi, wake up

To be honest, in my opinion, the first volume of The Scimitar of the Moon is the most outstanding. The rest are just for the sake of being interesting and funny for the sake of being funny. Instead, they fall into the inferior and cliche, and become more and more boring. Why? In the first volume, the topsy-turvy scenes are exactly what the protagonist feels when he first enters the dream state. As fate comes together, spending a lifetime with Qingqing is also moving enough. In the remaining volumes, the protagonist should have realized that the dream is not just a dream. He is still there doing weird things and acting recklessly every day. He clearly has no pursuit or respect for martial arts. The author insists that he is invincible. What's the point?

I also hope that the author can write more relaxedly ~ the depth is actually not suitable for the current starting point environment (the author is really talented in writing 🙂), especially fans who were attracted by the relaxed style in the early stage, Wanding blessings

The more Tianlong looks at it, the more he dislikes it. The previous works are obviously so good. Alas, it is a masterpiece in the early stage. I don't know what the later stage is. But this late stage has come too early. It hasn't been put on the shelves yet.

When I caught up with the latest chapter, I felt like I couldn't understand what the author wanted to write. Each copy ended inexplicably, and I couldn't see the excitement at all. If the real world is the focus, there were too few pens. In short, there are too many ideas and the writing is too bad.

Two consecutive worlds came to a standstill and ended without explaining anything. Author, you should have said this if you came down to the world and wrote like this.

It feels a little different from the original one. Xiao Li's Flying Knife and the first dream are both very good. I personally feel that the protagonist in the latest dreams is a mentally ill person to tell the story. There should be a difference between being insane and having an epilepsy, right?

The first story is very good, the second story is average, the third story is incomprehensible, and the protagonist is completely missing.

The biggest problem with the Tianlong chapter is that you want it and want it at the same time. Since you have traveled 20 years in advance, how can your influence keep the plot 20 years later from the original general framework of Tianlong? There are too many plot holes, and the whole dumpling is made just for the sake of that dish of vinegar. The key is that vinegar does not taste good. Make good use of your dream setting, okay? The protagonist is already dreaming. It doesn't matter if his character changes, and it doesn't matter if his form changes. It's totally up to you to write whatever you want. For example, the protagonist turns into a dog and has a purpose of gaining fame. Although this purpose is very vulgar and boring, there is something to write about hanging out with dogs.

The protagonist's personality changes greatly in different dreams, from the deathly indifference to the current childishness and imbecility. It is difficult to say that this is the author's shaping of the character. I prefer this separated writing method to facilitate writing and save brain cells.

To be honest, Xiao Li's flying knife scene at the beginning was quite awesome. But what happens next? Don't want to write anymore? It's inexplicable that I did it well at the beginning, but then just skipped it later. Although there is no need to describe it in too much detail, it is too anticlimactic. And what's going on with the author? Why do we have to engage in red thinking? Where did the red ideological soil come from in that situation in ancient times? And to be honest, it felt so stiff when I started doing this. You won't be like this again in the future, right? That's too embarrassing. To be honest, I saw someone in the late Qing Dynasty saying at the beginning that they wanted to kill the Japanese and the Qing Dynasty. I don't want to watch it. It's not that you can't do it, it's just that it's too sudden.                                                                                                                                    but also the feeling of the protagonist in the early stage and the current protagonist in the later chapters are completely different. There's still a bit of an otherworldly feel up front. The rest is just vulgar.

Giving the Forbidden Army ten times more food is a waste of time. In ancient times, we couldn't afford this food. We all know that eating meat makes you strong. The problem is where the meat is. The quality has plummeted since the first story.

The first and second dreams are interesting (The Scimitar of the Full Moon and Xiao Li's Flying Knife), but the rest of the Demi-Gods and Dragons series are not that good (I haven't watched them either).

Not even in my dreams would I be able to imagine this kind of content🤣

It's so embarrassing, but it's okay for a while, but it's endless, and I'm a bunch of people who've given it back.

Does the author have a misunderstanding about Cthulhu, thinking that readers like to read A completely incomprehensible world view, most readers do not understand it, and readers who understand it do not like it When copies of Cthulhu started in the late Qing Dynasty, subscriptions to this book must have crashed, and the eunuch is not far away

What was the last thing you wrote? Where did the jump come from? Original fantasy and then fan fiction, fan fiction jumped to original fantasy, right? If I had known better, I wouldn't have pursued it, I was disgusted enough

More suitable for the 99 stream. The author's imagination is that the plot will cut back and forth after a while. It is more suitable to change the world quickly.

From the first book I read, what attracted me the most was Space Contract, which is more humane. Although I started to go crazy later on, I still felt that it was still a novel above the passing line. The wrong setting of the second book has supported countless authors (Fog) 😜 Unfortunately, I didn't grasp it. I started to get sick in the middle of writing, which can only be described as sick. I was reluctant to kill my own character (Hua), and then mistakenly killed the Mirror Stone Demon. (No matter what the author thought, these are two poisonous points in the readers' eyes. I gave up on the stone. I guess there are many people like me). This book is good so far. Although I have expected the ending since the protagonist planted the tree, it also has a sense of narration. My favorite part of this book is the part where the lotus lantern gods descend to the earth. It is a bit inhuman (like this comic). The story of the gods turning into mortals is very interesting. After three books, I can see that the author is growing, and he can control the direction of the plot. The ending is not so hasty, and everything falls into place. My advice to the author is not to rush the plot too much. The author can write red but don't do it all at once🐶. The protagonist can serve as a guide, leaving a little seed and letting it sprout slowly. I hope the author will surprise me with his next book.

This force is too much to bully the world of Harry Potter. You should go to the world of The 7 Deadly Sins, Fairy Tail, Clover, and the one-punch wizard Matthew. The difficulty now is to encounter a world that can enter the universe. The protagonist's biggest weakness is his lifespan. In some worlds, he can be exiled until death.

The previous fic is still interesting, especially the first dream, which is very flavorful.

The first part is really good, until Zhuangzi's dream, the overall impression is still very good, but there is supposed to be a plot at the end, but the next chapter suddenly becomes the Dark Knight, and the writing style changes drastically, and the protagonist starts to suck later, which is very boring.

As for the new book, it's seamlessly connected! Not every book has a perfect ending. You have to make progress. The next book will definitely do it.

It feels like the author started to reflect after the terrible results in the Gough City chapter, and now the results of the Desert Dream chapter have improved.