System? I Don't Have One!

I read dozens of chapters and always felt that something was wrong. Later I found out that there was no main line in this book. The protagonist is an old man who has been around for several weeks, which means that he has extremely strong strength and has lost the main line of becoming stronger. Now the author writes that the protagonist has been liberating the oppressed people. This is good, but there is a problem. The liberation of the protagonist is passive. Someone is always looking for trouble or provoking the protagonist, and the protagonist beats or kills him. , And then went to rescue other people without any initiative at all. This raises another question: what does the protagonist do all day? Since it is a spiritual martial arts, the protagonist talks about being firm in his heart, but he has no substantial initiative to save the people, and the protagonist Are you making dumplings all day? Otherwise, I don't see the protagonist having anything to do, so I suggest the author clarify the main plot of the book. If it is about becoming stronger, then write it clearly. If it is about liberation, then improve the protagonist's initiative, so that he does not have to wait for the enemy to come.

The setting of spiritual martial arts and technological martial arts is a bit interesting, but after reading about 20 chapters, the protagonist can travel through many worlds, why come? Why the investment in capital was not mentioned and the background was not explained clearly?

I hope this won't be a eunuch, and it won't end in a hurry like a dream of ten thousand years.

The author, your thinking is based on dialectical materialism, and there is no way to integrate it into this idealistic world view. In other words, you are writing a novel. The core can be thoughts, but the form of expression is a story, that is, a plot. You are imagining a world in a world that you are completely unfamiliar with. The story itself is fictitious. I know you have a story in your heart. It is better to imitate reality and completely rewrite it. This will make you feel better. I can also understand what you wrote. You are too emotional and affect rational thinking. This is contrary to what you wrote. Maybe I am not right! Just a few words!

If there is no, there will be no. Why are you so cruel?😢

Looking at it so far, I feel good, but there are too few words and it feels a bit watery.

Did the author use AI code? It looks so weird😒

Gan, let me tell you who wrote it with such feeling. It turns out to be you!

It conforms to the setting of Gaowu in my mind Ideal martial arts, will trumps everything Nowadays, some writing about Gaowu is purely formulaic It is no different from the levels in the game, and there is no feeling of winning.

It's fine if you haven't signed a contract, and you dare to write, but Huwei has written once, and it doesn't seem so shocking anymore.