The Laws of the Divine Path

Have you ever been a Shinto priest? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

Come on, Stone Old Demon's stories are all good. Don't learn from those mindless articles that pretend to be more than slap in the face, the starting point is the same. This old bookworm is so disgusting.

At the 16th chapter of this book, the story is too scattered and the characters come out very randomly. The protagonist is invisible

First, the pace is too slow. I've read Chapter 17 and still don't understand what the protagonist is doing. I can see from these words that you really want to set the stage, but at the moment, I don't have any intention. When I read on, the pace is too slow and not compact enough. Second, the story description is too scattered. Often when describing one thing, it suddenly switches to describing another thing, which is often your case. Before you finish describing something, you turn to describe other things, which makes people confused. Of course there is this way of writing, but it is not written like this. Your span is too big, and you are not talking about you. I have seen this chapter 17. I have seen it many times. You use this way of writing. This way of writing is often used to describe a big event before turning to description, and the other is to pave the way for this big event. In order to describe this big event, set him up or pave the way for him, or give him some other things, instead of you not paving the way for the big event, it is completely two things, or you may pave the way for the following chapters, but if you write it like this, it will make people have no desire to read, and there will be no more things to come. It's very, very good, but it may be a problem with your combination. It looks a bit uncomfortable Of course there are good things, that is, your setting is really good, and the world view is probably okay. Although I don't know some advanced routes at the moment, I can probably tell that it is indeed a setting that you have worked hard to think about or you bought the setting. But it is undeniable that your setting is very good. If you write it well, it will become popular.

I've read more than a dozen chapters, but I still can't figure out what the main plot is. It's boring.

The protagonist has always had little strength, and looks vacuous

I've read more than ten chapters and the cheats haven't come out yet.

I feel like if this author doesn't publish thirty or forty chapters, he might become famous again like Qian Jibaan.

Eunuch again? There isn't even a single chapter this time?

There are so many chapters. I don't know what to write. The protagonist is always in a passive state. I wrote earlier that the protagonist is awesome. He is the first person to graduate and has amazing grades in all subjects. As a result, things become more and more serious later. The protagonist can only be passively beaten, and he can't even find his natal god.