No Abstract Nonsense, No Immortal Cultivation

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When you first meet Taoist Lan, you are impressed by his firm will. This is the highlight of this character so far. Then, the moment you become Taoist Lan's apprentice, you immediately become completely different. How can I put it, the contrast is too big, which makes people wonder if he was just faking it before. Then, after becoming Zi Su, he was too attentive to Taoist Lan. This is even more different from the way he met Lan Beard at the beginning. Finally, after entering the Qinghua sect, he completely reduced himself to a role like a clown. First, the protagonist works hard to practice basic swordsmanship, but Zisu doesn't like it. Judging from the updated content, when he first started cultivating immortals, he would practice the worst skills, but he did not study the Qinghua sect's skills. Secondly, when you meet a beautiful woman, you lose the intention to practice. Did your experience as a monk bring no use at all? If he were still a monk, wouldn't he be unable to bear the precepts? Third, I rejected Zi Yan today. I almost laughed. I said that I don't want to become a dead immortal, but everything so far has confirmed that I am a dead immortal. I can't face myself yet. This seems to be worse than Zi Yan, because although Zi Yan is a dead immortal, after describing it, it shows that Zi Yan understands what she wants, faces her own shortcomings, and admits her weakness, so she indulges in it. So for the character Zisu, the character design was not established at the beginning. The more I wrote, the more it fell apart. It's a real person🤡🤡

It was pretty good-looking at first, and Longhu was also very emotional, but suddenly he became obsessed with saving the world. Do you want the red light to shine in the world of immortality?

The writing style is natural, but this article is more like a travel note at the moment. It records the protagonist's enlightenment experience while practicing with his master, but the theme is not revealed. Impatient readers may not be able to adapt to it, as the plot progress of the previous works is quite fast.

Very good. The author's ideas in the first two books were good, but he failed in the later period. I hope this book will not make the same mistake again.

I feel like someone has changed. It seemed quite comfortable before it was put on the shelves, but later it felt like it was falling into a cliché.

It's like reading a didactic book, too many explanations, not my cup of tea. Wouldn't it be better to be more relaxed like before? I had a long discussion with a temple Zhu 🤔

On a 10-point scale, there may be 8 points before going up the mountain, 7 points for practicing in the mountain, and only 4 points for the descent.

Like the first half of Lan Ke and the two books by Golden Jasmine, this type of immortality writing is still in the blue ocean. The only problem is that it requires too much writing skills. After a brief look, I feel that this is the same path, plus some additional work. But it seems that some details are still lacking. It gives me the feeling that the characters are living for the sake of living, and they are deliberately abstract for the sake of abstraction. I am not good at explaining the details, which is the awkward feeling. In addition, you can save some money by borrowing some truths told by the characters in the book. If this book is more story-oriented, some settings can actually be blurred. It is simple to directly tell the settings through other people's mouths, but it is too naive and it will go down. Sometimes the atmosphere created can be easily destroyed.

I have been in Wenqing, and I have been talking about truth. Except for the abstraction of the name above, I have not seen any other abstractions.