The Unorthodox Way of Ten Thousand Laws, I Am the Spirit Sovereign

"Spirit Lord" (Thief) 8. Dantu 7. Alchemist 6. Daoist Medicine 5. The Taoist of Longevity 4 True Lords of Food 3. True Immortal of Creation (0) 2. The Immortal Lord of All Laws and Karmas (Wanye, Huanshen, Duobao, Changsheng, Tianxing, Jinjie, Wangchuan, Wanzhou, Gushen, Dushen, Jincan, Hongluan, Fulushou) 1. Dao Lord Lord of the Curtain (Director) 8. A person of low social standing

If this book still isn't well-written, let's go back to the Mystic Witch system. Then we can just write a new protagonist who grows the sun (the cheat code is to make the First Flame Forge an old man, since the Forge hasn't recovered or been rebuilt yet. The side effect is that it keeps pushing him to make high-intensity sacrifices). This cheat code is both useful and satisfying.

It's a pity about the novel *The Legend of Immortality*; the beginning was really well-written. Author, if you really want to make a living as a writer, either stay in your comfort zone and write Western fantasy novels to earn money from Western fantasy fans, or if you want to write a bizarre cultivation novel like *The Legend of Immortality*, first solidify the foundation of the later parts of…

Merit points are highly valuable when earned through hard work, but worthless when spent. The protagonist, who contributed the most, received over 400 merit points. Even this first instance was considered a high-value dungeon. In this system, failing to complete the mission results in execution, with a very high probability of being killed by the enemy and very little merit gain.

Can't you just write Western fantasy? You're really not suited for fantasy; why force yourself to stick to your weaknesses? You're losing all your readers like this! Try to build up your reputation! Stay in your comfort zone for a while.

I dropped the game after seeing the scene where the mechanical maid was pounced on. Is the author really that desperate for women in real life? I'm starving for them! And the writing gets increasingly amateurish towards the end.

Having read several of this author's books, I can only comment that they started strong but ended weakly. Doesn't the author know what readers want? The early chapters had such a brilliant world-building and intriguing system; readers were drawn to these elements, which is why the author is so popular. But later on, it just... Becomes padded, nonsensical, and completely lacks focus. It's such a shame, such a pity.

I've read several of Zhen Yu's books. I think I first read *The Mysterious Witch* in middle school 😂, and I just finished my second reading a few days ago. It's truly a great Western fantasy novel. Although everyone says it had a bad ending, I don't really think so. It just ended too abruptly, feeling abrupt and not quite fitting with the grand world-building and solid groundwork laid earlier.

This author's lack of ability is all luck. A well-written novel like "Chang Sheng" could easily have made him a top author. He clearly had a good premise, world-building, and theme in the early stages, but by the middle, it became "The people here are suffering, I need to fight to save the world and level up incidentally," and he just kept repeating this without a break. The world-building and everything else remained stagnant and undeveloped.

Old Fish's world-building and character development are simply unparalleled, as evidenced by his first two books. His world-building is both novel and well-developed, with a variety of imaginative and captivating ideas. While his first book, *The Mysterious Witch*, drew upon existing elements, his second book is a significant creation of his own, even more enchanting than the first.