Back from the Dead, Roaming the Madmen's Martial World

There are three turning points in Shi Lao Mo's life. The first is when he meets Hua Xiaomei and is full of yearning for the Jianghu hero. The second is when Yuan Jiuchong lives together for two years and begins to have his own thoughts. This Jianghu is not what he wants. The most exciting moments in the process include: the Sun Moon Sect Shuangdian brothers first tried their magic skills; the cats in the villa were killed; the heart of Hua Erlang's sword became clear; the decisive battle between Yuan Jiuchong and Hua Lao Mo; the Fan brothers preached and produced the fake old demon; Shi Lao Mo fought against the true essence warrior of the demon sect;

The great erroneous path-breaker returns to his loyal subject

The great erroneous path-breaker returns to his loyal subject

Reminds me of this paragraph in the comic. I practice the exercises and make patches. I wonder if the author has read it

In The Death of Scarlet Rouge, the author's treatment of the protagonist is too poor, and the final effect only appears hypocritical (protagonist) It's okay for the female supporting character to die, as long as it serves the plot, but I feel that the author's current Death of Scarlet Rouge does not achieve the arc that this character should have (and In terms of the previous foreshadowing), it did not promote the real growth of the protagonist (the author has a lot of troubles in his heart, but the sense he brought to the readers, at least for me), but caused problems with the protagonist's character image and logic Sigh... For more details, I will wait until I have time during the day.

The first life ended too hastily, and it felt like a deus ex machina. From the second life, it broke away from the main plot of the beginning, and it felt like it was forced to do the second life purely for the sake of changing the map The plot also changed from changing the world at the beginning to a sermon mixed with personal things. I wanted to write about the red revolution, but I couldn't write it too obviously, and the author's political views were divorced from reality, and it was too dramatic.

The writing of Epilepsy is so frustrating. I know the author wants to tell a good story, but it's really hard to have the patience to read it.

When I read the title, I thought it was a gangster like Hai Hu. After looking at the first city and passing villages, it turned out to be Black Africa under the control of the six French Immortal Sects in the Tongliao Universe. The first city was obviously Burkina Faso, and the story of the city lord Blaise Compaoré rebelling and surrendering to kill Thomas Sankara.

After catching up on the update, I ran to read the author's previous book and found the same problem. The plot of the story began to serve the author's self-expression of reality. The logic of the story and characters began to become confusing (note that it was contrary to normal logic rather than illogical). The narrative was fragmented and it was difficult for readers to find an angle to bring it in.

Is the protagonist so useless? Always involved in things beyond his capabilities, he was beaten up and turned into a camera