Starting a Folk Horror Game with the Filthy Organ Technique

Although the battle is not as exciting as Gu Huo Niao, the writing is still very good, coupled with folk customs, serious fairy grass, and five updates a day, it is generally a god, not to mention the writing is quite good, can you give me the highlights? I haven't posted the highlights yet

I have read a book about high-scoring eunuchs before. The title of the book is Lay Lord. Judging from the introduction, the genre is similar. It is not the same author.

The setting is good and the story is good, but there are a lot of typos and bad sentences. I hope the author can pay attention to them.

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Lay Lord + Gu Huoniao The feeling of perfect stitching Xiancao

I hope to finish the book. It's great. The setting of this book can be said to be a comprehensive evolution based on the lay master. Unlimited flow + folk customs. Very novel Now I have seen the end of the Northeast chapter and commented. I have done it myself. The ability to unlock and develop is more flexible than the lay master's setting. At the same time, it transcends the limitations of word games and enters the game personally. At the same time, it grasps the temperament and culture of this folk custom. It feels like a setting where one is better than the other. However, my personal preference is that the protagonist is too hooked. A picture book that can simply be analyzed and recognized is enough for imba. The rewards are directly settled on the spot. I feel that the strength of the protagonist is not on the same level as other players. I hope that I don't have to rely on this routine of settling on the spot and just solving the crisis.

A new book has been released, so at least let us know 📢 that "The Ancestors' Inheritance from the Wild West" was definitely written by you, the IP address is Fujian, and even the format of the book is exactly the same.

The setting of the lay master is really strong. It has been my favorite practice setting in the novels I have read for so many years. It is a pity that the author was reincarnated in the Ming Dynasty and went to the Ministry of Ceremonies as an admiral. I hope the author can carry forward this setting.

I have rarely seen a complete version of the book about lay masters.

Just for reference, I can't list more detailed abilities, so I'll just give you an overview

It looks interesting, but the author likes to narrate flashbacks, which makes me speechless. He suddenly says, "A few days ago," and it's very erratic.

When I saw this, I suddenly became stupid. The plot was so stiff and boring. In order to allow men and women to interact, I wrote a tough man who was turned upside down when he disagreed with me. He was so hesitant. Ha, did the teammate go offline and let the female protagonist come to save him? Moreover, the author seems to have become very fond of half-hearted stories, and also likes to use flashbacks~ This is exempt from the upper limit, but you still have to be careful.

It's like the secular master, but it's a pity that the secular master is a eunuch. You have to keep writing, I will keep chasing.

The writing is a bit messy, the system is not very understandable, the protagonist's combat power is too low, and the scenes he participates in are large, but the writing is good, and the plot is good. It's worth watching. It's best to feel good when you change it.

Indeed, the rhythm of the story is very good in all aspects, and the plot is accurately grasped, but there are some small errors in logic, which may be intentional by the author. So many players have gained such strong abilities in the different world, and they have all kinds of personalities. After reading two to three hundred chapters, there is not one. The real world is not chaotic at all. Although it can be attributed to the public security, there are so many people with different personalities. It feels a bit unreasonable. I strongly urge the author to make two more real-world script tasks to enrich the content.

Then why not just load it with thermal weapons, Sniper Cloud Finger, Fighter Soaring Step, Armored Indestructible Body, Electromagnetic Thunder Cannon Fist, and Rocket Explosion Palm. Satellite eye. The true vitality of nuclear weapons.

Such a good book is not popular at all? Personally, I feel that the author's classification is in the wrong place.

Sewing two eunuchs? Gather the power of two eunuchs...

Is there a female protagonist? Does the emotional line drag down the main narrative line? The book I read before was good at the beginning. As soon as the second heroine appeared, the character and image of the protagonist changed immediately, and the main plot was obviously delayed. It felt so awkward. I wanted to change my taste. How about this book?

There are no school belles, childhood sweethearts, female police officers, female store managers, landladies, or female CEOs.

Most of the secular mainstream schools and Guhuoniao schools have learned eunuch habits together. Let's see what this book says.

The creativity is quite attractive, but based on the dozens of chapters I have read so far, there are many irregularities in the writing, making it very difficult to read. Hope there will be changes later.

This book is not written as an online game. If it is written as a stand-alone game, it would be like fairy grass. There are too many supporting characters and it is boring.

Halfway through the book, the protagonist already has an output terminal. He relies on himself to provide his own legendary image, and then gives himself approval, and relies on incense to realize a universal wishing machine (it needs to be improved, the current legendary image is still limited to slaying demons) There is also a universal operating end, which is (basically unlimited) gas-operated incense. I think this thing is terrifyingly powerful Now there is also a very weak starting end, which relies on small equipment, solid lines of sick energy and other infinite small miscellaneous energy to transfer luck, but it is very efficient. Low, we need a more efficient perpetual motion machine or pseudo-perpetual motion machine Theoretically, as long as a boss curses the protagonist and always gives negative luck to the protagonist, the protagonist can directly move forever and be invincible, create incense from the void, and then rely on the incense to make wishes. , Directly incarnate as God By the way, the transition of the protagonist in the early stage is also very good. The severely injured and residual blood kill of Yama Luodian is also a very strong mechanical card, and there is no entry limit. It is an instant kill with residual blood, which has a feeling of a heaven-defying primary mechanism.

Brothers, if you have any folklore stories, small character ideas, or set of skills and props, please discuss them in this building🌚. If you come across any useful ones, I will adopt them and add updates as appropriate.

The quality of this book is high enough. It shouldn't be popular if it is not popular. Is it almost promoted?

First. Si Jian Tianjun, the civil and military authority in the direction of the court. B. Zhenzhuan Celestial Master, Taoist Alchemy Technique. C. Universally illuminating the true Buddha, the orthodox Buddhist teachings. Ding. Samurai Buddha, Tibetan partial Buddha. E. The old master of customary rituals, the protagonist of the temple system. Already. Baiyi is in charge of command, and Zaolu is in charge of folk art. Gen. I ordered you to honor your lord and use military skills to defeat him. Xin. The temple system of craftsmen makes things by hand. Ren. The palm of your hand is full of witches, and you can use the magic of lowering your head. Gui. The plague fairy comes out and the Lingtan fairy descends.

Some places have to pretend to do it and write it in Cantonese, which looks very uncomfortable.

After reading the first few dozen chapters, the content is ok, but the choice of words and sentences is a bit awkward, and there are frequent typos. I wonder if it will be better in the future.

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