Back from the Dead, Roaming the Madmen's Martial World

Shi Laomo's life had three turning points. The first was meeting Hua Xiaomei, which sparked his longing for the chivalrous world of martial arts. The second is that after living with Yuan Jiuzhong for two years, he began to have his own thoughts, realizing that this martial arts world was not the one he wanted.

The great pioneer of the Misguided Path returned to his loyal subject matter.

The great pioneer of the Misguided Path returned to his loyal subject matter.

I'm reminded of this scene in the comic: the cultivation technique involves patching up the techniques again and again. I wonder if the author ever saw it.

The author handled the death of Fei Yanzhi and the protagonist's situation very poorly, ultimately making the protagonist appear hypocritical. The death of the female supporting character is fine, as long as it serves the plot. However, I feel that the author's portrayal of Fei Yanzhi's death doesn't achieve the necessary arc for the character (compared to the preceding developments), nor does it…

The first life ended too abruptly, feeling like a deus ex machina. From the second life onwards, it deviated from the initial main storyline, feeling like the second life was forced simply to change the map. The plot also went from changing the world at the beginning to a didacticism mixed with personal opinions. It wanted to write about the red revolution but couldn't write it too obviously. Moreover, the author's political views were out of touch with reality, making it too jarring to watch.

I know the author wanted to tell a good story, but it's really hard to have the patience to keep reading. This writer's work is so frustrating.

Judging from the title, I thought it was about some crazy guy like Haihu. But after reading the first city and the village I passed through, I realized it was about sub-Saharan Africa, controlled by the six major French Immortal Sects of the Tongliao Universe. The first city was clearly Burkina Faso, and it was the story of the city lord, Bress Compaoré, betraying and surrendering to kill Thomas Sankara.

After finishing the latest update, I went to read the author's previous book and found the same problem: the plot began to serve the author's self-expression of reality, the logic of the story and characters became chaotic (note that this is a reversal of normal logic, not a complete lack of logic), the narrative became fragmented, and it was difficult for readers to find a perspective to engage with the story.

Is the protagonist really that useless? He always gets involved in things beyond his capabilities and gets utterly humiliated, becoming nothing more than a cameraman.